
Reviews For Goodbye, Iowa
Reviewer: Rose Anonymous
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Date: 07/25/2010 - 11:37 pm Title: Chapter 2

Date: 07/25/2010 - 11:37 pm Title: Chapter 2
Are you still with us here?
Author's Response: I am but I read mostly, and lately I haven't had time even for this.
Reviewer: jean Anonymous
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Date: 10/21/2009 - 10:45 pm Title: Chapter 1

Date: 10/21/2009 - 10:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hi-I could understand easily what you were saying. I have friends who come from a couple of different countries. They are getting much better, but started out the same. You should probably get a beta or you may not get many readers. I do like the story and wish you luck.
Author's Response: Thanks, I'll try to fix everything
Reviewer: Jake Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/21/2009 - 09:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
Date: 10/21/2009 - 09:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
Please get a beta and adjust the formatting. Other than that I would like to read it once those issues are finished. I will admit to not actually reading it due to those issues.