I think its time for Amy to be turned into a rat hoping for it. I'm glad to see you using Tara and Willow it fit in beautifully. I can't wait to see where you take me next.

wow, what an intense chapter, but i absolutely loved it.

excellent chapter, loved it!

It's good to know Buffy isn't completely lost in the magic, I look forward to learning about the upcoming plan. Great chapter.

hmm, i wonder who that is, i like that spike and faith are working together to try and save buffy.

Way to go pscychoBuffy. Way to go. Kinda like the whole dark thing, let's-smash-and-destroy attitude she's got going (does that make me weird?). But living with Rack? That just spells trouble. Time to escalate and burn-burn-burn until theres nothing left, right?

Fun thing, this magic business. Do continue. :D

Ah Hank did magic too? That's why Buffy is so good with it I think.
They need luck when they want to get her out there. But Buffy has still feelings for Spike otherwise she wouldn't have been so hurt.
Looking forward to more. :)

uh oh, that's not good, i hope they can get to buffy before she does something she might regret. i like that faith was actually helpful in this chapter.

Haha, Harmony going bald. Funny. Reminded me of that movie with the witches doing that, I can't remember the title.

Anyway, kinda creeped me out, Rack being Amy's dad. And hello? Flashback of Dark!Willow there. Kinda foreboding. I see a dark future for Buffy. I love it!


Author's Response: "The Craft," guilty, I did kind of steal that part from the movie, it was hard to resist. Things will get a little dark in upcoming chapters, but Buffy won't be nearly as bad as Willow was. Thanks for reading=)

Kind funny how Faith is all worried about Buffy, but at the same time really know nothing about what Buffy is doing I get she doesn't know about the magic. But she doesn't know she quit cheerleading or about Amy & Micheal. She is all to focused on Spike which is the least of her problems being the Slayer u think she would hear about a powerful sorcerer being in town cause the way Amy & Micheal uses magic is bound to draw attention.

ah oh! What has young Buffy gotten her self into? Trouble is a foot. I cant wait to read more.

Uh oh...this is getting bad and Buffy is in WAY over her head here. I thought you'd have Ethan be the dad, but Rack is worse.*bites nails* Hopefully Spike can save her from becoming really dark like Willow did. I guess she wants to be special so much, she doesn't see how bad this is... Poor ,clueless Buffy.
And now we have Faith threatening to kill Spike too. :(

This story is really good,I like the Willow and Amy reference from the show , with the dancing and the floating on the ceiling.

More, more, more! Lovin' it!

Author's Response: Yep, she's pretty clueless right now, but she'll come to her senses soon enough. I was actually going to do Ethan, but like you said, Rack is worse and I thought he would work better, since I'm kind of revisiting the 6th season. Buffy won't get nearly as bad as Willow, though. Thanks for reading=)