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Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/29/2010 - 08:39 pm Title: Chapter 16

Brilliant adding Riley as a sympathetic character! I actually want him to find some love and happiness. What a bitch of a girlfriend to dump him because of his disability. I also love how Spike stormed out of dinner, because well, it's something he would have done. Really into this story and I can't wait to see what happens next. :-)

Author's Response: We'll learn a little more about Riley in the next chapter. Yes, Spike storming out is exactly what he would have done (unless he'd punched Ted) before the accident! LOL Thanks for letting me know you're enjoying the story.

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/29/2010 - 07:24 pm Title: Chapter 16

Enjoyed how Spike is still sticking with it, despite how difficult it is. I'm glad he was able to visit with Buffy, that will really lift his spirits and obviously something else!

Author's Response: Hee! Yes, but with Spike having a roomie, I doubt they'll be able to get up to much! LOL!

Reviewer: gopher101 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/29/2010 - 06:39 pm Title: Chapter 16

Poor Riley ,do not say that to often.

Funny Fred/ Spike converstation.

Author's Response: Hee. I'm not normally big with the Riley love! Glad you enjoyed Spike and Fred's interaction.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/29/2010 - 05:47 pm Title: Chapter 16

Well I don't see how helpful it is to let a blind man find this food on the plate and make a mess; would make more sense to me to teach them. They really do it the hard way there. But it's good to see that Spike is staying, knowing how important it is for him to learn.
But Spike forget to ask Fred about visits. ;)
Good they was an opportunity to visit after all.
People can be really thoughtless (like Ted and Cordelia here). I hope Riley will find that he can find happiness in life even if being blind.

Author's Response: This is at least six months after his accident so I think the facility would have expected him to have learned how to cope with eating by now. He has been pandered to by his mum and the cook which hasn't helped him. People are often very thoughtless. Riley needs someone special I think...

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/23/2010 - 08:00 pm Title: Chapter 15

Poor Spike, stuck in a room and blind with Riley! Their cannon relationship is so tumultuous, as is the portrayal in most fiction, so it will be interesting to see what happens when they come together without any of their history. Could be interesting to have them be friends. And what will happen when Buffy comes to visit?! Such potential! Update soon!

Author's Response: I do like writing AU so I can do more things to the characters. LOL!

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/23/2010 - 07:00 pm Title: Chapter 15

I'm glad, even in her own self-absorbed way, his mother agreed with him going. This will be a rough transition for Spike, but in the end will make him a stronger person. Thanks for the update.

Author's Response: Yes, perhaps the penny is finally dropping with Dru that she needs to let go? Thanks for taking the time to comment. :)

Reviewer: albie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/23/2010 - 03:13 pm Title: Chapter 15

Very impressed with the research (or just knowledge) of the facility presented here. It rings true and I'm glad that Spike made this decision for his life. I think it'll be really interesting to see how he adjusts and how it'll all affect him in the end

Author's Response: I'm delighted that things are seeming realistic. How will he cope with the place though...?

Reviewer: gopher101 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/23/2010 - 02:15 pm Title: Chapter 15

Well, I help you to get to #100, loved the update. I guess I was sort of right about Buffy being upset about not be able to see him, not him going away. Also love the way you worked Riley into the story.

Author's Response: You did indeed. Thank you. I hope you continue to enjoy the story.

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/23/2010 - 02:09 pm Title: Chapter 15

The dark unknown is very intimidating whether blind or with eyesight in the dark. Spike may feel alien in a new environment but his courage to face his fears despite his insecurities goes to show his determination to overcome obstacles. Look forward to more.

Author's Response: He will need all the determination he canmuster. Thanks for letting me know you're looking forward to the next chapter. :)

Reviewer: Sibb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/23/2010 - 02:08 pm Title: Chapter 15

This is a fascinating story on struggling with something that most of us will never understand. I keep hoping for a miracle cure but seeing Spike struggle and finally overcome his depression and sense of hopelessness is a much better story! Love this!

Author's Response: Thank you very much for saying that the story is fascinating. It is sort of weird to write at times. Like a pretty normal date would be dinner and a movie...but of course, not much point for Spike. :)

Reviewer: Jen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/23/2010 - 01:39 pm Title: Chapter 15

Another interesting chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks for letting me know :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/23/2010 - 01:32 pm Title: Chapter 15

98 :)
Ah treading waters, that's where the title came from.
Bad luck that Buffy was ill... gave Spike more time to pack. So Riley is Spike's roommate. No staying the night girlfriends allowed then, huh?
Nobody said it would be easy and as it sounds, it won't be. Will sure be tough.
Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: I did have treading water mentioned in chapter three dialogue too! LOL! How will Spike cope in such an environment?

Reviewer: Amaya Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/23/2010 - 01:24 pm Title: Chapter 15

Please update as soon as you can. I like the story very much.

Author's Response: Thank you for letting me know. :)

Reviewer: jen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2010 - 04:07 pm Title: Chapter 14

Good update! Can't wait to see how he does.

Author's Response: Thank you! :D

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2010 - 11:34 pm Title: Chapter 14

Started reading this story and it compelled me to keep reading to this chapter. Very insightful and touching with all the changes and challenges that Spike has to face. Buffy's character is confident and it compliments Spike stage in life where he has to deal with his loss. Look forward to more.

Author's Response: Delighted that you found the story and it kept you reading on. Thank you very much for the lovely comments.

Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2010 - 01:38 pm Title: Chapter 14

Spike has definitely has had his ups and downs in the this chapter. I would probably have reacted just like him after that incident in the comic book store, but it was great that instead of completely shutting down, he's going to make an effort to take his life back. :-)

Author's Response: You're not wrong about the rollercoaster of emotions Spike had in this chapter. For the first time unprompted, he is trying to improve his lifestyle.

Reviewer: Behind Blue Eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2010 - 12:55 pm Title: Chapter 14

I'm glad that Spike is trying to be more independent, but in saying this, I think Buffy was slightly thoughtless when she just left him in her apartment without showing him around more thoroughly. Enjoyed the update.

Author's Response: Buffy was a bit thoughtless, but in a way it's good as it shows she doesn't pity him and think he's useless. Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: Amaya Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2010 - 10:50 am Title: Chapter 14

I liked the chapter and I would like to read more of this story, so please update as soon as you can.

Author's Response: More up today!

Reviewer: jamies_lady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2010 - 10:36 am Title: Chapter 14

great chapter..have you got experience with aquiring a disability because you are handling this so well.....
loved it

Author's Response: Thank you very much. Delighted to see that you're reading. I haven't really any experience though I was friends years ago with a guy who ended up in a wheelchair and so knew from him what frustrated him the most etc (used that in A Loss of Pride) I'm just putting myself in the situation and thinking what would affect me, and pleased that it is ringing true.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2010 - 06:19 am Title: Chapter 14

Sadly (or gladly?) Spike noticed that he can't do the simplest things alone. It's good that he'll get training now, it will help him to be independent. As long as he doesn't get back into his shell.... the customer at the shop did really spook him.

Author's Response: He does need help to realise that he isn't quite as useless as he thinks he is.

Reviewer: m_evans Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2010 - 02:13 am Title: Chapter 14

Thanks for sharing! I really like how well you've balanced Spike being frustrated with his condition, with him making steps towards learning to live with it. It's the right amount of push and pull. I'm really enjoying this story :) .

Author's Response: Thank you very much for letting me know you're enjoying the story. I appreciate it.

Reviewer: gopher101 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2010 - 01:46 am Title: Chapter 14

Giles can take care of Dru, and I think Buffy will be somewhat okay with it. Just not happy about spending time away from him.

Author's Response: You're right on all counts! :D

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2010 - 01:08 am Title: Chapter 14

Poor Spike, but better late than never with trying to adapt. Buffy will likely be proud and Dru won't even know what to do with herself. I imagine she'll handle that better than finding out that he's having girls over. :) Glad to see him progressing. His strife is so well captured. Update soon!

Author's Response: Yes, he has to try to take some control over his own life now. You're not wrong about Dru coping more with him going away than with knowing he has a girlfriend! :D Thank you for saying I've done a good job.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/11/2010 - 12:52 am Title: Chapter 13

"but what he didn’t know was that she felt safer in his arms than she had in any others." -- Yeah, he's the one. Love how hard she tries to make him feel comfortable. Awesome chapter. Update soon.


Author's Response: Thank you very much. :)

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/08/2010 - 10:48 pm Title: Chapter 13

very sweet. thanks for the update

Author's Response: Thank you :D

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