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Reviewer: sue Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/19/2010 - 04:28 pm Title: Stripped

Excellent!

Author's Response: Thankyou :)

Reviewer: Amaya Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/19/2010 - 01:48 pm Title: Stripped

I liked the chapter and I would like to read more. Please try to update more often.

Author's Response: I do my best, but I'm very busy...For example I'm going to V festival tomorrow and won't have access to anything until Monday, so no updates til mid next week at earliest!

Reviewer: SpikesGirl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/11/2010 - 11:27 pm Title: Escape

Wow. That was intense. Buffy tried her hardest to get away but of course Spike couldn't have that. Hmmm.. I wonder where this chapter is leading. Very interesting. Can't wait to see what happens next. Love this story. Very original indeed.

Author's Response: Thankyou so much, updates may be sporadic from now on because of personal reasons, but I've got the next few written they just need editing when I get to them :)

Reviewer: albie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/07/2010 - 02:19 pm Title: Escape

That was a really great action sequence, you really had it down. I'm glad that, despite Buffy seeing some humanity in Spike, she is still fighting back and fighting to be free. I like her constantly thinking of a way out. I look forward to what happens next!

Author's Response: Thankyou very much! I think of myself as lacking in the action writing genre so the fact that I pulled off that scene no matter how short is a great compliment to me! And thankyou for the compliment about this Buffy, I'm trying to show the conflict, (which will just get more and more pronounced) between her growing complicated feelings for Spike and her baser needs for escape and freedom :)

Reviewer: Behind Blue Eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/06/2010 - 06:58 pm Title: Escape

Great chapter, loved the struggling between them, especially the mud scene. The only thing which stumped me a little was the vase with fresh lillies in Spike's bathroom, he doesn't seem like a fresh flower type of guy, but otherwise really enjoyed.

Author's Response: Glad you picked up on this...the reason will come up later on in the story...quite a bit later on tho...

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/05/2010 - 02:43 pm Title: Escape

And there I'd thought Buffy would make it, to escape. No such luck.
Hopefully things won't get too bad now.

Author's Response: Time will tell...thanx for reading! :)

Reviewer: Amaya Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/05/2010 - 04:33 am Title: Escape

Please update as soon as you can, because I like the story and I would like to read more of it.

Author's Response: I'll try my hardest to update quickly!

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/05/2010 - 02:10 am Title: Escape

Whoa! Making her strip off her clothes takes away most of her options for escape plus humiliate and terrify her all at once! Spike is angry and who knows where things go from here.

Author's Response: Originally I didn't have the Chapter ending there, now its seems like thats the only place I could end it, because it puts the reader in the exact same place Buffy is, wondering what his intentions are...

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/05/2010 - 01:23 am Title: Escape

And I am soo looking forward to what happens next! Nudity never goes quietly with those two. Awesome.

Author's Response: Thankyou so much, hopefully I'll ahve time to edit the next Chapter very soon!

Author's Response: *have - excuse my sloppy typing skills I've only just woken up!

Reviewer: Blue Eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2010 - 05:49 pm Title: Hostage

Very interesting; looking forward to more can only hope Angel doesn't see her again.

Author's Response: Thankyou for reading! As for Angel, you'll have to wait and see!

Reviewer: SpikesGirl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2010 - 02:35 pm Title: Hostage

Really great introduction into everything. i like where this is going. look forward to your next chapter.

Author's Response: Thankyou!

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2010 - 12:41 pm Title: Hostage

Enjoyed the chapter, and congrats on your graduation

Author's Response: Thankyou very much! :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2010 - 06:34 am Title: Hostage

Not many options for Spike after he killed Buffy now. I wonder what she'll do.
(BTW I don't make graphics but I've heard of GIMP being recommended, it's free.)

Author's Response: Thats what I'm using actually (because its free lol) its an alright program just a bit annoying, I used to have a copy of photoshop but when my old computer crashed I lost it and couldn't remember where I got the copy from, can't afford to buy it...so its not that gimp is bad I guess, just a lot harder to use and a lot more limted so its frustrating me lol, but thanx for the advice!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/16/2010 - 05:35 pm Title: Getaway

You made me curious about this one; looking forward where this story will lead.

Author's Response: Thankyou, hope you carry on reading it! :)

Reviewer: Ellie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/16/2010 - 04:00 pm Title: Getaway

love it!!!! Please continue

Author's Response: Thankyou, I will don't worry!

Reviewer: Amaya Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/16/2010 - 08:54 am Title: Getaway

Please update as soon as you can.

Author's Response: I'm setting aside the next hour or two to edit and update :)

Reviewer: iris Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/16/2010 - 08:51 am Title: Getaway

Very good....please keep her classy and smart. This is a great character for Spike. Thanks!

Author's Response: I will try my best, but she may get desperate as the story goes on! I absolute LOVE writing this Spike so thanks for the comment!

Reviewer: Beans Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/16/2010 - 04:17 am Title: Getaway

Good start, looking forward to reading more :)

Author's Response: Thankyou!

Reviewer: sue Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/16/2010 - 02:40 am Title: Getaway

Potential! Potential!

Author's Response: Thankyou!

Reviewer: gopher101 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/16/2010 - 01:44 am Title: Getaway

Wow great start and I know what you mean about the hotage stories.

Author's Response: Its strange, I don't know if I've read many finished ones, I hope its not a curse of the genre, because I plan to finish this, and finish it as enthusiastically as I've started!

Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/15/2010 - 08:14 pm Title: Getaway

Definitely into this story. I knew I should have waited until at least 5 chapters were posted because it will be hard to wait for updates, but somehow I'll survive! But seriously, definitely has me intrigued and coming back for more. :-)

Author's Response: Thankyou! I know most people hate it (and yes as a reader I hate it too), I was planning to wait til I had almost completed it, but I just couldn't wait anymore, and I like the feedback whilst I'm writing... I've written a really detailed plan though, so hopefully chapters won't be too hard to write...

Reviewer: SpikesGirl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/15/2010 - 08:11 pm Title: Getaway

I really like your story. Very original. Never read one quite like it. can't wait to see how it ends up. Thanks for posting.

Author's Response: Thankyou, thats a lovely thing to hear! :)

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/15/2010 - 06:37 pm Title: Getaway

Really enjoyed, anticipating the next chapter.

Author's Response: It will be up very soon!

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