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Date: 07/12/2014 - 08:44 am Title: Chapter 7

I love, love, love this

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Date: 06/19/2011 - 06:07 pm Title: Chapter 7

I liked the way you ended the story. Thanks for posting :)

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Date: 06/19/2011 - 12:35 pm Title: Chapter 7

I loved this story. So very original.

Reviewer: loveless Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/18/2011 - 12:51 pm Title: Chapter 7

i definitely like. it was a wonderful shot of various dimensions showing different stories. the original will always be my favourite though ;)

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/13/2010 - 03:18 pm Title: Sugar_Slave's Chapter

So sad, both were so beautifully broken.

Oh, and I am the one who suggested the traveling circus idea. Sorry I didn't put my name before.

Author's Response: Thank you, I love your choice of words. Thank you for letting me know it was you, I didn't want to dedicate it to 'unknown' unless I absolutely had too, I prefer to give credit where credit is due :)

Reviewer: sugar_slave Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/12/2010 - 06:11 pm Title: Sugar_Slave's Chapter

No, don't get me wrong. I love your chapter. This way it's way better than what I had imagined. And your writing is amazing. Thank you for writing it.

Author's Response: Thank you so much, I felt so bad!!!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/12/2010 - 05:44 pm Title: Sugar_Slave's Chapter

That was a sad chapter, knowing Buffy would die.

Author's Response: I know :( But thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: Blackoberst Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/12/2010 - 07:10 am Title: Sugar_Slave's Chapter

This was very sad and very well written.

Author's Response: Thank you :)

Reviewer: sugar_slave Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/12/2010 - 06:26 am Title: Sugar_Slave's Chapter

To tell you the truth I had imagined something lighter, but this was just amazing. I love your twist. The bittersweet ending is something that I adore in books and you just did it perfectly.
Can't wait to see the next dimensions.

Author's Response: I know, and I'm sorry, If I had been able to make it several chapters long I would have gone a completely different way, I'm sorry it wasn't what you wanted

Reviewer: Luce Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/12/2010 - 05:32 am Title: Sugar_Slave's Chapter

I really like this fic.. it's really intresting and it's making me laugh haha...
how about you try something more sexual like strippers or something like that, then you can have a choice with getting them more intermate and i'm sure Buffy won't react well to that which will make it more entertaining.. lol:P
keep writing.. lovin' it..

Much Love



Author's Response: I will! Thank you for the suggestion, I just have 2 more chapters to write and then I'll get to yours. So many people have been getting involved in this it's fantastic! Thanks again, xx L.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/11/2010 - 05:41 pm Title: Dominiques Chapter: part two of two

Ok, addendum to my last suggestion of clowns, it doesn't have to be clowns, but I would still like to see them being a part of a traveling circus/show of some sort, and they could have any job: sword swallower(lots of naughty possibilities), lion tamer, etc. Hope you'll take on this challenge.

Author's Response: noted and will be used for when I write your chapter (I will be writing you a chapter), thanks for all the interest and reviews!!! I hope that I'll do your idea proud :)

Author's Response: Also, is there a chance I could get your name, made up or not, so that I can name the Chapter after you?

Reviewer: Blackoberst Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/11/2010 - 02:31 pm Title: Dominiques Chapter: part two of two

Hah... she's getting greedy with the Spikes. That's good.

Author's Response: I would too lol, and thank you so much for the review

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/11/2010 - 09:31 am Title: Dominiques Chapter: part two of two

enjoyed. How about something silly? Buffy and Spike work for a traveling circus. Their roles: clowns. Not a sexual relationship yet, but will be when your done writing it. Ready, set, go!

Author's Response: Thank you, I just responded to your second review - sorry I didn't see this one at first - I love it!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/11/2010 - 09:30 am Title: Dominiques Chapter: part two of two

Awe :) What a twist, I'm glad Buffy found him again.

Reviewer: shelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/11/2010 - 02:58 am Title: Dominiques Chapter: part two of two

awesome!! i wish i had a good idea for a chapter! You're great at this!

Author's Response: You're so sweet, thank you! And don't be shy with ideas, the great thing about them is that they're all good

Reviewer: Dominique Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/11/2010 - 02:56 am Title: Dominiques Chapter: part two of two

Ok. That was pretty epic if I do say so myself. You did a nice job with the mumbo jumbo I gave you lol. I can't wait for the next chapter =D

Author's Response: Thanks, my main concern was that you like it, I'm glad I could do it some justice!

Reviewer: Blackoberst Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/10/2010 - 05:09 pm Title: Dominiques Chapter: part one of two

I really like this story and I'll be watching out for it from now on. Now lemme try this.
Spike: female elf (think Tolkien elves, not Santa's helpers)
Buffy: male dwarf (again, Tolkien, not other shite)
relationship: about to become sexual

Author's Response: lol awesome, I never would have gone down that mental path but as soon as I have the two other chapters posted for the other people I will most def do this one! and thanks for the review!!! (and the idea!)

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/10/2010 - 04:21 pm Title: Dominiques Chapter: part one of two

interesting suggestion, enjoyed

Author's Response: :)

Reviewer: lunna798 -- Contest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/10/2010 - 11:23 am Title: Dominiques Chapter: part one of two

Okay I was thinking a grease kinda setting
Spike --17/human/school jock w/letterman jacket

Buffy -- 16/school bad girl -- think Rizzo.

Relationship -- not sexual yet but lots of UST disguised under snark

Reviewer: Blue Eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2010 - 06:42 pm Title: Dominiques Chapter: part one of two

Cliffhanger!! Getting into the story getting good and then kiss wait until tomorrow. Your evil.

Author's Response: wahahahahaha (evil sounding of course lol) Thank you for the review, and I promised Spuffy (Canne?) in the second part so hopefully it makes up for it :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2010 - 05:58 pm Title: Dominiques Chapter: part one of two

Oh I'm sure she's okay to have too chapter written, more time to explain this dimension.
~ Enjoyed the update.

Author's Response: Thank you, sorry it took awhile to respond to your first review I only just saw it!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2010 - 05:32 pm Title: Chapter 3

Dancing was a fitting situation too.
*off to the next one*

Author's Response: glad to have you with this fic, and thank you!

Reviewer: sugar_slave Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2010 - 03:25 pm Title: Dominiques Chapter: part one of two

So many dimensions, so many possibilities and so many spuffy stories. I love your idea and you are doing an amazing job. So here's my suggestion:

CONTEST:
Rufus Thursley (Spike) is a dashing young (26) conman in the small town of Cloudydale. And Buffy is cynical, angry, and a heavy smoker. She sees right through his ticks. relationship - about to become sexual.

Author's Response: Thank you so much, and at this rate I think I'm going to have to do everyone's ideas, they're all so unique and fun! I'm sure I'm going to have a blast writing it, and I hope you'll enjoy!

Author's Response: Hey, I hope you don't mind but I had to tweak your idea a bit since Buffy only jumps dimensions when she says I love you to Spike and if i started them off as not knowing each other it would have taken at least several chapters to get them to that point. I opted to make them friends of sorts, is that okay with you?

Reviewer: elaine Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2010 - 01:31 pm Title: Dominiques Chapter: part one of two

Love this story, a bunch of mini tales showing us bits and pieces of possibilities and potentials.

Author's Response: Thank you :)

Reviewer: Dominique Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2010 - 12:22 pm Title: Dominiques Chapter: part one of two

AHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!! That was so much better than what I had in mind. Its really good. If you'd like some extra insight to the biker world (not the drugs and stuff, but the culture) toss me an email. Dcanestri@comcast.net

Author's Response: Thank you, this chapter was a blast to write, it feels like I'm writing one of those personalized books lol And thanks for the contact info, I'm definitely going to use it!

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