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Reviewer: Dominique Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2010 - 09:59 pm Title: Where troubles fall like lemon drops

I forgot to add their relationship status, they're having sex together

Author's Response: LOL - I should hope so, Spuffy and a motorcyle couldn't be platonic for too long. And I love this idea, I'm definitely going to use it, thank you for everything!!!

Reviewer: Dominique Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2010 - 09:54 pm Title: Please Read Author's Notes Section/End Notes Section

I really really like where this story is going.

CONTEST:
Spike is a young biker. Buffy is his secret FBI agent girlfriend. All human obviously lol

Reviewer: Blue Eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2010 - 02:22 pm Title: Chapter 3

I love how she just seems to jump and can't wait to see how many more Spike and Buffy scenes she has before she hopefully gets back home. Sex with Spike MMMMMMM

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2010 - 01:39 pm Title: Chapter 3

hot chapter. The only issue I had was "Mike" said: "You were bloody incredible sweetling", but the sentence following claimed he held no accent. 'bloody' is a term used, well in that way, for those of certain descents, and in turn I would think he would hold an accent. Sorry to be picky, just this stumped me a little. Despite this, I really enjoyed this chapter and I am looking forward to the next one.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, and you're absolutely right. I guess I'm so used to adding "Spikeisms" that I don't even realize when I'm doing it anymore lol.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2010 - 10:34 am Title: Please Read Author's Notes Section/End Notes Section

still very interesting. Sorry, no suggestions come to mind

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Date: 08/08/2010 - 10:25 am Title: Where troubles fall like lemon drops

interesting start, on to the next chapter

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2010 - 10:08 am Title: Please Read Author's Notes Section/End Notes Section

Ohhh so it's about the journey, huh?
That situation was not so good for Buffy, being separated due to class. Running away seems the only solution.
Looking forward to what you will come up with.

Author's Response: Thank you so much :)

Reviewer: Blue Eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/07/2010 - 10:56 am Title: Where troubles fall like lemon drops

I am glad she went with her natural instincts. I wonder how long she gets to stay in each dimension and how she will travel from one to the other. Can't wait to find out.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! She'll piece together what moves her from dimension to dimension around chapter 4 or 5 I believe. Glad you like it so far!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/07/2010 - 04:24 am Title: Where troubles fall like lemon drops

Love the twist (especially because I'm reading some Cowboy books at the moment).
Sounds as if the "Buffy 2" has left the original Buffy her memories. Or is a part of her still there?
Looking forward to read on and find out.

Author's Response: Hey CK, the twist will only come in the last chappy, and the whole Buffy 2 thing will be explained wahahahaha, there's going to be at least 4 more dimensions for her to explore before the end though. Thanks for the review!

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