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Reviewer: cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/11/2010 - 09:04 am Title: Meeting The Big Bad

Changes all around, huh? Sounds as if some relationships are going to break up soon.
I don't think Buffy loved it to be called a slave.

Author's Response: She most certainly did NOT :)

Author's Response: Its an amazing honor for you to review my story :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/10/2010 - 02:46 pm Title: The Big Bad Strikes

Reversed roles? Sounds interesting, hope you'll continue.
I can't help with concrit, I'm just commenting to your story itself. But if that's your fist story I can recommend you to find you a *good* beta. If you find a good one that doesn't only spell check she'll help you to write better, to grow with your writing.
Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: aww thanks i don't have a beta so that would be nice

Reviewer: rkm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/10/2010 - 04:21 am Title: The Big Bad Strikes

i'm always a sucker for reversal stories. it's an interesting set up so far. my interest is piqued ...

Author's Response: i am too...thats why i wrote it :)

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