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Reviewer: Minx DeLovely Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/15/2010 - 10:19 pm Title: Hands

I liked this very much, but you had a few grammatical errors, signed for sighed. You created a wonderful sense of mood here.

Author's Response: Thanks, Minx! This is my first fix ever, so it's nice to know someone liked it. I did go through it again and caught the spelling errors.

Reviewer: Aly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2010 - 08:02 am Title: Hands

I really liked your story, I think it was well written and especially Spikes thought and feelings were believable. There is just one thing that is really not logical: You say this takes place in season six before Spike got his soul, on the other hand you talk about the Bringers, the First and the War. This is stuff that doesn't happen before way into season 7.
That' just something that makes you stumble while reading it.
But otherwise i really enjoyed your story :)

Author's Response: Thanks! I did fix those errors.

Reviewer: magnus374 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2010 - 02:51 am Title: Hands

It's wellwritten and the characters seems right. The moment felt sad when I read it but it's good.

Author's Response: Thanks, hun.

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