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Reviewer: Behind Blue Eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/04/2010 - 10:51 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Blood on the dance floor

Absolutely brilliant depiction of utter debauchery. I thought the name rang a bell when I first read it, then it rang a big gong the further I read. Can't wait till we see how these sadist two fit in with Spike and Buffy.

Author's Response: Hey D! Thank you! Erzebeth Bathory is in every book about vampires and witches I own, and everytime I read about her Dru was on my mind :) I just had to fit her in here, since she kinda fits in the time frame. heh... you'll see the connection between them in the next chapter :) Thank you for stoping by, it means alot to me!

Reviewer: victoria Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/03/2010 - 11:16 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Blood on the dance floor

love the historical pieces. this one is so unique in its time frame and premise though. i really hope you continue it.

Author's Response: Thank you! I wasn't quite sure if there was already one like this posted... there being many historical fics around and all... Thank you for the review! I will update soon again! :D

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/03/2010 - 10:44 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Blood on the dance floor

Well it appears that Drusilla is as looney as ever. I wonder if what Angelus did has something to do
with her imprisonment. Thanks for
the update.

Author's Response: Yup, Drusilla is the loony here... so her demands of Angelus might be quite insane... and important for the story as one of the plotlines :) Thank you for reviewing again! Means alot!

Reviewer: Hollows Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/03/2010 - 08:47 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Blood on the dance floor

Wow, you already posted chapter two! I love the way you portrayed both Drusilla and Angelus, and I must agree that Dru fits the Blood Countess quite well. This story is captivating with every word you write.

Can't wait for more! :)

Author's Response: Hey Hollows! Yea... just couldn't resist posting another chapter, specially cause I wanted for Angelus/Dru introduction to be as painless as it could get. Not many people like crazy Dru character... Thank you so much for taking your time again and reviewing! I love it!

Reviewer: gopher101 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/03/2010 - 04:56 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Blood on the dance floor

i love how you incoprated the fact that some thougth if you drank blood from young girls, you would stay beatiful forever.
Also love this story so far. I like both Spike and William, but sometimes I just want a mean nasty Spike. And you have him in spades.

Author's Response: Hi! Thank you for taking your time for reviewing! The very mean Spike is comming up in the next chapter... Oh, and I love your review :D

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/03/2010 - 03:48 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Blood on the dance floor

Drusilla easily fits the character of the Blood Duchess. And I like an evil Angelus-
Enjoyed.

Author's Response: Thank you Pam! I agree, Dru fits there perfectly... Thank you so much for the review! It means alot to know that you still like reading it!

Reviewer: SpikesGirl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/02/2010 - 01:20 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Prologue to a Sin

I could not stop reading this chapter. No pauses for me. You had me from your first sentence. I think you have definitely proved you are an awesome writer. Don't doubt yourself. Great start for someone whom English is not their primary language!! I will definitely be awaiting your next chapter.

Author's Response: My cheeks feel warmer right now :) Makes me happy to know that I've been able to write something so interesting to read*grinns* Thank you very much for taking time to review! Means alot!

Reviewer: sugar_slave Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/02/2010 - 01:09 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Prologue to a Sin

An interesting start. Dark and heavy, just the way I like them. Hope to see the next part soon.

Author's Response: Hey sugar! The next part is already written and will be soon posted. Thank you very much for taking time and reviewing! Not only it means alot to me, it helps me understand where i blew it or if I did allright too. :)

Reviewer: sue Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/02/2010 - 07:54 am Title: Chapter 1 - Prologue to a Sin

A good story in the making ......

Author's Response: Thank you sue! I'm happy you stopped by.

Reviewer: Hollows Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/02/2010 - 02:56 am Title: Chapter 1 - Prologue to a Sin

Wow. You could have definitely fooled me by saying that English isn't your primary language. I'm already intrigued by this story... and it only has one chapter! I think I'm going to love this fic, especially since you hinted that there will be much angst before the happy ending. :)

Author's Response: Yup! The first hint of gore starts on the next chapter. I kinda like angsty starts... it only shows the strength of people that make it to the end and have a happy ending.. :) I'm sooo happy you're intrigued! Thank you for your lovely review! Means alot! :)

Reviewer: Shadowsbabe Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/01/2010 - 07:14 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Prologue to a Sin

Stop apologizing. You're doing a great job. You've managed to paint a very intriguing picture in very few words. You have me hooked.

Author's Response: Heheh... thank you! You wrote what probably every author wants to hear, so, thank you again, I appreciate it. The next chapter will be posted soon enough I think :)

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/01/2010 - 06:29 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Prologue to a Sin

I think your story is off to a great start.
I am intrigued and looking forward to more. Please update and I hope that you will complete your story.

Author's Response: I sure will finnish it, I'm already writing chapter 4 (yea.. Insomnia is a great friend of mine and doesn't let me go off to sleep anytime soon). I'm so happy you find it interesting, I was all nervous about posting at all :) Thank you sooo much for the review!

Reviewer: Behind Blue Eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/01/2010 - 05:28 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Prologue to a Sin

I'm so glad to see you posting! Really enjoyed the beginning, very promising! Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: :D thank you for stopping by and reviewing! It means so much to me you can't imagine! :) specially cause I absolutely LOVE reading everything you post.. :) Oh yeeesh... Thanks for the heads up.. I was so sure that I wrote the pyre right I didn't even check. Shame on me ;) I'll post in a few days some more.

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/01/2010 - 04:02 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Prologue to a Sin

Enjoyed.. very much.
I think you write quite well.

Author's Response: *blush* thank you. I must admit it has been 6 years ago from my last english lessons, but i think reading alot might've helped now. Thank you so much for the review! I appreciate it!

Reviewer: Sibb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/01/2010 - 03:46 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Prologue to a Sin

What a bad guy our Spike is! I trust that Buffy will be the start of his redemption? And, speaking for myself, I am just as glad that the rape wasn't more detailed.

Author's Response: Oh... I like the mean Spike. With this fic I wanted to show how awful people can be - with soul no less. I think there is a long way ahead for Spike's redemption right now, but the first contact with Buffy has been made and the rest will soon follow... for the rape part - it is going to be shown in flashbacks, but NO details at all. Thank you very very much for the review!

Reviewer: schnulli Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/01/2010 - 03:27 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Prologue to a Sin

i liked so far, go on please

Author's Response: That I will! :) And thank you so very much for the review!

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