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Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/16/2011 - 09:22 pm Title: Running While Standing Still

A good thing, giving Willam the freedom of decision when it could kill him.
So it will be a tough decision. But they need Spike for the prophecy I guess/think.

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Date: 05/21/2011 - 06:54 pm Title: Office Meeting

The meeting went better than I expected.
Thought they didn't find out more about William, he'll be healthy now.

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Date: 05/19/2011 - 12:27 am Title: Office Meeting

awe, it feels like fluffy little bunnies are trying to push William and Buffy together (they both seem a little anxious when apart). I really hope Buffy asks William to stay with her - I think some quality cuddle time would do them both some good.

Reviewer: anna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/18/2011 - 10:07 am Title: Office Meeting

great chapter

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2011 - 09:57 am Title: Cable TV

The broken remote control was fun. :)
Wonder how the meeting will go aka Angel's reaction (especially William).

Reviewer: anna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/09/2011 - 09:35 am Title: Cable TV

Great chapter, loved William's first experience with t.v. Also, meeting Harmony was amusing. I can't wait to see how Angel is going to react.

Reviewer: no_promises Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/02/2011 - 09:39 pm Title: Coffee Break

I enjoyed the budding relationship between Buffy and William and he does seem to be a nice little reminder of Spike.
Sounds like maybe William is having a sort of slayer dream. A girl with a flowing white gown, dark hair, barefoot and singing while warning of upcoming evil. My guess is maybe Drusilla?
I'm looking forward to what's coming next.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/02/2011 - 06:53 pm Title: Coffee Break

William is indeed good in changing the topic. Enjoyed their talk.
And another warning... so evil is coming nearer. Not good but they should be warned now.

Reviewer: Anna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/01/2011 - 11:23 pm Title: Coffee Break

Great chapter. Loved the Buffy/William interactions. Can't wait to read about the evil brewin'.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2011 - 02:04 pm Title: Fight of Flight

So William yearns to become Spike again; won't be easy.
Neither will the future be if it's right what this vamp said - evil is coming.

Reviewer: Dragonfly_B Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2011 - 12:10 am Title: Fight of Flight

I was so happy to see an update! I like how you are building it up. Can't wait to see what they'll chit-chat about. Great chapter!

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Date: 04/26/2011 - 12:01 am Title: Fight of Flight

Great chapter, glad for the update!

Reviewer: evelynferguson Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2011 - 10:20 pm Title: Cry Me a River

Wow. I'm so thrilled to find new work, and even more excited to find new, great writing. Looking forward to your next chapter.
Your fan,
Evelyn

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/25/2011 - 08:22 pm Title: Cry Me a River

Doesn't sound as if talking to William has helped; maybe the crying has.
But the work of a slayer is never done, huh?
Wonder what will happen next.

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Date: 03/22/2011 - 08:54 am Title: After Shock

William's pain was heartbreaking. It really moved me.
I'm glad that Xander isn't going to be against William but I hope it isn't just because he's human now. I'd like to hear Xander say positive things about Spike to William. I'd like that old demon bias to have died in the Hellmouth.

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Date: 03/21/2011 - 06:08 pm Title: Food For Thought

I liked the chapter; it showed more of William's feelings. But Spike is still there too, in the amulet... Wonder how that will get fixed.

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2011 - 01:37 pm Title: Food For Thought

I like your story. It is confusing to me how Buffy did not think Spike
and William were the same person. I hope that Buffy in her loss of Spike will not become distant from Williams..

Reviewer: anna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2011 - 10:08 am Title: Food For Thought

I loved the chapter. I don't feel it was redundant, just emphasizing how difficult a change this will be for William. I'm glad Xander isn't going to be hostile to human Spike. Can't wait for the next chapter. It should be interesting to see Angel's reaction once they get to LA.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/20/2011 - 07:52 pm Title: Long Walk

Just caught up with your story. Loosing his memories (of Spike) will make things a bit harder.
Sounds as if William isn't strong any longer...

Reviewer: Shadowsbabe Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/20/2011 - 01:55 am Title: Mad, Mad World

I love the way you've written the confusion William is going through. Can't wait for more updates from you.
I love this story!

Reviewer: anna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/19/2011 - 01:38 pm Title: Mad, Mad World

I am really looking forward to your next update! Should be interesting to see how William adjusts to the year 2003.

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Date: 03/19/2011 - 11:16 am Title: Mad, Mad World

thanks, I'm really enjoying this story

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Date: 03/19/2011 - 11:13 am Title: Long Walk

poor confused William. I hope Buffy takes care of him, and treats him as gently as Spike always treated her when she was fragile.

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Date: 03/16/2011 - 08:23 pm Title: After Shock

I love the premise of this story and am eagerly waiting for the next update.

Reviewer: Rika Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2011 - 05:10 pm Title: After Shock

I'm intrigued, can't wait to see where you go with this.

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