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Date: 11/19/2013 - 10:39 pm Title: oneshot

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Reviewer: claudia Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2011 - 06:33 am Title: oneshot

Lovely writing of a scene that still makes me cry.

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Date: 09/05/2011 - 04:57 am Title: oneshot

so sad but so well written

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/05/2011 - 12:09 am Title: oneshot

"because he’s the only one trying to save her but instead he’s falling apart, too... exactly what they don't need..."

Very true. Oh the places they could go, but it's so much easier to keep doing the same thing, over and over. Really makes you see them, and though they do see each other, the art is keeping that fact secret. Very intense little story, thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: Darkest Night Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/04/2011 - 03:44 pm Title: oneshot

Great story, I hope there will be more. I think you capture the emotions of the two beautifully and we all know this is a scene that needs to be written.

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