Date: 09/19/2012 - 12:07 pm Title: Chapter 5
Hope you dont forget Spike/Buffy/Cordy,I wait.LOL !!!
Author's Response: Soon. LOL. Soon
Date: 09/19/2012 - 02:05 am Title: Chapter 5
By the way I hope they stay together threesome!!!
Author's Response: Hehe. Time will tell
Date: 09/19/2012 - 01:48 am Title: Chapter 5
Do not listen anyone, Spike / Buffy / Dawn of the rare pairing keep going!!!:)
Author's Response: Plan to. No worries
Date: 09/18/2012 - 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 5
Please tell me Buffy finds out leaves Spike gives him an ultimatum and Dawn sees Spike for what he is
Author's Response: Keep reading. That's all I ask
Date: 09/18/2012 - 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 5
You are a good writer although this will be my only review. I grew up around girls who thought they could do anything and with anyone. Remember karma does occur more often than you would think.
Author's Response: Great point. But I think it applies to both genders. Lets not delude ourselves.
Date: 09/18/2012 - 10:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
Firstly you are a great writer and if circumstances were different - ie different characters I would love your fic. I am a true blue Spuffy I guess. Don't mind the threesome thing but I guess I just think in the end they should always end up together just the two of them.
The threesome thing no biggie kinda hot actually it's;
The Dawn/Spike thing really turns my stomach. Whenever Dawn is mentioned all I picture is the whinny little cow from the show. And oh god how I hate Dawn!
Please tell me Buffy is going to grow a backbone and stand up for herself even if only a little. Yeah she was a stripper and maybe she sold out a little, but what the hell? Does Spike even love her? DOes she love him? Does she have no self respect? Does she really believe she is that completely worthless to live with his discretion?
Please consider making Buffy a little more than the pathetic housewife that she is now.
I hope she finds out and leaves and Spike begs forgiveness. I know it's PWP and about threesomes, but I accidentally read this fic before I realized what it was about and now I can't not read the rest and I hate that I need to know. Like I said you are a fantastic writer and I am drawn to know more. I just hope for more depth for the characters.
Please know this is not an attack on you at all,like I said you are a great writer I just HATE DAWN!!! And this is just my own little opinion
Author's Response: I'm not offended at all. Thanks for the compliment and taking the time to review. Incidentally, I have another spike/buffy, spike/dawn story idea. It ain't a threesome fic though.
Interested?
Date: 09/18/2012 - 04:58 pm Title: Chapter 5
from chapter to chapter hotter and hotter!!!
Author's Response: Thanks
Author's Response: Glad u think so. :)
Date: 09/18/2012 - 04:54 pm Title: Chapter 5
Smut in bed then shower i hope you write!!!update soon!!!
Author's Response: As soon as I can manage
Date: 09/18/2012 - 03:48 pm Title: Chapter 5
I am glad such rapid update need more!!
Author's Response: I think I need a few days
Date: 09/18/2012 - 03:41 pm Title: Chapter 5
oh my god the most interesting place to update soon!!!
Author's Response: Thanks
Date: 09/18/2012 - 03:32 pm Title: Chapter 5
Only good, its hot !
Author's Response: Thanks. :)
[Report This]Date: 09/18/2012 - 02:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
Was just thinking, you should post this on Friends or Lovers. It's a Spawn website and it is still active. It would be a huge hit there!
Author's Response: Thanks. I'll have a looksee
[Report This]Date: 09/18/2012 - 02:17 pm Title: Chapter 5
Hon, you are definetly not a struggling writer. You're writing is wonderful. This story is getting hotter and hotter. You know from one of my reviews, the only thing that turns my stomach is the going behind Buffy's back, but I fully believe that she will soon find out and soon join in with the festivities. Yay :-)
Spike is so hott in this fic, love the way he talk to Dawn. I always enjoy Dawn and Janice friendships, too.
Can we please have a yummy shagfest next chapter? Pretty please.
Author's Response: Hehe. you'll see
[Report This]Date: 09/18/2012 - 02:14 pm Title: Chapter 5
God, I hope Buffy is gone when they get back. They deserve each other.
Author's Response: well, as things stand now, buffy doesn't even want to consider the possibility....
Date: 09/18/2012 - 11:50 am Title: Chapter 4
I want more!!:)
Author's Response: Me too. Only trouble is i've got to write it. Lol. I'm working on it. Will try to post soon.
Date: 09/17/2012 - 04:55 pm Title: Chapter 4
Buffy used to be a prostitute or a stripper?
Author's Response: you'll find out soon......stay reading
Date: 09/17/2012 - 03:24 pm Title: Chapter 4
Loved it!
Author's Response: Cool. Thanks
Date: 09/17/2012 - 02:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hot. But as a Spuffy lover I don't feel much hope...
Author's Response: Well, this story was in response to a Buffy/Spike/Dawn challenge. So you should adjust your expectations accordingly.
[Report This]Date: 09/17/2012 - 01:32 pm Title: Chapter 4
Conversation between dawn and spike was hot. I'm looking forward to their meeting. A huge amount of hotness awaits I'm sure.
Author's Response: Haha. That's the plan.
Date: 09/17/2012 - 01:09 pm Title: Chapter 4
Oh wow, this is getting hotter:)
Author's Response: Thanks :)
Date: 09/17/2012 - 01:06 pm Title: Chapter 4
AMAZING! So vivid and lovingly written! Need more.
Author's Response: Hope it was worth the wait.
Date: 09/17/2012 - 01:02 pm Title: Chapter 4
OH god,so hot!!!
Author's Response: Hehe. Thanks.
Date: 09/10/2012 - 01:20 am Title: Chapter 3
Get well !!!
Author's Response: Am all better now. Will try to update soon.
Date: 09/09/2012 - 02:15 pm Title: Chapter 3
So long,but still waiting.please update!!!
Author's Response: Hey, i've been a bit sick with the flu. I'll try to update once i recover.
Date: 09/04/2012 - 03:12 am Title: Chapter 3
UPDATE!!!!!!
Author's Response: I'm working on it. Will try to update as soon as I can. Hope it'll be worth the wait.
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