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Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2013 - 01:57 am Title: Act Two – In Which Our Gallant Heroes Imbibe Refreshing Beverages, Are Continually Out of Breath, and Confront a Slayer of the Vampyres

Quite delightful. Shame to end it before he got to mess with Angel. Nothing better than time travel and messing with Angel. :) Would be very curious to see how the meeting with the real Spike goes after meeting up with the Giles version of the fashion police Spike. Gotta wonder if this is the world where the stone plaque arrives in... Thanks for this. Would seem you've created yet another blond dynamic duo! A marvelous endeavor. :)

Author's Response: SR, Thanks so much for leaving feedback - not just for me but for all the stories you leave feedback for. When you write and hear nothing in response, it feels like you're throwing stones in a pond but nothing splashes. YOU are always a consistent splasher and I thank you for it :)

Reviewer: Passion4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2013 - 12:38 am Title: Act Two – In Which Our Gallant Heroes Imbibe Refreshing Beverages, Are Continually Out of Breath, and Confront a Slayer of the Vampyres

“Well, that seems rather ungallant. Threaten a lady and run.” ROFL!!! TOO FUNNY!

ZIMA!! omg! Andrew is priceless!

Saint Vigorous! OMG, Buffy - also classically priceless!

Causing unpleasantness to this fellow sounds like a capital idea

Spike/William never changes! Any chance to poke Peaches in the ribs is a capital idea!

*Thus endeth the tale*

NO, no, no!!! Not endth! No endth!! This was just getting super wonderfully good! I want to see William poke Angel with a Shanshu stick! Awwww ...

Loved it, Puddin!! Too utterly funny! Love William. Need more William. :) Thanks so much for this!! made me laugh.

Author's Response: You're always so kind and thoughtful P4S. Thanks. I'm so happy to know that this could make you laugh. Andrew was a lot of fun to write. I wish I could continue the tale, but I can't see a clear arc in mind. And one thing I've learned, if I don't know the ending, I shouldn't start! (I have 45K words of a story that nobody will ever see that taunts me with this info) As always, so nice to hear which bits of the story that you like the best and thanks for taking the time to leave feedback.

Reviewer: ginar369 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/11/2013 - 02:17 pm Title: Act One - In Which We Meet Our Dashing Protagonist and His Acquaintance, William Pratt

Poor William!!! Andrew is a bit much for those of us born in the correct century. But to set him on William? That's just too cruel. LOL

Author's Response: And it scares me how easily those Andrew references come to me. ("I'm not a nerd! Really!") OK, *sigh* I am.

Reviewer: Jen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/10/2013 - 09:26 am Title: Act One - In Which We Meet Our Dashing Protagonist and His Acquaintance, William Pratt

Fun!

Author's Response: Thank you Jen

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/10/2013 - 12:45 am Title: Act One - In Which We Meet Our Dashing Protagonist and His Acquaintance, William Pratt

“I’m understanding very little of what you’re saying. I caught “Buffy” and a few of the pronouns.”

Highlight of my night!! So very thrilled you brought back this William, and to see how very vexing Andrew Welles is to him is brilliant. Good to know some things never change. Hope our boy can take some of this lesson back to Buffy. :) Update soon!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it and nice to see you again Buffyrat! The exact phrase you used, "Some things never change," comes up in the second half - which I'm just finishing up!

Reviewer: Passion4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2013 - 07:31 pm Title: Act One - In Which We Meet Our Dashing Protagonist and His Acquaintance, William Pratt

Yay!! William and Andrew - how funny! Many cute lines in here, loved Andrew trying to teach him to frame his junk and lead with his groin! LOL! Poor William! Did you see the Con where Nick B. mimicked Spike's walk? Too funny -'really works the obliques' he noted. heehee! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: You're always too kind to me. Actually, the reason I posted it was (1) because it's been on the auction site for a month and Suasan said so and (2) because chapter 2 was stuck and I thought posting it would put the pressure on me to finish. It worked! Hope to have it up soon. Thanks again hon

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