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Reviewer: sallyntmare Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/04/2013 - 09:56 pm Title: Chapter 3

This is a fun story to read. I think its a cute idea.

Reviewer: Lilly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/31/2013 - 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 3

I'm really liking this story please continue this :D xxxx

Reviewer: melissa Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2013 - 10:15 pm Title: Chapter 3

I'm really enjoying this story and hope to see more soon

Reviewer: melissa Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2013 - 12:09 am Title: Chapter 2

I really enjoyed this and cannot wait for more

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/30/2013 - 02:19 am Title: Chapter 1

It's not just the fact there is no spacing, but this story isn't written well at all, the grammar is horrible. I understand it's your first one, but I would really consider getting a beta reader before you post.

Reviewer: sallyntmare Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/29/2013 - 07:13 pm Title: Chapter 2

My interest is still kept. Same spacing issue though. Story will flow better if it weren't so crammed together. Liking this story. Keep it up!

Reviewer: sallyntmare Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/29/2013 - 07:10 pm Title: Chapter 1

Great potential. I like the plot. Paragraphs were not spaced so it was difficult to read. Like it!

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