Date: 06/12/2005 - 02:13 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
you should be mega happy with this chapter coz it rocks. it was well sweet and emotional. lol, my mum just told me off for yeling 'YES!' real loud when i saw this had been updated lol. --xXx--
Date: 06/12/2005 - 11:36 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
All I can say is more more more! And as fast as possible please...this is a great story:)
Date: 06/11/2005 - 09:08 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
I just finished reading all 14 chaps and I love this story, especially now that Buffy and Spike are together. I like the playful comfort level in their relationship. Is Buffy's mom going to find out her daughter is dating her husband's son? Will that bring them together or just push them farther apart? I'm not sure if you've considered a reconciliation between Buffy and her mom, but it would be interesting to see Spike thrown into the mix. Plz update soon. You're doin great.
Date: 06/10/2005 - 04:52 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
I think you did a wonderful job with this chapter. Both characters were credible and the dialogues were well written. I am looking forward to the next chapter!
Date: 06/10/2005 - 04:31 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
Thanks for a morning after with no drama. The phone call to Anya was funny, having sex is an excellent reason to call in! Buffy is being so open and vulnerable it's lovely to read.
Date: 06/10/2005 - 04:13 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
Great job! Love the story! Can't wait for more! :)
Date: 06/10/2005 - 08:54 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
I thought it was a wonderfully written chapter and I really like the story....I don't think you need to worry if we like it or not, 'cuz if we didn't we wouldn't keep reading it :)
Author's Response: And that would be what I'm afraid of... ;)
Date: 06/10/2005 - 07:44 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
Poor Buffy! I hope she doesn't go and push Spike away again! He can help her! Also, I'm curious to see if Buffy will repair things with her mother, I think that would be helpful for her healing. And drat... I'm out of chapters! lol! Update soon ok? I'll make omelettes for your muse! =D
Date: 06/10/2005 - 07:29 am Title: Chapter Twelve
Oh wow! I'm glad to finally have the whole story!! And the love scene was beautifully done! Wonderful chapter! *Goes to click for next chapter* Hehehe!
Date: 06/10/2005 - 07:07 am Title: Chapter Eleven
Gah! Riley's a jerk. That's all there is to it. But Spike........ *Sighs dreamily* So not a jerk!! So yay!!! Happy stuff! =D
Date: 06/10/2005 - 06:45 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
I really liked this chapter. Liked the portrayal of Buffy. You hinted in earlier chapters that she could be like this once she accepted Spike into her heart. I liked their banter, and the fact that it's the morning after and there's no "drama." No crossed signals, no second guessing. They've been through so much APART that it's heartwarming to see all that they can be together!
Date: 06/10/2005 - 06:42 am Title: Chapter Ten
Hoo boy! The infamous 'beneath me' line. Soooo sad! And now he's moving out??? *Gasp* Nooooooooo! Eep! On to next chapter!
Date: 06/10/2005 - 05:55 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
Enjoying the story. Glad to see Buffy and Spike finally settled things.
Date: 06/10/2005 - 05:54 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
I think it's a good fic and a very good chapter !! go on, please !!
Date: 06/10/2005 - 05:40 am Title: Chapter Nine
I have no idea why it's taken me so long to finally catch up with this story, but I'm doing it now! Good chapter, and I'm happy to hear that you aren't a closet B/R shipper!! lol
Date: 06/10/2005 - 04:55 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
loving it!!! its a great chapter nice to see them happy - great fic - please update soon :)
Date: 06/10/2005 - 04:29 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
loved the update
Date: 06/10/2005 - 01:50 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
Girl, if this is you without the muse...lol...not gonna complete that thought 'cause that would just be a jinx. Suffice it to say, this is an excellent chapter. One of your best, in fact. Just keep writing and she'll come back.
Date: 06/10/2005 - 12:48 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
i thought it was a great chapter, it really established buffy and spike's relationship and it was very sweet.
Date: 06/09/2005 - 11:10 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
I hope that didn't sound too critical. I wasn't trying to be harsh.
Date: 06/09/2005 - 11:10 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
Can I have Spike cooking in my kitchen? PLEASE? - WONDERFULLY SPUFFY Chapter. Looks like they are both trying. I sure hope Buffy can let go and truly love again. And if you can write this well with your muse AWOL, I can't wait to read you write when your muse returns. more please.
Date: 06/09/2005 - 11:09 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
I thought it was good and it moved the plot along in a Spuffy friendly direction, but it did seem a tad off. Maybe it's just that it's the first time I've read your Buffy being happy. NOT that I'm asking for angst, but this chapter read a little differently than the others, not bad, just different.
Date: 06/09/2005 - 09:54 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
LMAO at the phone call to Anya. That was soooo funny. you rule
Date: 06/09/2005 - 08:51 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
I am happy with this chapter =D and looking forward to the next!
Date: 06/09/2005 - 08:37 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
I love how open Buffy was with him. It was a big step for her and it was needed. And how funny was it when she called out to Anya and was able to use the sex excuse? lol. This was a great chapter, Buffy putting herself on the line and handing Spike her heart. Just hope he doesn't break it.
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