
Date: 12/22/2004 - 05:04 pm Title: Chapter 20
love this one plz update soon luvs tina
Date: 12/22/2004 - 03:04 pm Title: Chapter 20
good chapter I can't wait for more
Date: 12/22/2004 - 02:24 pm Title: Chapter 20
GREAT CHAPTER!!! I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE. PLEASE DON'T MAKE US WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE.
Date: 12/22/2004 - 01:42 pm Title: Chapter 20
hey, that was good. Is that the end? It had an ending sort of feeling to it but i can't tell
Author's Response: Up until around 11:00 last night, yes. I decided against it, so it will be continued in this story.
Date: 12/22/2004 - 01:05 pm Title: Chapter 20
Oh Ashlee, this chapter just had me bawling my eyes out. The finallity of every moment, every step just tore my heart out. When Buffy walked away from her mother and friends to leave town and looked at Spike memorizing his face, I just broke down. This story has emotionally affected me more than any of your previous stories. That is a true testament to your ever improving storytelling abilities and talents. You have humanized these charaters to the point that I hurt when they hurt. This story is just fantastic. I know many will say they just want Spike and Buffy to be together, but that's not realistic. The portrayal of these flawed characters you have given us in this story is completely real. Excellent work hon. :)
Author's Response: Now that's not fair, you got me all tear- that's not the way it's supposed to work :-) Thank you so much for the sweet compliments and I'm glad you think I'm improving in the storytelling department. I'm actually feeling the same way (to the point where I'd like to re-write Fire and Ice at some point in the future). I'm glad the characters are realistic, that's what I strive for because life is angsty and dramatic a lot of the time. Thank you so much!
Date: 12/22/2004 - 12:36 pm Title: Chapter 20
Arghh! Not fair ! You evil, bad girl! OK so you said that there would be angst, but isn't angst its torture! I just beg of you that show some mercy on Spike (and me of course!) and not let him be out of the baby's life too long! Too much of that has been going on. The story hs been beautifully written like I have said before, giving this taboo subject the shades of grey that it should truly have. Please update soon.
Date: 12/22/2004 - 12:27 pm Title: Chapter 20
Awesome chapter! Well done :)
Date: 12/22/2004 - 12:18 pm Title: Chapter 20
Why do I get this sinking feeling in the pit of my stomach every time I see that the story has been update? Damn, you terrify me. You are without a doubt, the Queen of Angst. It makes the story interesting though so don't take it as a critic or anything. I'm hoping for a bit of happiness. Just a tiny little bit, to compensate for all the badness. I don't think my heart can take much more of this. I feel sorry for all the characters in this story. Love shouldn't hurt so much.
Author's Response: Don't worry, I actually laughed when I saw your review and I didn't take it as a criticism at all! The next chapter still has some angst, but after that I'm going to give you all a little bit of a 're-building' chapter. I hope you like what's coming and thanks to everyone for reviewing!
Date: 12/22/2004 - 12:10 pm Title: Chapter 20
oooh where is she going? please hurry and update again soon, i need to know where this is going :)
Date: 12/22/2004 - 12:05 pm Title: Chapter 20
I like the story, but I'm just wondering. Are they ever gonna get together? I mean he's not her teacher anymore so I don't see why not and she is having his kid. I guess I just don't like the fact that she plans on leaving without even talking to him first. Well, guess I'll just have to wait and see. Good work and I hope things get better with them.
Author's Response: Don't worry. I know he's not her teacher anymore, but now he's a man who broke her heart. Please keep reading and thank you for reviewing!
Date: 12/22/2004 - 12:04 pm Title: Chapter 20
Excellent chapter! I know it's a new beginning for Buffy, but please let Spike find her...somehow!
Date: 12/22/2004 - 08:59 am Title: Chapter 18
I just read all 18 chapters...and I want MORE! :-P I LOVE this story!!
Date: 12/22/2004 - 06:35 am Title: Chapter 19
Yay! But now we got ta wait for another chappie to find out what happens.:(
Date: 12/22/2004 - 04:25 am Title: Chapter 19
SPIKE IS A JERK!!! I LOVE HIM DEARLY BUT HE WAS A COMPLETE JERK IN THIS CHAPTER!! KEEP UP THE GOOD WOKRK THOUGH. DON'T MAKE US WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE.
Date: 12/22/2004 - 03:42 am Title: Chapter 19
Great chapter! Can't wait wait for the next update ;-)
Date: 12/22/2004 - 02:55 am Title: Chapter 19
I really don't like "jerk" Spike. I personally prefer reading ten chapters of fluff to 30 angsty ones in which Spike behaves in such a despicable way that you prefer Buffy turned to say Angel. I have almost reached the point where I'd rather see Buffy with someone else... I really really hate that. I will go on reading this because I'm an incorrigible romantic. But I'm not sure I can see it through. Sorry.
Date: 12/22/2004 - 12:37 am Title: Chapter 19
Well, I'm glad she didn't cave at anything he said like she has in the past. Hoping he'll get over the shock of it soon, hopefully before the child graduates from college! LOL! Great chapter, btw!
Date: 12/22/2004 - 12:36 am Title: Chapter 19
As always another good chapter. I really hope you continue with the fact of this only being half way through. I just can't get enough of the drama. I also like the fact that Joyce was cool about the pregnancy.
Date: 12/21/2004 - 10:52 pm Title: Chapter 18
thanks for not doing that happyy family thing!
Date: 12/21/2004 - 10:50 pm Title: Chapter 19
love you babfe! you are awesome!
Date: 12/21/2004 - 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 19
No offence, but I've read several of your stories and I'm wondering why Spike is such a creep in so many of them.
Author's Response: I had a similar review on another site, so I'll post the same response: I've only written Spike as a complete jerk in "Fire and Ice" and "Desire." "Buffy the Vampire" he was under a thrall and "Beyond" is season 2 Spike who is evil. "Secrets" could be perceived as a jerk depending on your point of view, but he was also doing it for her own good (established in the summary). He's had his moments in other fics (much like in the show) but Buffy has had her moments, too (much like in the show). "Enemies" and "Matters" Buffy gave as good as she got and based on the reviews, I kept it evenly dispersed. In the show, they were never perfect and I try to keep that in mind when writing. I've written many fics and I have to have conflict in them if they are going to be long, otherwise I'd end up with ten chapters each and mostly fluff. I like to give both him and Buffy human qualities, because no one has a perfect relationship with no conflict.
Date: 12/21/2004 - 09:35 pm Title: Chapter 19
silly question, but the spoiler is killing me. what is the "stand-up guy"???
Author's Response: "Stand-up" guy is what nearly every baby fic (including one of mine) writes Spike to be. The kind of guy who takes responsibility, whether he's ready for it or not, and I just don't feel that it's always true to life, so I changed it :-) Thanks so much for reviewing!
Date: 12/21/2004 - 09:34 pm Title: Chapter 19
Well... if she's graduating and Joyce doesn't throw a fit, then they could be together. The probably should move and go to another town or something. Or the staff at the high school could just suddenly be ok with everything. Hmmmm... it'll be interesting.
Date: 12/21/2004 - 09:19 pm Title: Chapter 19
great chapter...i wish it was longer though...plz update tomorrow!!!!!
Date: 12/21/2004 - 08:23 pm Title: Chapter 19
Whoa. Wait just a sec. Did he really say: what are YOU going to do? Did he really LEAVE? Or did I just have a temporary moment of insanity and I missunderstood something? Ok, I'll have to read what happens in the next chapter cause right now, my warm feelings for Spike just got dramatically cold. I don't mind Spike being a jerk once in a while, but you don't get a 18 year old pregnant and do nothing unless you're the worst asshole in the world. You're a great writer cause you get really extreme reactions from me hon. I'm still in shock.