Date: 01/29/2005 - 08:08 am Title: Chapter 19: A moment of life and an eternity of death
Great chapter.
Date: 01/29/2005 - 08:06 am Title: Chapter 19: A moment of life and an eternity of death
Wow. That was hot and the ending was so sad.. The last sentence nearly made me cry. This is such a great chapter and I really loved it.
Date: 01/29/2005 - 06:18 am Title: Chapter 19: A moment of life and an eternity of death
OH SAD. VERY BEAYTIFUL SCENE, BUT THE ENDING IS SAD.
Date: 01/29/2005 - 06:09 am Title: Chapter 18: Birds of a feather...
Great chapter.... I can'y wait for their contest to begin. (sidenote - there's another Faith/Buffy flip paragraph 12)
Date: 01/29/2005 - 02:04 am Title: Chapter 18: Birds of a feather...
loved it!!! keep up the great work
Date: 01/28/2005 - 11:00 pm Title: Chapter 17:A wager is made
Perfect! A challenge. Spike will excell in this.
Date: 01/28/2005 - 10:24 pm Title: Chapter 17:A wager is made
IN! lol I have faith in Spike. ;)
Date: 01/28/2005 - 04:35 pm Title: Chapter 15: A drunk, a truce and an unexpected invitation
loved it
Date: 01/28/2005 - 02:07 pm Title: Chapter 15: A drunk, a truce and an unexpected invitation
Drunk GIles is always so fun :-) And Willow was so in character, I was cracking up. Sad that this is the most recent chapter, but I love the story and I can't wait for the next update!
Date: 01/28/2005 - 02:04 pm Title: Chapter 15: A drunk, a truce and an unexpected invitation
I appreciate you churning the chapters out so quickly, but my gosh, you really need a beta to help you! You have thinking instead of thanking, Faith instead of Buffy, and tons of other mistakes that a second person reading over would catch. Please consider having it read over before posting!!!
Author's Response: Sorry about the errors but my beta and I are starting to belive this chapter was cursed. We read it several times and kept finding errors. I think we finally got it under control, so the newly updated version has been posted. Sorry about that, we appreciate you and all the others who brought this to our attention. Thanks :)
Date: 01/28/2005 - 02:00 pm Title: Chapter 15: A chance
I'm glad she stood up for Spike and called out Xander on his hypocritical ways- didn't that just bug the crap out of you?? Especially in Selfless! Getting off topic- great chapter!
Date: 01/28/2005 - 01:50 pm Title: Chapter 14: Unexpected encounter
Very good job of writing Adam. He wasn't a very complex character in the show, but he had a lot of complex questions (if that makes sense) and you were able to capture that.
Date: 01/28/2005 - 01:36 pm Title: Chapter 15: A drunk, a truce and an unexpected invitation
See, I already read the reviews, so I don't need to mention the Buffy/Faith name change. It's funny, I have to remind myself that Faith is who she is. I remember who Buffy is, but I just can't get a picture of Faith without the slang usage and attitude, unless I imagine the body switching episode and then I can. It's just hard, but I LOVE this story and everything is going great. Wonderful!
Date: 01/28/2005 - 01:20 pm Title: Chapter 13: Trapped
Glad that Buffy was able to stand up to Travers, even if it didn't work out the way she wanted. It's good to see that she doesn't back down entirely.
Date: 01/28/2005 - 01:08 pm Title: Chapter 12: A step in the right direction
Sex scenes can be a little overrated. If you didn't feel the need to put it in the chapter, then it didn't belong in the chapter. I look forward to it when it means something, but I like your logic of Spike and the readers both being unfulfilled. I also like that Spike is slowly trying to break down her walls.
Date: 01/28/2005 - 01:02 pm Title: Chapter 11: A battle of wills
Love that Buffy is the temptress and Spike is trying to resist!
Date: 01/28/2005 - 12:53 pm Title: Chapter 10: Tears
Awww, Spike was so sweet! I love tender Spike!! And Buffy's speech to Faith had me tear up a little bit (and believe me, that is VERY hard to do). Wonderful chapter filled with emotion!
Date: 01/28/2005 - 12:42 pm Title: Chapter 9: Just in the neighborhood
Glad that Riley was only there to talk- I actually liked the poor guy- just not paired with Buffy! And everyone else showing up after that was great (especially Spike, of course!)
Date: 01/28/2005 - 12:25 pm Title: Chapter 8: Attitude Adjustment
I absolutely loved Tara! She is the perfect voice of reason. And the line that Giles was about to have a heart attack was so funny!!
Date: 01/28/2005 - 12:07 pm Title: Chapter 7: In the heat of the moment
I loved their sparring in this chapter and especially the end result!! And the fact that Spike is already starting to get possessive is just a bonus :-)
Date: 01/28/2005 - 11:56 am Title: Chapter 6: A lively debate about the rights of the unalive
LOVED their first interaction! Aaah, if only it had gone that way in the show *sigh* :-)
Date: 01/28/2005 - 11:46 am Title: Chapter 5: How to say hello, Sunnydale style
Damn- and I was hoping that the first soldier she kicked the crap out of was Riley LOL! Oh well, I can dream and I loved the attitude between her and Faith!
Date: 01/28/2005 - 11:39 am Title: Chapter 4: Debts waiting to be paid
It's rare that I say this, but- Spuffyness is always the best part of the story (why else would we be on this site?) but this story is already four chapters in with no sign of Spike and it's still really interesting! That shows what a good author you are, since you're able to twist the story and not make it appear to be filler on the way to the Spuffyness- Great job!!
Date: 01/28/2005 - 11:22 am Title: Chapter 3: Breakdown
LOL- Cordy really does have the Barbie figure (you gotta love to hate her for that alone) and I loved that Buffy stood up to her - even though I do like Cordy, you wrote her personality perfectly!
Date: 01/28/2005 - 11:13 am Title: Chapter 1: Bitter Revelations
Interesting point about Angel and the curse. I've always wondered that- if they were to sleep together again, would the curse really work a second time, because they would both know the consequences? Glad you brought it up.
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