Date: 01/25/2005 - 02:18 pm Title: Chapter 7: In the heat of the moment
omg... if you don't reply soon I'll stake myself! I need to read more, and Buffy and Spike are awesome in this story!! I hope that soon the gang warms up to her a little, but Faith can die for all I care, and Riley too, I always hated them lol. ~Ashlie~
Date: 01/25/2005 - 01:59 pm Title: Chapter 7: In the heat of the moment
YEA! I love how Buffy and Spike are together. Please don't let Buffy be a relationship freak (too much). It would be nice to see this kind of confident Buffy approach a relationship with Spike.
Date: 01/25/2005 - 01:57 pm Title: Chapter 7: In the heat of the moment
Very good. All of it. I loved the meeting with Faith and the Scoobies, Buffy defending Spike and understanding perfectly what his situation is, and the fight was very hot. That's a great story.
Date: 01/25/2005 - 01:24 pm Title: Chapter 7: In the heat of the moment
I hope she let to convince herself soon ~_^
Date: 01/25/2005 - 11:59 am Title: Chapter 7: In the heat of the moment
omg so good!!! it's gittin so good and interesting now, i cant wait to read the next chapter!
Date: 01/25/2005 - 11:41 am Title: Chapter 7: In the heat of the moment
This is a good story. I was not sure I wanted to read it at first but I'm glad I did. You are taking your time and building the story. I'm glad that Buffy is still better than Faith even though their rolls are reversed.
Date: 01/25/2005 - 10:45 am Title: Chapter 7: In the heat of the moment
Sorry for being grumpy in my first review, it really was worth the wait. Riveting story! More please.
Date: 01/25/2005 - 10:02 am Title: Chapter 7: In the heat of the moment
Whoohoo! Go Spike! I can't wait until the "convincing" begins. ;) This story rocks so hard core already.
Date: 01/25/2005 - 10:00 am Title: Chapter 7: In the heat of the moment
Finally there's Spike! I love this. I love your Buffy and how the Scoobies reacted to her. I doupt that Buffy's reaction to her Watcher will be a good one. More please?!
Date: 01/25/2005 - 09:42 am Title: Chapter 6: A lively debate about the rights of the unalive
Fantabulous! I love Buffy and I adore the connection developing already between Spike and Buffy. Such a cool rewrite of the Buffy S4 events and Angel S1 events. You're doing an awesome job writing the different version of Buffy, yet I can totally see the essence of her is still there. Want more soon!!
Date: 01/25/2005 - 08:34 am Title: Chapter 6: A lively debate about the rights of the unalive
This story is GREAT! I love it. It may very well be one of my new favorites, but we'll have to see where it goes. The beginning is just amazing. Buffy without her attachments coming into her own this late in the game. I've always liked Faith and now Buffy gets to be a little bit Faithish!
Date: 01/25/2005 - 05:00 am Title: Chapter 5: How to say hello, Sunnydale style
i am into this story. if u update now i will promise to review. I think it'e great how u had her cut Faith down to size. I always thought she was a somewhat cocky fighter. Nice spin on Joss' uinverse by the way
Date: 01/25/2005 - 03:29 am Title: Chapter 4: Debts waiting to be paid
very awesome fic :) can't wait to read more!
Date: 01/25/2005 - 03:10 am Title: Chapter 4: Debts waiting to be paid
ohhh this is so friggin'm awesome. It's really got me hooked i just hope Spike and at least Willow will treat her with respect in grandold Sunnyhell :)
Date: 01/25/2005 - 01:45 am Title: Chapter 3: Breakdown
gotta love that slayer strength...please don't have angel and buffy get together!
Date: 01/24/2005 - 07:57 pm Title: Chapter 3: Breakdown
I love it. Can't wait to read more.
Date: 01/24/2005 - 07:45 pm Title: Chapter 1: Working the streets
I absolutely love it. The whole concept is awesome and so far so is the actual story. Keep up the fantanstic work.
Date: 01/24/2005 - 05:56 pm Title: Chapter 3: Breakdown
Ouch! lol that will teach him to grab people and try to force-save them. Such a typical Angel thing to do. Great story, very original and I can't wait to see what's going to happen and where you're going with it.
Date: 01/24/2005 - 02:35 pm Title: Chapter 3: Breakdown
I love this story so much! I love the plot and i certainly hope that it's a Spuffy story and not a Bangel! :D pls write more , i'm enjoying it lot's
Date: 01/24/2005 - 12:45 pm Title: Chapter 3: Breakdown
Wow! Good stuff! I love your plots, they're always so unique!! Like shippy, i'm wondering a bit if it's Angel/Buffy but I know it'll just take time to get to Spuffy. Keep up the great work and update soon!
Date: 01/24/2005 - 11:27 am Title: Chapter 3: Breakdown
Effectve. :) There was some misspellings, your and you're getting mixed up and you might want to check those or maybe get a beta if you don't already have one. I love the idea of this fic and how the plot is developing. Great job!
Date: 01/24/2005 - 09:00 am Title: Chapter 1: Bitter Revelations
Awesome analysis of Angel. It is so true!! I only wish something like that could have been said on the show - either one. I realy believe (and not just for spin off sake) that Angel did have to leave, but I thought his reasons were bs. And this chapter finally called him on it. Thanks for the bit of closure. lol Am already loving this story. You come up with the most creative plots and presents them in an incredibly evocative way.
Date: 01/24/2005 - 08:41 am Title: Chapter 1: Bitter Revelations
That's great. I like your Buffy. She has it rough, and she notices some deep stuff. I love the start and I hope that Spike will make an appearance soon. They'll be an interesting coupel.
Date: 01/24/2005 - 08:31 am Title: Chapter 3: Breakdown
I'm sorry but is this Spuffy in any way? Coz I've got to say a little too much Angel for my blood. But I guess I'm a little impatient, I'll see how this turns out.
Author's Response: I promise that this is Spuffy, this is taking place in BTVS season 4 Ats Season 1, just after "I'll never Forget" but since no-one knew that another slayer had been called to replace Kendra there have been a few alterations. In a chapter or two, both show cannons will change alot. But fear not, who can teach empty woman to love better than a chipped poet who leads with his heart and not his brain :)
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