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Reviewer: Enchantress Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2005 - 02:06 am Title: Nightmares and Realities

great start.. already hooked, can't wait for more :-)

Reviewer: songgal1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2005 - 01:57 am Title: Nightmares and Realities

Good for spike for practicing some tough love though!

Reviewer: willowmouse Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2005 - 12:59 am Title: Nightmares and Realities

great start (I hope there is more) - really interested in seeing where this can go ......

Reviewer: Addie Logan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2005 - 12:50 am Title: Nightmares and Realities

Really liking this so far. I haven't read many first person fics, and you're doing a good job. Hope you continue. :)

Author's Response: I definitely plan on continuing. I already have the ending written it's just stuff in-between that the characters wouldn't be quiet about that I need to add in.

Reviewer: Seraiza Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2005 - 12:20 am Title: Nightmares and Realities

OMG that is one angsty ending of the chapter......... Cant wait to see what else u have for this story. as for the angst level go as high as u want just as long as u have a happy ending, with them together*obviously, lol* ;-)

Author's Response: I just have to see how long these two crazy kids are going to keep fighting...

Reviewer: Cali Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2005 - 12:01 am Title: Nightmares and Realities

You have me intrigued with this first chapter. Would definitely be interested in reading more. Thanks for sharing your story.

Reviewer: Franchesca Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/14/2005 - 11:50 pm Title: Nightmares and Realities

I really like this. Please keep it up. This is very "slice of life". Did everyone have a relationship like this or was it just me? What a great place to go with these characters.

Author's Response: Thanks, I wanted to start in the middle of everything and see what happened from there.

Reviewer: parisian Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/14/2005 - 11:35 pm Title: Nightmares and Realities

Oh this is good, this is real good... more please :)

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm encouraging the characters to come back and play in my head by enticing them with chocolate. So far it's working. :)

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