Date: 03/30/2005 - 02:11 pm Title: Shattered
parker dies now! okay now that i've stated that, cause i know that you'll at least send him to the hospital with several broken bones, please write more soon. how is buffy and spike gonna deal? will she finally go to the police or at least move in to the frat with spike? i also like how you made faith and riley good people and i must say it is really weird(but in a good way) to have spike and riley and angel friends. more please soon.
Date: 03/30/2005 - 02:10 pm Title: Shattered
parker must have known something was up right? i mean why was he there.. wasn't he sposed to be at a party? eek. i hope all this buffy abusing is going to end soon, pwease?
Date: 03/30/2005 - 01:33 pm Title: Shattered
cant wait to see what happens next....
Date: 03/30/2005 - 12:39 pm Title: Shattered
grr that bastard of Parker...Buffy send him to jail!! Awesome chapter! Well done :)
Date: 03/30/2005 - 12:13 pm Title: Shattered
Isay I am sorry in advance because I never critisize anyones work. I read Spuffy for the pure enjoyment of reading different tales. But why does she have to get bloddied and almost kiled and will she even leave the guy now???? Why did she have to sneak around on a brutal scumbag shes not even married to, has no kids for and has support from someone who cares for her, until this happens. Buffy get a grip, knee him in the groin, hit him in the nose, smash a lamp over his head and lets never be a victim again. Now that I have that off my chest will the entire frat give him a really good beat down and he please go to jail and become Big Bad Bubbas girlfriend.
Date: 03/30/2005 - 11:44 am Title: Shattered
Alright, that's it. I feel like going in your story and kicking Parker's sorry ass. If there's one thing I hate, it's guys beating on girls. They're just cowards and it's pretty sad to beat on someone that doesn't have the strength to fight back. I hope Spike does some serious damage to him. I'm also really glad that this story doesn't have Riley as the bad guy, I'm tired of reading those. Finally someone sees what a good guy he is and doesn't make him the bastard. Great story=)
Date: 03/30/2005 - 11:44 am Title: Shattered
Great chapter it left me wanting more
Date: 03/30/2005 - 11:41 am Title: Shattered
Somebody ought to at least get the cops involved now. Unless he's total Mafia, it's doubtful he'll actually put a hit on anyone. At least a police report will go on his record, make his parents take notice. I doubt they'll want the publiicty over a stupid college fling.
Date: 03/30/2005 - 11:09 am Title: Shattered
I can't believe it. I mean duh of course it was coming but wow. This was a veryr well written chapter and I'm looking forward to the next one.
Date: 03/30/2005 - 10:34 am Title: Shattered
OMG!!!! I want to KILL parker!!! WITH A SPOON!!! A WOODEN ONE!!! ARGH!!! Please update soon!!! Pretty please??? With cherries and Spike on top??
Date: 03/30/2005 - 10:29 am Title: Shattered
.........................whoa.
Date: 03/30/2005 - 10:27 am Title: Shattered
Okay, so, now we have to kill the fu**! I hate brutal men... Very scary chapter, I hope Buffy is okay and Parker burns in hell! Luv, Spuf
Date: 03/30/2005 - 10:17 am Title: Shattered
Ok that's it Parker better start running like the hell-hounds are onto him...... Darn the guys better go out and go get it even with him.... can i juz skin him alive with a hot, soldering knife..... grrrrr.... cant wait for more! great chapter!!!!
Date: 03/30/2005 - 09:56 am Title: Shattered
Oaky, it's time for someone to call the police. Faith's response to the frat boy's leering was a light hearted way to start this dark chapter.
Date: 03/30/2005 - 08:55 am Title: Shattered
ah shit, what a moment to quit a chapter!! It's just terrible, disgusting and just unbelieveable what Parker did. Ugh, he makes my blood run cold. I want to hunt him down and hit him over the heade with a shovel...
Date: 03/30/2005 - 08:45 am Title: Shattered
aw poor buffy. im really glad buffy went to the fraternity house. i hope nothing really bad happened. awesome job. awesome chapter. cant wait for more.
Date: 03/30/2005 - 06:05 am Title: Splintering
Gasp! Oh no! Don't have Parker hurt her too bad :( Lovely Spike emotion in this chapter ~ keep 'em coming :D
Date: 03/29/2005 - 10:58 pm Title: Splintering
Why that sneaky, slimy, filthy, lowdown, bastardly, sleezy little prick! He probably got wind of B & S and was planning to catch them together or maybe someone at the party let something slip and now he's planning to lay into Buffy big time! I hope you have a particularly henious Parker-bashing session planned for when you decide he's no longer needed in this tale cause at this point I wish I could write myself into the tale and torture him to death slowly over 10 chapters! What a waste of skin he is! On an up note - GREAT UPDATE. I hope Buffy really does find a way to put her complete trust in Spike and Spike et al come up with a plan to rescue Buffy from that pond-scummy, flea-bitten, cowardly cur! Oh and about the slower than usual updates? No worries - with a 2 year old in the house I'm surprised you have time to write at all! And they grow so fast (my oldest just moved out a month ago and I swear I was just rocking him to sleep last year !!?!!) so you take time to get all the snuggles and chases and playing you can now - we'll wait for the great writer Ashlee! Thanks for finding the time to share your talent with everyone!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Yes, it is hectic to write with a 2 year old, but it's my way to wind down when he's sleeping or during that magical hour of the day when he's watching 'Wiggles' (aka God's gift to parents). And Parker will eventually get what's coming to him- rewatching the season 4 episodes makes me hate him even more now, because I hadn't watched any since I started writing this LOL! I'll have another update soon!
Date: 03/29/2005 - 10:55 pm Title: Splintering
im so glad your back. i was dying over here with no updates. cant wait for more. pretty please update soon.
Date: 03/29/2005 - 10:18 pm Title: Splintering
Oh no! You just can't leave it there! Poor Buffy, I just don't like the looks of this. One can hope that perhaps Spike can intervene. What a cliff hanger. Such fabulous writing, I just so wish that our heroine wasn't in the perdicament. Great chapter. Please, update soon as you get a chance...
Date: 03/29/2005 - 09:57 pm Title: Splintering
ughhh disgusting i hope the guys beat the crap outta parker. but yeah very awesome fic. =) love the plot though it breaks my heart, that this kinda stuff happens everyday in real life =( and i also love the way u write
Date: 03/29/2005 - 09:45 pm Title: Splintering
i'm really starting to hate Parker.. lol but, love this update...
Date: 03/29/2005 - 07:23 pm Title: Splintering
I just got caught up...and I'm fully prepared to witness some serious Parker Death. Great story though.
Date: 03/29/2005 - 06:37 pm Title: Splintering
Ack! Cliffhanger. Okay, now you need to update right away because I just know that something is going to happen when Spike shows up. I really enjoy the friend angle that you have going on with Spike and Angel. Could completely picture frat guys throwing peanuts at each other. update soon
Date: 03/29/2005 - 06:33 pm Title: Splintering
Oh no! I love this story. More soon!
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