

Date: 01/22/2010 - 07:09 am Title: Chapter 22
ZANDERRRR!!!! What in the world...this story was already great and now this just keeps throwin out great surprises...ooohhh I can't wait til I read ur next chapter! PERFECT!!

Date: 02/28/2009 - 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 2
I'm sure this is a great story and all, it's just that I'm having a really hard time getting through all of the "text type" and incorrect grammar. If you're still a writer and would like to maybe re-post this (or get any of your current work) beta-ized, I'm an English major. I'd be happy to help.
:D
Author's Response: Actually, that would be great! My email is jcarothers2008@yahoo.com or you can reach me on yahoo at xxx_angelwings16_xxx :) I wrote this story when I was like 14 or 15 so there is alot of mistakes of course lol

Date: 07/24/2008 - 11:13 pm Title: Epilogue
I came across this story and I really liked it. I'm one of those who thinks that Xander has too many issues and I really don't like him. I can see him being a murderer but I don't like that he got away with it.
Still, the plot was interesting.
One thing though, I see this is an old story but you may want to revise it, your writing style is rushed at the very beginning and your phrasing needs improvement. I'm sure a beta would help you and I'm sure that you have matured your style which would help this story tremendously.
Good job!

Date: 10/05/2007 - 05:26 pm Title: Chapter 3
oh wow...really interesting...

Date: 10/05/2007 - 05:23 pm Title: Chapter 2
it's really good so far. i like.

Date: 02/22/2007 - 04:35 am Title: Chapter 22
OH MY FREKIN GOD...XANDER..... didnt see that 1 cumin AHHHHHHHHHH

Date: 08/14/2006 - 04:12 am Title: Chapter 36
I found your Story today and I liked it a lot. I read it in one Piece because it is fascinating. I am only confused that Xander got away with Murder.I dont like the idea that he murdered someone and his friends didn`t mind and told the Police that it was Drusilla. That doesn`t fit the Characters. Wouldn`t it have been enough to beat Parker??

Date: 05/27/2006 - 12:26 am Title: Epilogue
great story!! I loved reading it. even with all the drama with dru and angel and xander, it still had lots of spuffy lovin' and happiness. also a funny story!! all around thumbs up from me!!! keep up the great work!!!!

Date: 04/02/2006 - 10:48 am Title: Chapter 3
What a cliff hanger plus really wierd one too i cant wait to see what happens next some fights maybesome major drama coming up love the fic so far definetely recommend the first chapter

Date: 03/11/2006 - 07:01 pm Title: Chapter 32
Wait, so Xander grabbed Buffy's underwear and sniffed them to save Willow.
I'm confused

Date: 12/29/2005 - 02:12 am Title: Chapter 12
im horny now

Date: 08/27/2005 - 04:57 pm Title: Chapter 36
The story idea seems awesome. I would totally read it like the other idea that you had on a previous chapter.

Date: 08/24/2005 - 06:13 pm Title: Epilogue
wow wat a great story!! I luved it to pieces!!!!

Date: 07/15/2005 - 04:39 pm Title: Chapter 30
Oh my god,,, poor Buffy, poor spike, bitch Drucilla, sick Angel, pysho Xander!
Date: 07/15/2005 - 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 24
Øh............... NO i am sorry but i just have to say this. It is a veru good story and i love the way you write it but i really donīt like that Xander is the bad guy, that is sopmething that really has fucked up my brain because i canīt take it serously because when i see Xander in my head i REALLY donīt see that... that... thing you have made him to in your story. So it kind of fucks up the effect that it should have that there is a dangerously murdere inthe house. It is your story and you can do with it whatever you wanīt tio and i am not trying to critizie or anything, i am not doubting yuor writing skills or anything i really think you write it good.. but the hole Xander thing reeeealy fucks up the effect. Sorry

Date: 07/15/2005 - 04:21 pm Title: Chapter 23
No my fucking god what are they doing letting him in like that? okay i know that ther donīt know that he is sick in his head but come on. When someone writes on your wall and then your " best friend " walks in to the room dosenīt that sound a little weird?.. eh... ah.. okay maybe i should just stop writing now.

Date: 07/15/2005 - 04:15 pm Title: Chapter 22
NO NO NO!!!!! That is just so wrong! Xander would NEVER do such thing to Buffy! That just isnīt right. The story it great and everything but i have to say i really donīt like where i think the story are going.

Date: 07/07/2005 - 05:15 am Title: Why me??
thats one godamned blond beaver i would sqeeze and yeah, i love sqeezing beavers!!!

Date: 06/18/2005 - 12:47 pm Title: Chapter 13
wow... he got 4 fingers inside of her... gah! that was REALLY HOTT! great story. very sexy.
Date: 06/16/2005 - 08:44 pm Title: Chapter 12
we should do this and 13
Date: 06/16/2005 - 08:40 pm Title: Chapter 34
angle got his ass kicked ooooooo what lol keep going
Date: 06/16/2005 - 08:38 pm Title: Chapter 33
were is spike? y he not there
Date: 06/16/2005 - 08:38 pm Title: Chapter 32
hope angle gets his ass kicked.
Date: 06/16/2005 - 08:34 pm Title: Chapter 30
keeps getting better and better. P.S we should do a chapter 12, 13
Date: 06/16/2005 - 08:29 pm Title: Chapter 29
good update loved it like i do u