

Date: 12/08/2005 - 09:09 pm Title: Shadows of the world appear
Very interesting chapter. I really liked the descriptions of Faith's experiences and observations under the influence of the revealing spell -- particularly the manifestation of Spike and Buffy's relationship. I'm a little worried about Spike and hope he will be ok.

Date: 12/08/2005 - 08:49 pm Title: Shadows of the world appear
All that I can say is that I'm hooked. I check every day for a new chapter. Awesome story, many thanks for letting us read and enjoy. Thank You!!

Date: 12/08/2005 - 08:34 pm Title: Shadows of the world appear
Aye, there's the rub...Willow.

Date: 12/08/2005 - 08:16 pm Title: Shadows of the world appear
Well, now they know where to suspect.
I really liked the description of how Faith was seeing things. It's something easy to show with pictures, but hard to convey with just words, but this worked.
Hee hee, Dru doesn't play fair...poor Lawson didn't stand a chance against her thrall.

Date: 12/08/2005 - 08:15 pm Title: Shadows of the world appear
So sorry to hear you're still having a hard time!
I've finally gotten all caught up with this story, and I'm thrilled to see another chapter. Faith's spell-vision was fascinating; very curious to se what you do with this.
The Lawson parts were also interesting. I liked Lawson; wished ME'd done more with him. It sounds like you're going to right that wrong, too. Very Cool But Drusilla, Yikes!!

Date: 12/08/2005 - 08:10 pm Title: Shadows of the world appear
Wonderful story

Date: 12/08/2005 - 07:45 pm Title: Shadows of the world appear
AH HA!! We have found the culprit ladies and gentlemen!! Lovely as usual

Date: 12/08/2005 - 07:38 pm Title: Shadows of the world appear
ooh! willow is going to get busted! about time!! great chapeter.

Date: 12/08/2005 - 07:34 pm Title: Shadows of the world appear
This is some intense shit you putting on the page here. Gods that was so heartwrenching. Buffy and Spike clinging to each through their bond is spectacularly written. Faith's trance walk, I could see through her eyes the colors and the blackness that is now surrounding them all. Spike trying to hold back his temper, you nailed his reactions and emotional state. Loved how the wolves are just waitng and how they reacted to Spike leaving the house.
Dru up to her usual self, you do her such justice. Lawson very confused by what he is seeing and I sort of hope he keeps it to himself, though believe Dru has other plans. Kirsten being quick to listen to Spike's every command., There is so much information here. EVIL CLIFFHANGER woman though, with Faith fainting LOL. Thank you for posting, helps melt away the coldness and warms the heart with the impending snow storm headed our way.

Date: 12/08/2005 - 07:03 pm Title: Shadows of the world appear
Ughhhhhh 2 year old going crazy, I will write more in a bit, this was a great chapter

Date: 12/08/2005 - 06:17 pm Title: Shadows of the world appear
Oooh, can't wait for the confrontation with Willow. Again your writing is superb, keep it up, and get better soon.

Date: 12/08/2005 - 05:36 pm Title: Shadows of the world appear
Enjoying your story.

Date: 12/08/2005 - 05:18 pm Title: Shadows of the world appear
Oh my, now that's what I call a freaking awesome chapter!!! Thank you for giving such vivid descriptions of what Faith was seeing during her trance: scenery, the people, and the connection with Spike/Buffy. Gorgeous.
Oh, Spike.....don't blame him for trying to control his temper, and I'm very happy that both Buffy (although under a spell) and Kirsten knew well enough to not push him. Bravo!
That Dru/Lawson scene was disturbing, yet intriguing. I'm getting a feeling that Dru knows he's the weakness that could break apart whatever evil plot she and Angelus have....I'm hoping so, too.
Loved the ending!!! Seems Buffy and Giles might now realize, due to Faith's fainting, who might be the cause of the whole spell. All hell will break loose.
Wonderful, and I really can't wait for more!!!

Date: 12/08/2005 - 05:15 pm Title: Shadows of the world appear
Whoo, what a ride. For some reason it didn't occur to me that Willow was sleeping thru all this? What is the deal with Lawson? and Drusilla? That ought to be interesting.
This story is just fantastic. I love each and every chapter. You capture all the nuances of the characters and bring them to life.
Can't wait for more.
Hope you are doing better..

Date: 12/08/2005 - 05:02 pm Title: Shadows of the world appear
And the culprit has been discovered!

Date: 12/08/2005 - 04:58 pm Title: Shadows of the world appear
Well guess Willow is in for a rude wake up call now. Good chapter seems like things are moving on nicely.

Date: 12/08/2005 - 04:55 pm Title: Shadows of the world appear
That was a really powerful chapter.
I've never read a trance scene like that before. I'm trying to find the right words to say that it was almost like being in a trance-like state alongside Faith. My eyes scanned the words in a slower, more deliberate way sort of mirroring Faith's movements... wierd mojo you worked there, pet.
Fascinating the way you have Faith describe what she 'sees' too. Makes it all unique to her, the black around Tara, the differing hues and depths on Giles and Wes, Buffy and Spike...
And then we get sucked out of the trance and thrust into Spikes growing rage and the pace hots back up... especially when he leaves the house and gets tailed by Mrs HellmouthHound. Interesting Spike can't sense her... Interesting little snippet of Dru and Lawson. Kind of taking a shine to Lawson. Angelus does seem to make charismatic Childer, doesn't he?
Great update, pet. Bet you exceed the 67 reviews for the last chapter!

Date: 12/08/2005 - 04:42 pm Title: Shadows of the world appear
Another lovely, lovely chapter. The words might be a struggle, but they really work well. Ya, Karyn's great isn't she? She's made all my banners for me!

Date: 12/06/2005 - 11:04 am Title: Persistence of memory
its brilliant!

Date: 12/05/2005 - 10:16 pm Title: Our memory is our coherence
This story is fantastic. I am literally on the edge of my seat. And right now, I really hate Willow for being so selfish and stupid ;-)
Please update soon.

Date: 12/05/2005 - 05:18 pm Title: Persistence of memory
Very, very good. Please continue the story. Can't wait till they find out Willow did the spell and then when the spell ends. Something is gonna hit the fan.

Date: 12/04/2005 - 10:44 am Title: Persistence of memory
thanks for the background of Kirsten - i was pretty sure what was going to happen from all the clues but ti was nice to read it! i cant' wait till faith figures out that willow was the one that cast that stupid spell so they can break it - keep up the fantastic work :)

Date: 12/03/2005 - 04:17 am Title: Persistence of memory
Honestly? It was freaking wonderful! Thank you for another outstanding chappie.

Date: 12/02/2005 - 08:59 pm Title: Persistence of memory
Of course its good! Course we all want more. Take care of your self.

Date: 12/02/2005 - 12:33 pm Title: Persistence of memory
Story is still 'bloody brilliant'. Thank you for keeping at it.