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Reviewer: Elenor Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2005 - 04:26 am Title: Persistence of memory

It was good.
I love this story.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2005 - 04:19 am Title: Missing

There aren't enough awful things I can say about Willow right now. Her selfish actions have me spittin' nails.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2005 - 03:37 am Title: Unending lightning

The baby's heartbeat shows up at 6 weeks, so how far along is she? I'd figured from the chapter a while ago, in the bathroom when Spike kissed her stomach, that he already knew.

Author's Response: After the spell is broken, certain actions and circumstances will come to light . . . .

Reviewer: MAGGIE Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2005 - 03:31 am Title: Persistence of memory

BLOODY FANTASTIC,LOVED IT MORE SOON PLEASE GREAT READ MORE SOON PLEASE THANK YOU MAGGIE

Reviewer: MG Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2005 - 03:16 am Title: Persistence of memory

Good chapter. Loads of exposition on Kirsten's situation, but I'm curious how she managed to be there at this point. Can't wait for the next chapter, thanks for updating so often.

Reviewer: riam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2005 - 02:04 am Title: Persistence of memory

good chapter altough since Kristen is going to be born now, where the hell is robbie. Unless his parents aren't spike or buffy. oh no conner is robbie,haha. Call me a genius,... or not.
seeya

Reviewer: jane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2005 - 01:36 am Title: Persistence of memory

Fantastic chapter don't know why you were worried it's brilliant.

Reviewer: Evansmomp Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2005 - 01:00 am Title: Persistence of memory

I feel like you are keeping me on the edge of my seat! The basis for this story is very plausible and a great idea. Your Spike is especially on point and Buffy is understandably a bit subdued. I've been following this story for a while and I feel like an ass that this is the first feedback I've left. I just love how EVERY character you've included is completely the way they would be if this were the way canon had been written.

Reviewer: spikes_niblet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2005 - 12:50 am Title: Persistence of memory

I did not see that coming at all : / and I loved Spikes reaction to it all I cant wait to see what will be happening next

Reviewer: Jade2099 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2005 - 12:09 am Title: Persistence of memory

I thought Spike's reaction was classic! :) I love how the team is still working together to figure out what's going on. I hope Faith can discover that Willow is behind all the spell mumbo jumbo so the Scoobies can break it! Of course...I can't wait to see how Tara reacts to this one. Something tells me she's not going to be stuttering once she does. I really like Kirsten in this story and that Spike & Buffy have finally figured it out. Great update! :)

Reviewer: Dark Eyed Seer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2005 - 12:06 am Title: Persistence of memory

Mwah ha ha haaaa! I KNEW it! I knew she was there's! I'm loving this by the way... I'm sorry you hurt... please don't stop writing, though... I'm terribly selfish.

Reviewer: jo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2005 - 12:00 am Title: Persistence of memory

Wow, great twist. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: RandiGiles Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2005 - 11:42 pm Title: Persistence of memory

Oh MY GOSH!!!! YOU STOPED THERE!!! Is it any freakin good??? Your kidding me right. That was bleedin fantastic. Oh, hot damn, excited, edge of my seat, irritated cause it ended, good.. (look now you've made me sound like a yougurt comercial) (I blame you) I love Spike as a pissed off dad yelling a bitty that shouldn't be present yet...poor lil' bitty-bit

Reviewer: Jersey Girl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2005 - 11:12 pm Title: Persistence of memory

its very good. keep it coming, i am dying to know what happens.

Reviewer: slinkyPK Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2005 - 11:09 pm Title: Persistence of memory

BRAVO!! Bravo!! C'est manifique!!...Lemme guess, you finally got tired of my whining and begging?!? **grins** 'M a very happy girl tonight!

Now that the truth is out there- kinda makes you wish there was the feature where you could just suck those words right back in before they reached parentals' ears- I can only imagine the impending battle between Spike abd Angelus...**rubs hands together in greedy anticipation**...oh, yeah..this is gonna be good!

Reviewer: javelina Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2005 - 10:28 pm Title: Persistence of memory

Great chapter, Niamh! A good read (you write really well, as I hope you know!) and great movement in the plot - great to see the chess pieces shifting around so that our Heroes can get out from under that spell.

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2005 - 10:16 pm Title: Persistence of memory

I just have to say that you are an awesome writer! This story is amazing! Can't wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: Jeni Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2005 - 09:33 pm Title: Persistence of memory

OMG! I'd love to borrow some of Spike's holy f'n hells, but I'm trying not to scandalize the Tag. Nia this chapter is fantastic--very powerful, a continuation of the strong emotions we've been seeing all along. Can't wait for Faith's trance and for what else you have in store for us! Ohhhh I so knew Kirsten was theirs! Gah!

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2005 - 09:26 pm Title: Persistence of memory

Well Spike is one protective daddy......pissed that one daughter may have been saved but at the risk he could've lost another.......and I wonder what is so important she had to come back and save Dawn, and who is Robbe.....her boyfrend, brother, cousin, or the offspring of yet another couple.......more please

Reviewer: Mary Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2005 - 08:40 pm Title: Persistence of memory

Are you kidding? It freaking rocks!

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2005 - 08:39 pm Title: Last remaining light

Oh,. Willow, you stupid, stupid girl.

I wish I had a Spike to take care of me during that time of the month. 6 days of crappiness. Ugh.

Reviewer: Shadowsbabe Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2005 - 08:33 pm Title: Persistence of memory

You're kidding right??? You can't possibly believe that this chapter isn't freaking amazing! Because it is.
The way you crafted the atmosphere and tension was a pleasure..
I found myself holding my breath waiting for the truth to come to light in both situations. It even felt like I was watching Spike and Kirsten's face as the truth was revealed.
I'm glad you left Tara's heartbreak for next time. Don't think I could have taken it this time.

Reviewer: Addie Logan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2005 - 08:27 pm Title: Persistence of memory

Just gonna leave it there? Meanie! lol Good chapter. Secrets out about Kirsten now...looking forward to seeing what happens with Faith and the trance...

Reviewer: Gail Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2005 - 08:26 pm Title: Persistence of memory

Excellent. This chapter and the previous one. Gleefully anticipating more. :)

Reviewer: Amy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2005 - 08:17 pm Title: Persistence of memory

AWESOME!!! More please...

:) God, I LOVE this story!!!

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