I have been catching up on this for the past week. It's an enjoyable mix of schmoop, suspense and violence - all the good things in life!

What an exciting, brutal chapter. The choreography of the fight between Angelus and the teenagers made that scene vivid and frightening. Dawn slipping into shock over Casey's body was also a gripping scene. This chapter was tight and engrossing.

Wow!! I have greatly enjoyed this series since and I get excited every time I see an update. Hopefully more soon. I have my theory on who Kirsten is and I hope that I am right.

Doesn't really matter to me where you break this up - just so long as you don't stop! This is my fav fanfic and I check it everyday for updates - just when I think I have things figured out it gets even more complex - I love it!! Can't wait to find out what gets done with Willow - and what the heck is up with Kirsten?!? She seems to be a combo of Spike and Buffy so...what, did the monks do a trial run before they made Dawnie or am I totally off base? Whatever it is - it is slowly driving me round the bend!!! Keep up the good work! My prayers to you and your bad arm! Hope you feel better!

Oh, I hope Kristen finally makes her presence known to the rest of the family. I'm hanging on your every word!

Oooooh! So sad about Casey. Poor Dawn. :(

Loved this chapter! But, I pretty much love them all. Can't wait for more.

wonderful chapter!! I was so excited to see the story updated :) This chapter was great ~ I can't wait to see what happens when the hounds catch up with the betrayer. If you feel like breaking the story up ~ break it up :) No matter what you do I'm going to continue reading... So good luck with the arm and keep up the fantastic story telling.

Poor Casey. But he went out bravely and with honor against that coward Angel.His death is not only Angel's fault but Willows for taking away thier knowledge of the danger surrounding them and I hope that you make sure she is made well aware of that fact.


As for baners , I can't do any but there are some peopel on lj that are good at them , The only name I can think of right now is darkwaif .

Tears are streaming down my face, so it's kinda hard to write this, but here goes.....poor Casey!!! Oh my, that's one of the most painful death scenes I've ever read. Man, I knew something would happen, and in my naivete, I thought both would survive Angelus. At least Casey showed courage against that monster, yet I can't believe he's gone. Boy howdy, when all's revealed, Willow's gonna pay...big time! Oh please, more soon?

Great chapter with a very exciting and well-written fight. I love that you don't pull any punches as to the the physical brutality and the reality of death, yet, it's still very much a product of the story instead of an end in itself. Well done! (Hope you feel better.)

OMG!!! Oh, poor Casey...poor Dawn...I'm really, really wanting to see both Willow and Angelus slowly tortured to death....Please?

Angel must die now. Willow must have her ass kicked by Tara. Sniveling little selfish bitch. Ok. rant over! Sorry Nia, I'm just ready for non-scooby ass to be kicked! Can't wait until the huntsman gets her. Poor Faith, trying so hard to do the right thing. Update soon, sweetie!