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Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2007 - 05:52 pm Title: A courteous yet harrowing grace

Can't wait for more! You have a wonderful way of moving the plot forward, tying up all loose ends, and the Gandalf line is so easy to imagine Willow as. More please?

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Date: 03/14/2007 - 03:25 pm Title: A courteous yet harrowing grace

Gandalf-Willow? Effective.. only when Willow is 'okay (good)' again she'll turn back to normal, visible for all others.
Such a noise (like Spike and Lawson suffered) must be hell for a vampire with their ears (good hearing). Awe, poor Spike; his duster got hurt too ;-). Good that the powerful blood did help again.
Faith has a good timing, to be there when Dawnie was. Because she knows what Dawn went through.
Mmm so Buffy's future will not only have sunshine it will have storms too. Well would be boring it the 'weather' was always the same. So the little one will have gifts too (I wonder what). I have to reread Kirsten's story. And who's powers were stolen by Willow...
Loved the new chapter :)

Reviewer: Esther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2007 - 02:26 pm Title: A courteous yet harrowing grace

Another gorgeous chapter!! I absolutely love every scene, but it's the Buffy scenes that are truly magical. You've written such a beautiful world of the gods/goddesses that's so easy to imagine. I also love that you've explored so much of Faith's inner psyche because that scene with Dawn just brought tears to my eyes. I can't wait for the next one!!

Reviewer: hwesta Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2007 - 01:25 pm Title: A courteous yet harrowing grace

Great chapter once again, I enjoyed it veryvery much! :)

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Date: 03/14/2007 - 02:28 am Title: A courteous yet harrowing grace

I have looked forward to every chapter of this story from the very beginning and never been disappointed you have an amazing talent thanks for sharing!

Reviewer: Aprilyn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2007 - 01:05 am Title: A courteous yet harrowing grace

As always great chapter. I am sad to see this come to an end, but excited for the next part of the journey to begin.

Reviewer: DizzyB Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2007 - 09:12 pm Title: A courteous yet harrowing grace

I have loved this story and the preceding one so much, that I can't stand to think it might be wrapping up soon. What will I have to look forward to then?

Reviewer: spikeslovebite Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2007 - 08:57 pm Title: A courteous yet harrowing grace

2500 happy now?

Author's Response: *gloms you with kisses* I could be really snide. . but I love you too much for that. From the bottom of my heart I thank you for all the hard work you've done to make this a better story and to push me. . . thanks.

Reviewer: Tamara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2007 - 08:48 pm Title: A courteous yet harrowing grace

Not surprised that power hungry Willow hijacked power meant for someone else. Great update.

Reviewer: Sheila Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2007 - 06:48 pm Title: A courteous yet harrowing grace

Wow what a chapter from faith and dawn close moment together hope they both finf some happeness soon..To buffy having another family to call upon..Great great chapter nia

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2007 - 06:41 pm Title: A courteous yet harrowing grace

Ah, about time she's going home.

So, Willow's powers belong to an unborn child. Who's? A she, a he? Wonder where? We have various possible couples in Sunnydale.......

Nice blood, indeed! Spike's lucky he has an ace in the hole right now. Poor duster.....

And Dawn and Faith....an unlucky pair for mutual comfort, eh? Still, Faith proves she's growing up.

Reviewer: Dee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2007 - 06:20 pm Title: A courteous yet harrowing grace

Great chapter as always.

Reviewer: Stephanie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2007 - 06:19 pm Title: A courteous yet harrowing grace

OK, so it took me 6 days (pesky work!) but I'm all caught up. What a wonderfully written tale. It's such a beautiful piece of work that it sucked me in from the beginning. I can not wait for more. Hopefully Spike will find his way home soon.

Reviewer: MARGARET Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/10/2007 - 01:35 pm Title: Wither into Truth

I LOVE THIS STORY AND AM SO GLAD TO SEE NEW CHAPTERS, THANK YOU SO MUCH!

Reviewer: Chris Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/05/2007 - 03:08 am Title: Justice turns the scale

Whoops! Posted this on chapter 52 by accident, meant it to be on 73.

I generally stay away from WIP's, because I can't stand to wait for the author to update; I like to read the whole story at once. I've had to make an exception for Origins, because this story is - in a word - fantastic. You've done an amazing job building realistic relationships between the characters, and even your OC's are fully formed. I do have one concern, though... You still update slower than I can read : )

Reviewer: Chris Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/05/2007 - 03:05 am Title: End of happiness

I generally stay away from WIP's, because I can't stand to wait for the author to update; I like to read the whole story at once. I've had to make an exception for Origins, because this story is - in a word - fantastic. You've done an amazing job building realistic relationships between the characters, and even your OC's are fully formed. I do have one concern, though... You still update slower than I can read : )

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/02/2007 - 02:34 pm Title: Justice turns the scale

How will Willow's sentence manifest itself? I'm looking forward to fonding out.

Reviewer: wolfspider Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2007 - 07:35 am Title: Justice turns the scale

oh gods that made my day my dearest sister. Gods i love how you weave your story onto the screen and make it so real to me, that I feel the emotions and grandeur of all the characters.

Anya is so great, telling Giles how it will be when they first have sex. Look out world that day.

You gave me tears as Rianwyn told her story *sighs*.

I think the Fey judged Willow well. Though I was looking for her to have death. I think this will be torture enough for her to have watch all her "friends" seek the happiness they are deserve. All that she will never be able to grasp. I believe that I know who will recieve her gifts and use them wisely.

Though I will be sad when this ends. It has been a long road to travel with you on this journey. Though the road is not ending, merely taking another path that will lead to more stories. Cause you know I do love your stories *giggles*.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2007 - 04:35 pm Title: Justice turns the scale

If you have a goal, you fight harder. Just like Spike does.
Awe, and the version, this was Connor, right? Not so much a baby. Another champion. Another story. ...
*sniff* Rianwyn. I guess what happened to her was a long time ago, but it ain't forgotten.
So Willow will get free (some day). Her life is spared but release comes not, until the last of your betrayed is at peace. Maybe she'll use the time and hopefully will see what she did wrong.
~ Happy to see the new chapter :)

Reviewer: Xela Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2007 - 12:47 pm Title: Justice turns the scale

Great update; I'm mixed about seeing ths go, becuase it's a great story but I want to know how it ends!! :) Thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: hwesta Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2007 - 09:18 am Title: Justice turns the scale

Ooh, another chapter :P This was kinda trilling, maybe not the best word for it but I can't find better one just now. :)

Reviewer: Aeryn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2007 - 08:00 am Title: Justice turns the scale

still reading and loving this fic.

Reviewer: Yash Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2007 - 06:05 am Title: Justice turns the scale

Another great chapter. And a great quote from Det. Pembleton.

Reviewer: jane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2007 - 05:07 am Title: Justice turns the scale

Oh wow Willows finally getting her just reward. I can't wait to find out what it means in practice. To be stripped of her powers would be a fitting punishment. The master manipulator devoid of her ability to control. She''ll go mad. More please.

Reviewer: Esther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2007 - 02:55 am Title: Justice turns the scale

Fantastic updates!! And wow, what an ender to this chapter!! Can't wait for another one!!

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