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Reviewer: desrene Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2005 - 06:00 pm Title: A man trustworthy

It is a great story...a little confused about where it is going, but I'm sure you will tie all the subplots together. Loved the dialouge with Oz, Tara, and Willow. Tara and Oz seem perfect allies. Keep it up, really excited about the next chaps.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2005 - 01:46 pm Title: A man trustworthy

I hope you feel better soon. Your story is amazing. Thanks for sharing your talent with us.

Reviewer: Shippy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2005 - 09:59 am Title: A man trustworthy

I loved everything about this chappie. You are very talented.

Reviewer: Kimbewr Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2005 - 07:55 am Title: A man trustworthy

Oh what a lovely chapter.......and great interactions between Tara and Oz.... I love Giles coming to realize Spike's loyalty and his trust growing more and more.... I can't wait for Anya to drop Xander....let him go be Willow's bug eating bitch....LOL

Reviewer: lilpuff Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2005 - 06:57 am Title: A man trustworthy

Glad to see you back at writing. Excellent chapter. I'm a little lost as to just what did Willow do? lilpuff

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2005 - 05:19 am Title: A man trustworthy

Hope you're better now (pain). Therefore you didn't update you LJ, huh? *reading on* PS: I ordered on of the newer Clannad cds :)) I'm glad for Buffy that there's a chance for her to getting pregnant - with Spike's child. Loved the update. So Willow didn't get white hair, she looks more like evil Willow now. Looking forward tor more - when you've time.

Reviewer: sue Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2005 - 03:46 am Title: A man trustworthy

Another wonderful chapter. Would have loved to be a fly on the wall when Willow saw Tara and Oz together - not gonna help her hair revert back to red! Hope you are feeling better - gotta look after yourself or we'll all be deprived of your wonderful tales. Take care. Love and hugs.

Reviewer: jane Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2005 - 03:28 am Title: A man trustworthy

Your pain was not in vain brilliant chapter. Oz and Tara were great, Willow deserves everything she gets. I'm so glad Tara was able to read her I can't wait to see how the gang takes it. I hope the scales have finally fallen from Anyas eyes, she can do so much better than Xander.

Reviewer: Esther Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2005 - 02:59 am Title: A man trustworthy

GREAT CHAPTER!!! Loved the interaction between Willow/Tara/Oz...I felt a little sorry for Willow, but then I remembered everything she'd done...didn't last very long...I loved the beginning with Giles too...interesting how it was with the Aurelian line...hmmm....and the Spuffy was FAB! I like the addition of the S2 look...that's when I knew for a fact that Spike felt something for her....not only lust. Can't wait for more, and I really hope you feel better soon!!!! Take care!!!

Reviewer: so Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2005 - 01:43 am Title: A man trustworthy

I don't speak English a lot. But I cannot stop to read your history , Sometimes by means of a translator. Your history captivates me made laugh me, made crying me. All this energy that giving you by writing this history I want to restore it to you so that your next week Are better That the last one

Reviewer: Mac Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2005 - 12:49 am Title: A man trustworthy

Good stuff. I'm sorry you're having a hard week, and grateful that you still took the time to post this wonderful chapter. Thank you!

Reviewer: Tamara Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2005 - 12:13 am Title: A man trustworthy

Great chapter . Giles' thoughts about where Angel should go is funny. The way Oz is protecting Tara is especially good with the subtle way he threw Willow off. Xander's showing what an ass he is as usual and the reason why Giles and Anya is so much better than Anya and Xander. The backstory on Buffy and Spike and when love and trust started for them is beautiful. It all just reconfirmed why I love this story so much.

Reviewer: Jade2099 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/22/2005 - 11:00 pm Title: A man trustworthy

I'm sorry to hear you're going through such a rough time. Pain is no picnic. I hope you are able to work through it - for your own sanity. This was another marvelous update. The Willow/Oz/Tara scene was priceless. It was nice to know Oz would come to Tara's aide. It put a smile on my face.

Reviewer: sheila Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/22/2005 - 10:33 pm Title: A man trustworthy

love spike and buffy honsty towards each other and love how she trust spike so completely with are without the chip.there so good for each other hope willow evil spell didn't effect spike in any way.And love that giles trust spike andwish that angel was out of there life for good.Hope tara and oz get away from willow fast before she put's a spell on them.Great Chapter Nia Hope You Feel Better Soon And am one fan who can wait ontelly you feel pain free to type up the next chapter of revelations agine.Feel better soon HUG'S

Reviewer: Stephanie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/22/2005 - 10:24 pm Title: A man trustworthy

I always thought that Tara and Oz would have been good friends if they ever got the chance. I love how you're handling their relationship, it seems true to both characters.

Reviewer: Carol Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/22/2005 - 09:58 pm Title: A man trustworthy

I think this Origins story is even better than your first one. Take care of yourself and write when you're ready. You are doing marvelous work.

Reviewer: Jeni Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/22/2005 - 09:13 pm Title: A man trustworthy

Niamh sorry you're having a bad week, sometime real life kicks ass and sucks, huh? Hang in there. Great chapter, as usual. I know I haven't been reviewing, and I'm sorry, but I am still reading and loving it! More please? love ya sweetie

Reviewer: Wolfspider Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/22/2005 - 09:12 pm Title: A man trustworthy

*hugs* to my Nia. I hope that you are able to relax this weekend. Giles that man is psychic i swear it thinking about the chip and the removale of it as if they were all on the same wavelength. NICE NICE NICE interaction the grocery store with that twit Willow. Tara and Oz ROCK with their interaction. Gods that was just awesome the way they just looked pasted her so to speak. Tara using her "gifts" to see what Willow has done. grrrrrrrrrrrrrr Excellent way of putting the conversation. Spike you the man, you have it all why would you be any different with the chip out? He wouldn't, thank you Nia for giving him that back. Xander that undeniable idiot..the village is missing him and he needs to go back. Gods I hate him and Anya needs to drop his ass like a brick in a deep deep hole. You write Xander so well,you give him the full idiot status that he is completely. Buffy and Spike having a nice interaction over the past and knowing that they did have feelings from the first time they met. Spike's being stronger of course till Buffy realized Angel was a total asshole and should be staked though the heart. Oh wait that is my feeling *laughs*...either way Excellent chapter Nia. You are building a wonderful, creepy, spine tingeling upheaval of hell to come.. Whooooooooo bring it on...

Reviewer: demonica mills Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/22/2005 - 09:12 pm Title: A man trustworthy

great update. I love what's going on with all the characters. Willow's reaction was great. I can't wait to see what she is going to do. And spike an dBuffy's talk was very insightful into their feelings.

Reviewer: Addie Logan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/22/2005 - 08:51 pm Title: A man trustworthy

Loved the bit in the supermarket. What must've been running through Willow's head... Great Anya bit, too. You're characterization of her is always spot on. Loved the comment about how Xander made her shriek and hurt her ears. Another sweet moment with Spike and Buffy, and how they're realizing how long they've been moving towards this. Excellent as always.

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/22/2005 - 08:40 pm Title: A man trustworthy

i hope you feel better. the chapter was great by the way. please don't overwork yourself and take your time with the next chapter. i'm sure that whatevery you have cookin' up for us is gonna be worth the wait. it always is. keep up the great work.

Reviewer: Kari Mouke Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/22/2005 - 08:36 pm Title: A man trustworthy

The update was perfect. I loved the way we inched a little farther along in all of the characters lives. This doesn't play as just a Spike and Buffy story. It delves fully into all of the characters making the story rich and full.

Reviewer: Erin Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/22/2005 - 08:28 pm Title: A man trustworthy

This is an amazing story! It's so in depth and intricate. I totally love it. Hope you feel better soon so you can keep those updates coming!

Reviewer: ADRIANA Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/22/2005 - 08:26 pm Title: A man trustworthy

Nia, You know I love your story. I hope you feel better soon and the pain lessens. I think you're a wonderful writer! Adriana :))

Reviewer: Brunettepet Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/22/2005 - 08:26 pm Title: A man trustworthy

Having Giles come to the same conclusion about the chip was a welcome surprise. The scenes widening the rifts between Anya and Xander and Willow and Tara were very well crafted. You did an excellent job with all the actions and emotions in the supermarket scene especially. I'm looking forward to Tara's explanation of what she read from Willow. The quiet scene with Spike and Buffy was rich and emotional. I loved Buffy's recognition that her trust for Spike began to form years before. Nice job working in an unwritten scene from Season 2, it worked beautifully. Sorry you're having such a rough time, RL can be a bitch.

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