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Reviewer: ariadne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2006 - 06:49 pm Title: Comes a rattle and hum

i was so excited to see you had posted. thank-you Nia. i don't know about anyone else but would LOVE a next installment.....please!

*giggles at the "old man" comment* oh that was classic...i can see him now huffin and puffin. that would be quite a site to see giles being carried down the street by two vamps....just too funny!

boy that connor is a smart little guy isn't he. big helper to his big sis. gods i am sooo scared for them. the house shaking, plaster falling and people too. i hope anya is ok.

gotta say....at least xander is tihnking and asking himself why he has been acting that way. sounds to me like he came to a realization of some sort and is finally getting his balls bakc and going to help his friends like he should. i am a little worried about him tho. not a great place for him to be, being bitch slapped by angelus.

the huntsman and his hounds are back! YEAHHHHHHHHHHH...makes my day. i do love them so..........ooooo and he let them loose...go puppies go...

gods Nia...what a web you wove witrh this chapter. the way you go back and forth to all the action is amazing. i know that is a hard thing to do but you make it look effortless.

now i ahve to wait with breathless anticipation for the next chapter

Reviewer: Harpygoddess Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2006 - 06:39 pm Title: Comes a rattle and hum

I'm SO glad that you're updating this fic. Please keep writing!

Reviewer: hmm... Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2006 - 06:05 pm Title: Comes a rattle and hum

awesome chapter! thanks for the update - i would definately continue reading if you decided to do a sequel.

Reviewer: Talen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2006 - 06:00 pm Title: Comes a rattle and hum

I know I sound like a broken record but you outdone yourself in every chapter. Right now I'm sitting on the edge of my chair because I can't wait for the confrontation between Angelus and Buffy/Spike. And I can't wait to know Willow's end. BTW whe n Dawn calls Willow Miss I-wanna-be-Voldemort I thought I could't stop laughing. Thar line is pure genius!!!

I would love to read the possible sequel of this saga (mostly anything you r¡write, really)
You have my most deep and sincere admiration

Reviewer: Fran Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2006 - 05:57 pm Title: Comes a rattle and hum

Things are really coming to a head. I can't wait for the next chapter.

I am curious to learn more about Spike and Buffy and their family so I would definitely read any sequels you write.

Reviewer: H Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2006 - 05:19 pm Title: Comes a rattle and hum

Can't believe there are people NOT still interested in this story. My heart speeds up when I see the updates. 61 chappies & I'm still anxious for more. Hoping desperately for a sequal.......

Kisses!

Reviewer: mikim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2006 - 05:17 pm Title: Comes a rattle and hum

Oh my god! this story is so freaking goooood! there are so many ties and they are all coming together (to be totally honest i had forgotten about the huntsman!) It's like there are dozen of little webs entertwinned together and now you're shaking all of them up (doing your magic) and it all falls into place! I don't know if I'm making any sense and to tell the truth I don't really care I just wanna tell the world how wonderful your story is!
cheers
mikim
ps: i'd be very sad to see this story coming to an end especially when you say there are still more to tell BUT it is your story and you should be the one to decide what's best for you. Though having said that it won't stop me from begging and raving for a sequel! ;-)

Reviewer: Hwesta Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2006 - 05:16 pm Title: Comes a rattle and hum

Great chapter! (as always) :) Thanks!
-hwesta-

Reviewer: halfpastdead Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2006 - 05:14 pm Title: Comes a rattle and hum

tytytytytytytytyttytytyytytytytytyt for the update ive been wating so long its bill

Reviewer: jane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2006 - 05:10 pm Title: A day in the life

I'm lost for words, really terrific update.

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2006 - 05:01 pm Title: Comes a rattle and hum

Ohhh! Can't wait for more. Wonderful!

Reviewer: Verbina Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/05/2006 - 11:49 am Title: Unto the breach

Just stumbled on to Origins a few days ago and have just sat and read through everything so far, I love it! I am a long time Spuffy fan but haven't read anything for a very long time, This was worth the wait. I noticed from some of your ANs that you have been seaking encouragment, well here you go....PLEAS HURRY UP WITH THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!

Cheers

Verbina1@gmail.com

Reviewer: TardyMe Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/04/2006 - 06:04 pm Title: Unto the breach

I'm absolutely loving this story. The characters & dialogue are so perfect. Thanks!

Reviewer: Rotting Future Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/03/2006 - 08:16 pm Title: Unto the breach

Ok I have been reading both Origins and this story for two weeks and just got through it all (damn real life always interfering with good fanfiction). And wow WOW. I love both stories so much. The quotes at the beggining, the way you really delve into all the characters so nothing jus somes out of nowhere, they way the stories flow makes it seem so much more real-you get the everything of the story. So once again wow. I can not wait to read more of this story and more from you.



Why did Willow have to go to a scoobie zone to cast her spells?

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/03/2006 - 08:48 am Title: Half a dozen reasonable hours

LOVE this story!! Had to go back to chapter by chapter page to be able to review just to let you know how much I'm enjoying this!!

Reviewer: Nina Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2006 - 11:52 pm Title: Unto the breach

*Glee*

I just have to launch into my favorite parts...prices to pay (OMG WHAT!?), dancing fighting partners, escaping backstabbing vampires...HOLY CRAP!!

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"The realization of what Buffy and Spike were doing hit Wesley hard and he forced himself not to laugh outright. They were dancing. To a tune they alone heard, and it certainly was neither a waltz nor a minuet, yet it was graceful and riveting to watch." - This was a pure joy to read. The imagery was so perfect I felt like I was holding my own breath as I stood with Wes to watch them battle. It was awesome!
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"Power flared from Willow’s fingertips and she flicked them at Tara, muttering under her breath. Tara struggled for calm, then passed her hand in front of her, palm outward. The movement warded off the arc of power, directing it away from both her and Anya. It hit the wall, cracking the plaster and shaking the house." - Oh that is it. I am so done with Willow. Well if Tara doesn't think she's evil..she is a better person than I because I want to rip Willow's arms off and beat her with them.
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“Only a dead man can cross the boundaries and the price isn’t permanent.” - WHAT?! WAIT!? Sweet Jesus what does that mean?? OMG. Does that mean Spike? *flails*
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"Moments later, the two master vampires were on their way to Revello Drive, just steps behind Harmony and the others." - OMG. It's too much at once!! Willow and now Angel and psycho Dru? Buffy and Spike on the way...IT CAN'T STOP HERE? nononononononono!!

Okay sweetie, here it is: This story just keep rocketing along without missing ONE STEP. It is as exciting as the very first chapters of Book I. To be able to have such a multi-layered story with converging storylines is truly a formidable task, and yet reading it...you make it look effortless. Thanks for such speedy updates! I hope this is a sign that things are going well.

Cheers!
Nina

Reviewer: weyrwolfen Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2006 - 07:55 pm Title: Unto the breach

Ack! What is the price?!?!

I'm really loving Tara in this story. You would see little flashes of her strength on the show, but it was never showcased. I love how you've brought her front and center, and let her grow in her power and confidence.

The fact that Willow is so fargone that even Tara can't reach her is chilling. Way to go, as usual. I'll be gnawing my nails to the quick until you post again.

Reviewer: ariadne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2006 - 04:39 pm Title: Unto the breach

wow..those are some powerful wards!!!

that was a pretty daring breakout by angelus. i was hanging on the edge of my seat with that one.

i liked your description of the fight scene...oh crap Nia...poetry in motion that was...

aaahhhh, so that was joyce and not Gaia. i thought it would be her b/c she showed up before.
soooo a price to be paid and those two don't know about it...hhhmmmm.....well it has ot do with dawn and the fact that kirsten intervened. thats my bet...the price isn't permenant......well, the huntsman and hounds are still after willow and i wonder if they are going to take her to the hall for judgement and dawn somehow goes too..........am i off my rocker? we shall see...gods i can't wait for more.

i love the fight between willow and tara....wiked wiked stuff...more more more!!!!

now they are all coming to revello and willows there with her wanted ot re-ensoul angel and make everything to her liking....this is gonna be good. i cna't wait to see what Dru has to say about all of this. :)

Reviewer: Wolfspider Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2006 - 02:58 pm Title: Unto the breach

ohhhhhh ohhhhhh this is fantastic. I am so glad you are show casing Tara's powers within, I knew they were there. Anya too, she is a 1000 year old demon for gods sake, how can she not have some magicks left in her. Go Tara standing up to Willow. Whoa who knew Angel had a brain to actually get out. Though I hope he runs straight into a stake held by spike or Buffy. Hmmmm curiousl about Joyce's lil message. GAHHHHHHHHHH MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE preettyyyyyyyy pwweasseeeeeeeee....loved it

Reviewer: Fran Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2006 - 01:44 pm Title: Unto the breach

Ooooooh, very action packed chapter. I love it.

Reviewer: zanthinegirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2006 - 09:39 am Title: Unto the breach

Alays thrilled to see a new chapter of this story! You seem to have found your groove again with this story. I'm so glad!

Interesting twist this chapter. I have an idea what Joyce meant; looking forward to seeing just how off base it is!

Reviewer: hmm.... Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2006 - 07:26 am Title: Unto the breach

so exicted to see two updates so close together. can't wait for the next one :)

Reviewer: Xela Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2006 - 06:45 am Title: Unto the breach

Oh, everyone's going down all at the same time!! Should be interesting!

Reviewer: Hwesta Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2006 - 06:04 am Title: Unto the breach

This gets interesting..There's so much action that I almost forgot to breath and me being all human that wasn't healthy ;D Can't wait to see what's going to happen!
*lots of hugs* -hwesta-

Reviewer: jane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2006 - 01:18 am Title: A day in the life

Oh no Willows putting everyone in danger again. I hope she's gonna get hers soon.

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