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Reviewer: sheila Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2006 - 12:08 am Title: Unto the breach

wow great chapter nia

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2006 - 08:19 pm Title: Unto the breach

Oh no....Willow's ruined soooo many things. I really do hope she dies. She doesn't deserve to live or have redemption. Update soon please!

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Date: 08/31/2006 - 06:13 pm Title: Unto the breach

Another exciting chapter, and I enjoyed the orchestration of the slayers' team fighting. I'm looking forward to Joyce's cryptic message coming into play. Willow and Tara battling it out was vividly written. I have to wonder if fresh blood will fix Angelus' singed hair as well as the burns...

Reviewer: golddrake Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2006 - 06:01 pm Title: Unto the breach

great chapter

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Date: 08/31/2006 - 05:40 pm Title: Unto the breach

WHOA! Willow is seriously out of control. I knew that already, but she's...Now she's in the house and Angelus, Dru, Harmony and Glynnis are just moments away. Oh, god, I'm actually ready to jump outta my seat right now. I keep thinking of the children up there. Both vunerable and unable to defend themselves. ohgodohgodohgod....

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2006 - 05:34 pm Title: Unto the breach

Seems as if Tara and Joyce have to defend the house now. Buffy gotten busy all at once. ~ So Hawkins found Glynnis now. She went to Angelus becaue Spike fights with humans? She doesn't indeed know everything. ~ Angelus is trapped? I don't think he'll die that easy. Yeah, he has indeed a plan. ~ Ah, Buffy felt like dancing.. she and Spike are known for it. And it is contagious too :) Faith and Jenner could feel it too. Oh what a sight, I would love to see it (better only on TV would be too dangerous otherwise). Another riddle from Joyce. I'm not wake enough to get it all but I think the dead man, this could be Spike. And the price isn't permanent? Someone dying? Naw, Joyce said no. And Glynis seems to have chosen Angelus' side now. ~ And Willow is too far gone; Tara can't reach her any longer. And now it's coming all down (everybody is coming) to Revello Drive... ~ Good chapter left me wondering what will happen next :) As is should be.

Reviewer: Talen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2006 - 05:30 pm Title: Unto the breach

Oh God!! Poor Tara and Anya! They have to fight against Angel and Dru too.
Wow, you blew me away! I didn't expect this turn of events.
With each chapter you outdone yourself!!! You are an Awesome writer!! Seriously a couple of "professional writers" could take a leave (or a bunch of them) of your book.
You are truly a genius!!
I can't wait to know how it ends!!!
Love it!

Reviewer: Riahannon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2006 - 05:11 pm Title: Unto the breach

this is really, really good, loving all the suspense and can't wait for your next update!

Reviewer: jane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2006 - 01:22 am Title: A day in the life

Can'tget enough of this fic

Reviewer: Jen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/28/2006 - 12:03 pm Title: More dangerous to lose

Ooohhh, thankyou for updating. I so love this saga you're writing.

Everything's coming to a head. I really like how you have Willow being so self involved and completely clueless about all the damage and hurt she's caused. Same with how you have Xander completely oblivious to the obvious around him.

Want more soon, please?

Reviewer: Yash Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2006 - 08:16 am Title: More dangerous to lose

Grandma Joyce to the rescue! Like always another great chapter. You're on of the best writers I've read. Thanks for the enjoyment.

Reviewer: Nina Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/26/2006 - 10:20 pm Title: More dangerous to lose

Yay! A Nia update and I almost missed it completely! I am sooo excited I can barely put thoughts together.

Grrr that Willow. She just *never* learns. Her audacity seem to have no limit. I am hoping her hubris will be her downfall.

It seems that Glynnis has jumped ship after all. Too bad for her she is backing the wrong horse. It will be delightful to see her go down with the rest. It also appears that Jenner has made his choice. I liked his comment about how she would be dust if Spike found her first. There is no doubt about it after the Spikes (squee) display of his master vampire status. That still gives me chills when I go back and read it.

Xander. I am just done with him. I try to leave some room for redemption, but I just don't see space. Good for Anya finally walking away. I hope it is for good.

Joyce or Gaia?! Either way...ruh roh..Willow is in big trouble.

I am so glad for the update and glad to hear you are getting settled in after what sounds like a bummer summer. Thanks so much!!

Cheers,
Nina

P.S. *Third* book?! *squees* *flails* *cheers*

Reviewer: Jade2099 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/26/2006 - 08:03 pm Title: More dangerous to lose

Wow! That's quite the cliffy you left us with! I can just feel the tension mounting. Great work! I'm sorry to hear that your summer was so difficult. It seems like a common theme for folks, unfortunately. I hope all is better with you!

Reviewer: Xela Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/26/2006 - 03:40 pm Title: More dangerous to lose

I'm on the edge of my seat, waiting for your next update...


please don't let me fall off!

Reviewer: halfpastdead Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2006 - 05:32 pm Title: More dangerous to lose

i love you i love yo i love yo i love you i love you i realy realy love you ive been watting and watting for this chapper and youve left me aging again brill wonderfull fantastic chapter you have to write more plz plzplzplzplzplzpzlzplzplzplzplzplz i canttake any more waing (osrrry about the selling my key bord is fubar)

Reviewer: Wolfspider Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2006 - 04:23 pm Title: More dangerous to lose

Oh yeah PS evil cliffhanger wench LMAO....loved Joyce's spirit body showing up at the end....Damn you are awesome

Reviewer: Wolspider Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2006 - 04:21 pm Title: More dangerous to lose

HOLY SHIT!!!!!!!!! that was oxygen deprived greatness. Gylinnis is gone, Jenner is pissed but not surprised. Ohhhhhh things went kabooommmy. Loved how Buffy said very quickly to dust the pitful excuse for a vamp right away if necessary.. Whoooooooooo I hope Angel goes down. Willow, Willow, Willow, hmmmmmm me thinks that she is leaving a great big trail to her dog bone undie ass. I can't WAIT to see how this all comes together FANTASTIC Stuff. More now

Reviewer: golddrake Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2006 - 03:30 pm Title: More dangerous to lose

great chapter. I hope things calm down for you.

Reviewer: Dee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2006 - 11:18 am Title: More dangerous to lose

Loved that cliff hanger. Can't wait for the Tara/Willow show down.

Reviewer: Hwesta Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2006 - 07:06 am Title: More dangerous to lose

Glad you're back again! A third book? Bring it on :D It's always a pleasure to see an update, this awesome story is worth waiting for! :)
-hwesta-

Reviewer: blueeyedgod Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2006 - 07:04 am Title: Hymn Before Action

oooh this is my very favorite story for ages please please keep the chapters coming!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Aprilyn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2006 - 01:47 am Title: More dangerous to lose

Amazing update. I continue to be amazed at the new twists you throw in. Good Job

Reviewer: sheila Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/24/2006 - 10:31 pm Title: More dangerous to lose

Joyce summers to the rescue willow dosen't know who she's mess with now..Great chapter nia looking forward to the big battle

Reviewer: ariadne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/24/2006 - 09:46 pm Title: More dangerous to lose

can i just say again how much i love jenner!!!!! glynnis made her choice and i for one hope she gets dusted!!!

*sighs* i see xander still has not learned....hes been with cordilia so he doesn't really know whats going on but jeezzz. i wonder where he is gonna wind up? can't wait to see that!!!

yeahhhhh dust the brooding forhead!!!! hes such a dufus! i can't wait to see the confrontation!!!!!
that was a very smart move on anyas part to put holy water in squirt guns!!!! she is soo inventive.
so, if angelus was just questioning glynnis, that can mean he doesn't know about the little talk with spike and buffy and gang???
that was a very nice little bomb our lawson rigged up. i like what you had done with him. he had no depth on the show and you have given him life!!!!!
ok, can i just tell you that i got freekin chill from the last parts of this chapter. now i have to go outside and ground....WOW!!!!
Gaia has arrived..............let the lessons begin!!

oh Nia..this was soooo awesome. i can't begin to tell you how happy i am to see you posted a chapter. *hugs you* your summer has been hectic, to say the least. my condolences to you and your family on your loss and i hope your health is improving.

Nia is my sister....how lucky am I

Reviewer: secreetguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/24/2006 - 08:55 pm Title: More dangerous to lose

I really wish Willow would just die! I hope they don't try to save her! The stupid girl! She will never get it I think! Is Angelus gonna become Angel again? I kinda hope not! Update soon please!

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