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Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/28/2006 - 07:17 pm Title: The enemy of my enemy

Wow, what are they gonna do to stop Willow? I hope the Huntsman gets her. She needs to die. Because of her Casey died, so she should as well. Poor Dawn. The danger she's putting everybody in for her own selfish needs is unacceptable. I hope she gets what she deserves! Pain.
Great chapter and story so far! Update soon please!

Reviewer: Kendra Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/28/2006 - 07:12 pm Title: The enemy of my enemy

Ooh, good stuff. I've loved everything I've read so far and it just keeps getting more and more interesting. Don't give it up. Can't wait till the next chapter.

Reviewer: Dee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/28/2006 - 06:57 pm Title: The enemy of my enemy

I hope the muse gives you some inspiration to keep going on this story. I still feel like it is moving right along. Every chapter flows. The plot is well thought out and the story is very enjoyable. Looking forward to another update.

Reviewer: zanthinegirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/28/2006 - 06:30 pm Title: The enemy of my enemy

Continuing to really enjoy this story; always delighted to see you've updated!

I hope you don't slow down the updates though!

Reviewer: Abbyland Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/28/2006 - 06:28 pm Title: The enemy of my enemy

I was glad to see an update and I hope you keep posting it here even if there are only a few readers/reviews. They may be few but loyal.

The chapter had nice progress so hopefully your muse will cooperate and things will culminate in the next few chapters.

Reviewer: mikim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/28/2006 - 06:14 pm Title: The enemy of my enemy

Gosh! For the last two days, I've been re-reading your story again! I got until chapter 36 of "Origins: Revelations" when I decided to see what other stories had been updated and bl**dy H**L here you are!!! I am so happy right now, you have no idea. Anyway, this chapter was GREAT! (except that I wanna slap Xander silly) gosh, I think I love you. Lol, your story is wonderful! Ooh how pissed is Angelus going to be when he'll realize what Spike and Lawson have done! And where's Willow? OOh the excitement!
well, this is all for me (and I have a theory about the number of hits. We all love this story so much that we all read it several times. I think this is the 4th time that I've re-read Origins from the 1st book so if everyone does that, well you catch my drift ;-) )
cheers
mikim

Reviewer: Dee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/28/2006 - 06:01 pm Title: The enemy of my enemy

Have been following this story from the beginning and eagerly await every update. Sorry I haven't said so before... Of all the current stories, your's is the besT!t

Reviewer: jane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/28/2006 - 05:34 pm Title: A day in the life

Overcome with joy by the speedy update> Wonderful as always

Reviewer: jeanie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/28/2006 - 04:58 pm Title: The enemy of my enemy

it just makes my day when i see an update for revelations. fantastic as always. thank the gods your muse let you get this out. cant wat for more, well i will if i must.

Reviewer: ChrissieLinnit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/28/2006 - 04:44 pm Title: The enemy of my enemy

Lawson's turning out to be one of those endearing, certain to be recurring, OCs, isn't he? You've done a great job developing him. His early appearances were understated and they've accrued in a way that's meant you've gotten him under our skins rather than beating us over the head's with him. Yes, he's one of us now... an honorary Scoobie ;p

Xander's discomfort around Anya is a good reminder of Xanders weakness as a man. His deep prejudices were his worst traits, weren't they? Sometimes, it's easy to overlook that part of him and just see the cute, goofy, clutz, but in this story, his tendency to harbour these types of feelings gives the scene a sinister air.

Loved the Spike/Lawson Sire'Childe thingy. Hope that's not going to cause any problems for Spike & Buffy.

And... just who is the Chosen One?
Spike's

Reviewer: Xela Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/28/2006 - 04:40 pm Title: The enemy of my enemy

I really love this series; it's awesome, so very well written. You canpture the characters well. I hope your muse starts speaking to you soon!

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/28/2006 - 04:37 pm Title: The enemy of my enemy

Even if it was a struggle to get out, for you, I loved the chapter.

Faith is very Faith, Giles day-dreaming in the Watcherly way again, Willow still a target for the Huntsman - which doesn't make me sad at all, and finally, the discussion between Sam and Spike, where Lawson just wants a place to belong again. Great stuff.

And Xander...still a moron, LOL. Oz as cool as ice...I love having Oz in fics.

Reviewer: Selinde Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2006 - 05:33 am Title: Communication got me down

Well I'm woman enough to admit it, I'm quite sucked in. Lovely the way you have your whole cast in a line, ready to dance. Now what will you do, hm?

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2006 - 06:16 pm Title: Ache of heaven

Wow, I love what you have so far! I just found this story and just recently read Origins. You've done an amazing job so far! Keep up the wonderful work! I'm gonna read on now!

Reviewer: SusieDaSpikeSlayer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2006 - 06:32 am Title: The shadow of power

You just keep up the awesome work. Take your time and don't rush with the chapters cause they keep getting better and better!

Reviewer: Nina Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/21/2006 - 08:57 pm Title: The shadow of power

*runs in* I'm late!

Ho-boy..I can't tell you how much this gave me shivers in an oh-so-yummy way..
"His body seemed to lengthen, supernatural energy suffusing his form with power. Power not even matched by the other master vampire."

Squee like only a fangirl could! I love Spike's show of power. God I hope we get to see more of that because it just gave me lovely goosebumps!

The banter between Buffy and Spike over how many slayers he fought was classic . With each chapter you throw in these little tells that show how much more accepting Buffy is of who Spike is now and was before. Makes me cheer for them more than ever.

Oh Willow. What now? Word can't express how much I dislike her with every chapter. I don't think a cookie mea culpa is gonna cut it anymore.

I just don't trust Jenner. I am worried about him.

Oh man, this fic is still just oodles of fun to read. I think I have read this one and the first part a hundred times. Keep up with the marshmellowy goodness! Am I totally bent for saying I hope this fic goes on forever? LOL

Cheers!
Nina

PS. Congrats on the Spuffy award. Yay!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/21/2006 - 05:30 pm Title: The shadow of power

Good that Tara was there.. Xander would have opened the door :) And good too that Buffy found new hope. Best what she can get on the brink of the fight. And I think it is only good that Angel didn't understand what Drusilla is trying to say. Argh.. and now I'm at the end of the chapter and surprise! A cliffhanger :) Loved the chapter and looking forward to Jenner's answer.

Reviewer: Wolfspider Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/21/2006 - 02:59 pm Title: The shadow of power

ohhhhh something looms outside and now it's in the back in pieces..go OZ. I am sure Tara and Anya can get things back on track again. Very nicely done with seen in the magick shop. You could feel the tensions fall and rise. You could feel the passions between Spike and Buffy. Exellent writing. Giving us all a front row seat to something that is not usually shown,.with Spike showing his own and being the master vampire he is. Jenner is a great character. I love how he sets back and takes it all in. Then he knows that the decission has to be made. but UGHHHHH evil cliffhanger woman comes and now we wait on pins and needles. Awesome update. Congrats on the new awards. YOU ROCK!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: fee_kh Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/21/2006 - 02:03 pm Title: The shadow of power

And the tension mounts. Very cool. I like the fact that you let Faith hold herself back. Shows she's grown somewhat.
Keep up the good work, definetley one of my favourites.

Reviewer: Redniblet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/21/2006 - 10:13 am Title: Reveal not every secret

I have been unbelievably captivated by your stories. You are absolutely incredible! Keep it up!

Reviewer: Talen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/21/2006 - 08:22 am Title: The shadow of power

It's about time they see Spike as a powerful vampire, not just a sidekick!! Your writing as always is marvelous

Reviewer: jane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/21/2006 - 01:55 am Title: A day in the life

Superfabulous update.

Reviewer: sheila Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/20/2006 - 11:54 pm Title: The shadow of power

Another great chapter nia..And Congrats On the five awards you so deserve it

Reviewer: Taylormaid Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/20/2006 - 10:23 pm Title: The shadow of power

GREAT update!!!! Enjoying the Jenner/Faith chemistry and.....well, just enjoying everything!!!

Reviewer: Jade2099 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/20/2006 - 09:32 pm Title: The shadow of power

Awesome update! You rock! I look forward to this story and look for it every night! Keep up the awesome work.

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