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Reviewer: Dee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/20/2006 - 08:48 pm Title: The shadow of power

Great Chapter. Love how the story is progressing. Can't wait to see what Willow has done to herself now. Loved the tension in the magic box. Always enjoy your updates.

Reviewer: golddrake Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/20/2006 - 07:59 pm Title: The shadow of power

Great chapter.

Reviewer: mikim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/20/2006 - 06:16 pm Title: The shadow of power

AAAAAHH NONNOONO! Don't stop here!!!
This was a hell of a chapter! Spike was... Gosh! I love Menacing!Master!Vamp!Spike! I was so happy to see an update!
You did a wonderful job!
cheers
mikim

Reviewer: jeanie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/20/2006 - 05:51 pm Title: The shadow of power

great update! i have to say "origins" and "origins: revelations" is definitely in my top 3 favorite spuffy stories of all time/ I have read it from tehe beginning to the end of the current chapter at least 5 times and it gets better and better each time., interesting twist with jenner and faith, love that vampire sparkage. will be anxiously waiting for more.

Reviewer: SpaceLord Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/20/2006 - 05:47 pm Title: The shadow of power

Ohhh cliffy there. Willow sure is on a powertrip that's real bad. Now how will this all turn out? I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/20/2006 - 05:38 pm Title: The shadow of power

Whoo! Tense chapter. Anticipation....it's really all coming to a head soon.

Reviewer: Tara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/20/2006 - 05:33 pm Title: The shadow of power

I am amazed at how you keep up with all the storylines you have going. Another great chapter! I just love your OCs. Can't wait for the next installment.

Reviewer: Anne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/20/2006 - 05:29 pm Title: The shadow of power

You deserve every award that you get your writing is wonderful and the storyline fanstastic

Reviewer: Anonymoose Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2006 - 09:24 pm Title: Reveal not every secret

An excellent story! Definitely keep the plot action coming. I like the Buffy-Spike interaction, but also I think a few more scenes between the other characters would be good, like Oz-Tara, Giles-Anya.

Reviewer: Anonymoose Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2006 - 05:14 pm Title: Don't cry little sister

Excellent story, I really like some parts of it, but the plot action has been a little slow. This is my only complaint, as I found myself skimming a little to get to the action.

Reviewer: GoofyMama99 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2006 - 12:20 am Title: Reveal not every secret

i'm glad to see this new chapter up. i hope you're feeling better. i do have a favor to ask though: i'm a little out of touch with AtS so, can you please tell me, who's Jenner? anyway, it looks like faith will have someone for herself after all. that makes me happy. now she'll stop trying to steal buffy's goodness.

Reviewer: sc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2006 - 09:52 pm Title: An ever fixed mark

you're story of buffy and spike captures the characters so well. it amazes me

Reviewer: gwendolenau Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2006 - 06:26 am Title: Reveal not every secret

I had a day off today & spent a very enjoyable time catching up on this story (Chs 32-54). You are a terrific storyteller and do a marvelous job interweaving all the characters. I especially noticed, reading such a large chunk in one go, how well you do the pacing, with the both the plotting and emotional highs and lows. Great job!

Reviewer: fee_kh Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/11/2006 - 05:15 am Title: Reveal not every secret

Cool. And I can't wait to see Jenner and Faith interact. Gonna be interesting.

Reviewer: Gail Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/10/2006 - 02:47 pm Title: Reveal not every secret

Still a brilliant story that I'm sticking with right till the end.

Reviewer: SusieDaSpikeSlayer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/10/2006 - 08:23 am Title: Reveal not every secret

I'm lovin this story more and more...keep it up!! It can only get better from here

Reviewer: Mira Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/09/2006 - 10:21 pm Title: Reveal not every secret

so good to see you back with the writing!
this story is fabulous all the different plotlines....
Jenner and Faith would be a good pair....and I'm worried about Dawn maybe it's time for Wes to get close to her!?

Reviewer: kassie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/09/2006 - 08:37 pm Title: Reveal not every secret

i actuali read origins a few daes ago....wat with work amounting...i left this till today...havent stopped since the first page...excelent plot and intro of new characters and im glad you found your momentum again..cant wait for the next chapter...my all-time fav author!!! '',

Reviewer: Anna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/09/2006 - 08:37 am Title: Reveal not every secret

I'm so thrilled to see an update. I feel like Jenner: stunned by these new revelations. I can't wait to see where you take this.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/08/2006 - 01:23 pm Title: Reveal not every secret

Mmmm maybe not only Lawson will help, Jenner too. At last these two are strong because of their nature (being vamps). Or Oz as a vampire? He sure doesn't like Angel and he fought (well) before against him (okay maybe it was the element of surprise too). Yep. Spike thinks it too (Oz). *gg* The (ex)watchers were intrigued by Lawson. And Faith is very impatient. I guess they are waiting for Jenner then ;-) Mmm Buffy noticed Jenner's signature being similar to Spike's; and Jenner was very surprised about Buffy's sent. Maybe he noticed she was pregnant? ~ Tara saw Dawn's aura I guess; there she did see the pain. ~ No (to Jenner); he noticed that Spike is mated to Buffy that's why he is so surprised. (Never thought I'd meet another pair. Oh he knows something...) *reads on* Wow... so the human partner lives as long as the vampire one it seems. That's very very good to know. Oh, about the end of this story is near.. I hope there will be another book (we'll see) :)

Reviewer: margaret Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/08/2006 - 01:16 pm Title: Reveal not every secret

oh wow the plot thickens. love this story. thanks

Reviewer: ariadne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/08/2006 - 12:00 pm Title: Reveal not every secret

the end is looming???? no no no.......this has ot go on forever and ever. what will i do without my origins? *sniffs*
loved this chapter and after reading it twice i want more........i beg you. i'm a good minion right???

Reviewer: mikim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/08/2006 - 11:15 am Title: Reveal not every secret

Oh dear! You say the end is looming but I kind of wish this story would go on forever! I love it!
About this chapter: you meanie. Yup, that's right, you read right. You dangle and dangle in front of our noses just to cut it there! Argh. I will eargerly await for the next chapter!
cheers
mikim

Reviewer: Jen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/08/2006 - 10:00 am Title: Reveal not every secret

Oooohhhh It's starting to get interesting again. You still rock and I hope your muse lets you finish the story soon.:)

Hmmm just a few speculations I had... Is Willow ever gonna be told how she caused Casey's death, and is she the reason Angel ended up losing his soul in the first place? Would be funny if you had her re-soul Angel and then they all decide to stake him anyway...

Anyhow keep on writing I'll keep reading.

Reviewer: jane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/08/2006 - 01:37 am Title: A day in the life

This fic just keeps getting better and beter.

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