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Reviewer: F. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/08/2006 - 12:29 am Title: Reveal not every secret

Ooh, what a fun little party. I love Jenner and Faith. And please, keep the Wesley coming.

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Date: 06/08/2006 - 12:28 am Title: Reveal not every secret

IMHO, this was the most spell-binding chapter to date. The plot is thick and juicy, and it's interesting to get a closer look at Lawson and Jenner.

RL may get you down at times, but there are bunches of us still following you and happy about updates whenever they may come. I hope things stay on the upswing!

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Date: 06/08/2006 - 12:12 am Title: Reveal not every secret

“Bryn of Rhuddlan was identified by the Council as a potential slayer in 1585. She died two years later and was somehow resurrected.” He paused for a moment, letting that piece of news sink in, then continued, “She . . . according to Council records, they lost track of her shortly after that.”

Yes, yes. And as we all know, the Council is the end all, be all of information regarding anything of a paranormal nature. (insert sarcasm here)

Looks as though Buffy's got more than just a few meager decades ahead of her. Then again, if I was snuggling with that particular piece of salty goodness, I think I'd wanna stick around for awhile, too. **gg**

While we're on the subject of undead hotties, check out the sparks flying between Faith and Jenner! Is it just me or are those two gettin' ready to do a bit of window-fogging themselves?

Looks like that just leaves Lawson lookin' for a touch of luck in the romance department.

Reviewer: GoldenBuffy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/08/2006 - 12:08 am Title: Reveal not every secret

Ok, just when I thought this story couldn't get any better you go and do this! Man, I can't wait for the next update.

Liked how Tara and Dawn had their small bonding moment. And the scene in the Magic Box with everyone laught minus the two. Great update!

Reviewer: Taylormaid Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/08/2006 - 12:00 am Title: Reveal not every secret

I am soooo glued to this fic! I hate coming to an end of a chapter and having to wait for more...........but its worth it!!

Reviewer: Adriana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2006 - 11:51 pm Title: Reveal not every secret

OMG, you're definitely building up towards the big confrontation. I'd love to read a backstory about Jenner one day. He's fascinating.

Well done, Nia. Hope you're feeling better.

HUGS YOU

Reviewer: Adriana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2006 - 11:51 pm Title: Reveal not every secret

OMG, you're definitely building up towards the big confrontation. I'd love to read a backstory about Jenner one day. He's fascinating.

Well done, Nia. Hope you're feeling better.

HUGS YOU

Reviewer: Adriana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2006 - 11:49 pm Title: Reveal not every secret

OMG, you're definitely building up towards the big confrontation. I'd love to read a backstory about Jenner one day. He's fascinating.

Well done, Nia. Hope you're feeling better.

HUGS YOU

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2006 - 11:08 pm Title: Reveal not every secret

Another slayer mated to a master vampire? I love this mythology and what it predicts for Spike and Buffy's future. This was another strong chapter, and I especially loved the silent ride back from the hospital with Connor squeaking its theme music with his pacifier. Oz greeting them and having their backs as they ferried Dawn and the baby inside was also lovely. You do a great job peppering in small details in each scene, details that make the images come alive.

Reviewer: Carol Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2006 - 10:55 pm Title: Reveal not every secret

Ask and you shall receive. Another nice chapter. Liked the scene with Tara and Dawn.

I could go for Jenner/Faith. It's intriguing.

Carol

Reviewer: M Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2006 - 10:25 pm Title: Reveal not every secret

I love this story and I was so glad to see an update. I thank you and your muse for spinning such a wonderful tale!

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2006 - 10:01 pm Title: Reveal not every secret

Well, isn't that an interesting piece of news! We have an Immortal Slayer.

I like Jenner, in that he's someone who engenders respect just by his presence. Seems to be an honorable sort, for a vampire, anyway.

Ah, Tara...such an asset. So perceptive.

I'd say burn the mansion out during the daytime. Homemade napalm, Molotov cocktails, etc. Level the playing field a lot that way.

Reviewer: sheila Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2006 - 09:13 pm Title: Reveal not every secret

Great chapter nia

Reviewer: Nina Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2006 - 09:02 pm Title: Reveal not every secret

Hot damn! I was hoping Jenner was going to pick up on it and he did! Now that is PLOT THICKENING!

I love the comfortable intamcy between Buffy and Spike now that they are mated. The simple brushing of the hands and comforting touches makes my Spuffy heart swell. It is so awesome how you are able to weave the supernatural into a realistic setting. What boyfriend wouldn't get nervous when the ex's name came up? I like how Buffy didn't take the bait. It says she is becoming more confident in her relationship with Spike.

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Spike looked up at Buffy, who stared down at him. Suddenly, a lifetime together didn’t seem so impossible. His thumb brushed over hers and she couldn’t hold back the tiny gasp that escaped from her.

In an instant, Spike was on his feet, his arms around Buffy, holding her close. - Because Spike and Buffy connecting will get me EVERY time.
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Oz was there, helping Buffy with Connor’s things and staying between her and the street, guarding her flank. Once she’d gained the porch, the werewolf drifted back toward Spike, performing the same function for the vampire.

His actions, while not predatory, were battle-aware. More than cognizant of his presence, Spike was forced to reassess Oz’ possible use in the inevitable confrontation. - Oz is part of the team now and I wouldn't want it any other way. He wasn't drafted or needed to be asked, he is just fell in step without the need for formality. I love Oz.
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Without pausing to explain to anyone, Spike shifted Dawn in his arms and headed for her bedroom. - HIs girls first. Always. *swoon*

An update even when you are sick....awww thanks! Feel better Nia, another great update. Can't wait for more.

Cheers,
Nina:
She who blushes at special mentions. Aww shucks. *shuffles feet*

Reviewer: Anne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2006 - 08:23 pm Title: Reveal not every secret

This story just gets more and more interesting can hardly wait for the next chapter

Reviewer: Anne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2006 - 07:51 pm Title: Reveal not every secret

This story just gets more and more interesting can hardly wait for the next chapter

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Date: 06/07/2006 - 07:26 pm Title: Reveal not every secret

I love Jenner. Oh, and I love Lawson. And I also love the resurrected slayer mated to a vampire mythology. Oh hell, I just love this story, but I do have to ask. What on Earth did Buffy smell like? ;-) I hope the vacation helped you out, with the muse and otherwise. Fantastic chapter! Thanks!

Reviewer: RP Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2006 - 07:05 pm Title: Reveal not every secret

Very very interesting. I'm a might bit confused on the storyline on the last slayer to mate with a vampire though...but I'm sure I'll figure it out!! Much love!

Reviewer: Dee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2006 - 07:05 pm Title: Reveal not every secret

I love the suspense in this chapter. Love the tension between Spike and Jenner. Can't wait to see how this ends.

Reviewer: jeanie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2006 - 06:59 pm Title: Reveal not every secret

always a pleasure to see that you have updated. sometimes i cannot review because i am reading at work. then i forget when i am at home. not reviewing doees not mean that i have not been eagerly awaiting updates. more please. hope rl is treating you alright.

Reviewer: Talen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2006 - 06:40 pm Title: Reveal not every secret

Wonderful update. It's very nice to see Spike recieving the respect he is due as Master Vampire. I like Jenner it's a very intriguing character because he could do anythingm, altough I think he will help Buffy, Spke and co. against Angelus.

As always your update makes my night. Keep the updates coming, even if you have to bribe the Muse :D

Reviewer: zanthinegirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2006 - 06:27 pm Title: Reveal not every secret

Cool twist. Love the update!

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Date: 06/07/2006 - 05:05 pm Title: Reveal not every secret

Dun-dun-dun!
This is so awesome! I completely enjoy this fanfic and am avidly awaiting to see what will happen to our heroes. As always I wait with baited breath.

Reviewer: Angie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2006 - 04:45 pm Title: Reveal not every secret

what a great chapter. I feel so sorry for Dawn. This is really a great story.

Reviewer: wolfspider Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2006 - 04:28 pm Title: Reveal not every secret

Oh hun this was awesome. I know you are not feeling the greatest today,but thanks so much for the posting. Oz's protective stances were right on target for the wolf. Protect your family at all costs. Tara was so wonderful with Dawn and giving her some reasurrance. Dawn has a tough healing road ahead of her. Jenner was magnificent. His demenor of caution and his sending in someone to give his messages....an awesome master vampire. You give his character such life and yet you show his darkness. I loved his shock of Spike and Buffy's mating. Then the giggle fest of his and faith's reactions to one another. Oh Jenner knows of the other mated pair. Very interesting. WOW there could be some serious history lessons here. WOW I want more and more and more....stay well and I hope you are feeling better.

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