Fantastic. i'm thrilled to see this story return. The different threads of the story are captivating and Jenner is turning into an iintriguing character.

I love this story! I am so happy you updated! Fantastic chapter, as usual.

As usual, another wonderful chapter. I love the character of Jenner and want to see more of him. Great job!

Thank you for the timeline recap.

I enjoy Wesley's thoughts about himself and Dawn. They had the potential to make a good couple; I don't recall having seen other fics about them. Good work.

Aw crap, she bailed.

I feel so sorry for Tara. You write so well how she is being sucked into Willow's spell. How the thoughts are being forced on her, alienating her from the rest of the group.
I also like how Kirsten has two sets of memory, solves the little incongruity problem quite well.

You know I only have one problem with this. How are you going to solve the whole time problem? Is it going to be like Chris on Charmed - who disappeared when things had changed. You can't really go down the route of Lost in time. So just curious.
But I have full faith that you will solve the problem, seeing as you have all the others before.

oh, I have the feeling that Tara is going to be really, really pissed off. And Faith is coming back. Yay, that solves the problem of having Buffy fight.

Words fail me. That was brilliant, sweet and you can pretty much work your way through the dictionary and claim all positive adjectives as yours.

Yeah, it's brutal and horrid and cruel, but then that's what he is like. It is not pointless just because you can, furthers the plot. Need I say more?
Still hope it is over soon though.

Forgot that in my last review. She's totally pregnant isn't she. So cool and Spike is letting her tell him, how sweet is that.
Not so happy about Cordy in Angel's hands and am a bit confused whether it was her that was raped last chapter.
And then that final image. I think if I had that in my kitchen. Spike's baby in your arms and him looking at you looking like that. *Fans herself* Whew! Good thoughts.

You know, nobody is quite as good as the poet, but darn you come a close second. You write so well it makes me want to give up. I just love how gentle and lovign Spike is with Buffy and how she finally sees it. This goes a long way for making up for the show. Thank you.

You know I've had this theory. First noticed it in the first part of origins and then it is sorta becoming less nebulos in this one. Now bear in mind that I don't peak ahead so if this actually happens then I still get to crow that I knew way beforehand.
Ther are tendencies that Giles is going to take Xander's place in Anya's life. He comforts her and just involves her in discussions instead of disavowing everything she says. They never really exploited her knowledge after all bar the mayor's ascension and then later Glory. And here they finally do, realising that precisely because she had a unique viewpoint she can add insightful things, but at the same time allowing her to have real human foibles, like cooing at babies. It's like Xander wants her to be human when it suits him - bed I presume, and more demon -like when it doesn't - like with the baby.