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Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2006 - 12:54 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen – And Now Looking In Your Eyes

I'm a bit late but here I am :) ~ Steal the coin back? Spike's choice is a logical one (he will search Katie and Buffy the wagon) yet I understand why Buffy doesn't like it. Well Spike is suspicious now because Katie said her husband died suddenly because of consumption. Mmm I wonder if Spike did find the coin. I fear not. And Buffy is still jealous.

Author's Response: Lots of questions....hopefully I'll get you those answers soon :)

Reviewer: L Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2006 - 11:11 am Title: Chapter Nineteen – And Now Looking In Your Eyes

Worth the wait. Thanks for posting, was beginning to assume this fic was an abandoned.

Author's Response: Oh, thanks, sweetie...hopefully won't make you wait long for the next update -- but thanks for your patience and your support of this story.

Reviewer: Pauly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/11/2006 - 12:08 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Go West Young Man

Oh my..That was hilarious! I read the chapter in the office and was about to laugh out loud quit a few times. This really is a great story; Buffy in denial and yet totally confused and so much delicious UST...I love it.
Thanks for sharing your tale with us.

Author's Response: Thanks for sharing your comments with me....they are always MUCH appreciated!

Reviewer: carri Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/11/2006 - 02:16 am Title: Chapter Nineteen – And Now Looking In Your Eyes

I'm so happy you updated. This story always makes my day. I love to see Buffy getting all jealous again over the 'frontier ho-bag' LOL. If this chapter is the result of you having a writers block, I almost wish for more to come. Just kidding!
Great work with this chapter..

Author's Response: Well, Carri, you made my day by commenting! Thanks so much :)

Reviewer: Kimi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/11/2006 - 01:19 am Title: Chapter Nineteen – And Now Looking In Your Eyes

I like Buffy's conflict over what she's feeling for Spike and the tension between them. Buffy's commentary during Katie and Spike's conversation was funny.

Author's Response: Thanks, Kimi!

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2006 - 10:55 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen – And Now Looking In Your Eyes

That coniving coin stealing bitch! Hope Spike doesn't have to get too initmate with her to get the coin back. Hope Buffy's jealousy moves her to stake her own claim on Frontier William! More please. I'm on pins and needles of anticipation!

Author's Response: LOL, tell me how you REALLY feel about Kate :) Glad to hear you're still enjoying the story!

Reviewer: HPfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2006 - 09:53 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen – And Now Looking In Your Eyes

So glad to see a new chapter in this neat story. Ah, the mystery deepens! Really like your sense of humor. And your characterizations of Buffy and Spike are spot on. So nice to see them dancing around each other as usual! Looking forward to the next update. Soon, p-l-e-a-s-e!

Author's Response: Glad the humor is working for you...tends to be the way my writing goes :) And your comment on characterization just makes me *squee* -- so glad you think I am getting these characters, especially in an environment so out of place for them. Thanks for taking the time to let me know what you think of the story!

Reviewer: scaryscouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2006 - 06:37 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen – And Now Looking In Your Eyes

This is one of my favourite stories, please don't leave it too long before posting again

Author's Response: That is so sweet of you to say! I will try to post more frequently :)

Reviewer: Elizabeth Anne Summers Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2006 - 06:00 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen – And Now Looking In Your Eyes

Oohhh, my poor spikey... but all those jokes of Buffys were hilarious

Author's Response: Thanks, sweetie...glad I hit your funny bone with this chapter :)

Reviewer: ~*~Tasha~*~ Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2006 - 04:52 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen – And Now Looking In Your Eyes

Excellent update. Look forward to more. Maybe Buffy can finally realize that Spike has feelings and a human side too.

Author's Response: Thanks, Tasha!

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2006 - 02:53 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen – And Now Looking In Your Eyes

Yay! An update!

Quite the schemer, Miss Katie is....

Author's Response: Oh, yes...and she ain't done yet :)

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2006 - 01:17 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen – And Now Looking In Your Eyes

Buffy's "Face it, Spike. That skanky, frontier ho-bag has our magic coin..." made me laugh out loud. I loved this entire chapter. The theft forced Spike and Katie back together, which pushed Buffy to further examine her confused emotions. Buffy's discovery of Katie's oppulent wardrobe and her thievery strengthened suspicions that Katie is all kinds of bad.

I'm glad you were able to work through your writer's block, I'm really enjoying this entertaining story.

Author's Response: Writer's block has been beaten into submission -- now just have to fight off RL issues and get back to updating this fic more regularly...thanks for your continued comments and support :)

Reviewer: Irishwoman39 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2006 - 01:13 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen – And Now Looking In Your Eyes

O that is rich.Buffy is finely srarting to feel for Spike.Well this has been a long time coming.Wow gal I had forgotten about this Fic.It is so nice to see you continue this story.I hope we don't have to wait so long for the next chappter.I want to see how this is going to end.Starting with them finding the coin.

Author's Response: Sorry to keep testing your patience on this fic...but I am vowing once again to try to update more regularly. I very much appreciate you hanging in there with me on this one :)

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2006 - 11:10 am Title: Chapter Eighteen - With Noting Between You and the Dark

excellent update. This is such a unique tale,, I love it. looking forward to the next update and to the time when Buffy and Spike finally give in to thier growing attratction! So the coin is missing>? interesting. more please.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and commenting....and a new chapter is up today :)

Reviewer: HPfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2006 - 08:58 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen - With Noting Between You and the Dark

Great story! Spike and Buffy are both right in character. And as for the dialogue - it could have come right off the show. Perfect! Can't wait to see where this is going next. MORE, PLEASE!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! A new chapter is up now!

Reviewer: Mac 1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2006 - 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Go West Young Man

Need more now. Really like this story, and you are evil for leaving it at that cliffhanger!! :-) Please update soon. Please?

Author's Response: Ah, made you wait, sorry...but a new chapter is up now!

Reviewer: Pipergirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2006 - 06:21 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen - With Noting Between You and the Dark

Oh, Spike's ass is so beat after that :) It's bad enough that he had to admit to even *looking* at Katie again, but to lose the only potential way home? Not of the good... Unlike this story, of course, which is very, very good!
Looking forward to the next update.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/06/2006 - 02:20 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen - With Noting Between You and the Dark

I love this vulnerable, stubborn Buffy. She wants to apologize, but really just wants Spike to know she's sorry...Too bad he's not a mind reader. This was another entertaining, well written chapter, and I'm looking forward to more interaction with the thieving, flirting Katie.

Author's Response: Vulnerable, stubborn Buffy is my fav too....why can't Spike just read minds?

Reviewer: klylu Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/05/2006 - 07:41 am Title: Chapter Eighteen - With Noting Between You and the Dark

i knew there was a reason why i didn't like that girl! lol
so, once again... buffy, denial, somone saving her from admitting the truth.... nothing new, huh?
in the last chapters our attention was focused on buffy and spike's relationship... once sentence, and the mysterious time travel is in the limelight again. You like throwing your readers off-balance, don't you? lol

Author's Response: Off balance can be fun, right?

Reviewer: ~*~Tasha~*~ Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/05/2006 - 02:30 am Title: Chapter Eighteen - With Noting Between You and the Dark

Oh crap! First off may I strangle Spike and Buffy. Those two make me want to just kick them both and say wise up! Secondly back that Katie had the coat, and then it seems she took the coin too. Not good. Probably thought it was worth some money or something. So, not of the good. Glad to see an update of this one. Look forward to more.

Author's Response: No strangling of the lead players...LOL...btw, a new chapter just went up today

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2006 - 08:44 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen - With Noting Between You and the Dark

Ho ho! The plot thickens.

Author's Response: And thickens, and thickens, and... :)

Reviewer: scaryscouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2006 - 08:01 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen - With Noting Between You and the Dark

I love this story-a new chapter soon please

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2006 - 06:33 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen - With Noting Between You and the Dark

Oh my.. it has its 'ups' and 'downs'. 'Ups' when Buffy saw that she was lying to Spike and wanted to apology. And explain herself to him. And 'downs' again when Spike told her that they had to keep things straight. *deep sigh* And now it seems as if Buffy was right to mistrusted Katie. .... Till next time; hopefully soon.

Author's Response: Soon, sweetie, I promise.

Reviewer: Burnz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2006 - 05:28 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen - With Noting Between You and the Dark

Wow that was high on the angst factor. Who wants Katie to die a horrible death? Oh me! Yeah that's right. That woman is trouble with a captial "T". Good chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks...and Katie, well, she's headed for something bad, I'm sure :)

Reviewer: carri Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2006 - 05:26 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen - With Noting Between You and the Dark

Hmmm, very intriguing. Maybe isn't the harmless widow hunting after Spike she appeared to be.. Very good chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and commenting!

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