[Report This]Date: 12/13/2005 - 02:10 am Title: VAMPS
Splendid chapter - I'm glad you didn't split it into two because that meant more to read! : ) Can't wait for more as soon as you're able to update!!
Author's Response: Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 12/13/2005 - 01:17 am Title: VAMPS
Oh la la....and the tension mounts........poor Buffy so unaware of the politics and how she is playing right in to Angelus hands.......and Faith for being a twit in not realizing that Buffy was acting out of ordinary and high....but then why should she care...except she didn't do her job and I wonder if Spike will punish her for it. Hmmmm. So want more more more
Author's Response: Yea, Faith doesn't really care about anything, and Buffy is very unaware, but it'll be fun when she starts to become perfectly aware of where she stands ;) Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 12/13/2005 - 01:15 am Title: VAMPS
They are starting to have more conversations that don't end in a fight which is cool and it's fun watching Spike trying to figure her out. I wonder if she even thinks about his past or how he got there besides her over all hate for him.
For as much as Spike and Buffy fight she knows he also keeps her safe in the scary places or situations they get into. In little things at odd times she looks for him for protection or like in this she grabs his coat in the crowd. I like the little touches you add in the story. I like the fact Buffy is smart enough to see thru Angel and his help.Total Rack and Angel set-up I'm thinking to make Spikes gang lose faith in him. It is a most interesting Spuffy relationship I've had the pleasure to find and read.
Author's Response: Little touches and moments are all I can realistically give them right now, and it just so happens that I love them too, so it works out, lol. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 12/12/2005 - 09:50 pm Title: VAMPS
I loved the new added chapter for me the best part was in the car drive over before getting out he lightly touched her shoulder and she didn't flinch from his touch. I know it's a tiny thing but I love the smallest of things in good story telling.
Hope if you can you'll add more.
Author's Response: Yes! Someone noticed it :D Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 12/12/2005 - 09:41 pm Title: VAMPS
Got into this fic last night and could not stop reading it even snuck in the last 2 chap. at work today. This story is superb every chap. is intense and you don't drift in your story like some fic writers can and do. I loved this part the best.
"But what was, at first, brutal softened slightly, his tongue beginning to caress hers, and she was hardly aware that they were both clinging to each other."
Things are changing very very tiny but changing and its cool to watch it unfold. In all the other chap. till now you see Spike play off Buffy have any meaning or effect on him and in this chap. you see him very controled but semi explode on Angel in front of everyone. How he will deal with this I can't wait to see will he A. Be pissed at her or B. react like we do not expect.
I see your a student and write part time due to your work load but I am so blown away with this story I hope you add more.
Michele~
Author's Response: I love new readers :D And I might pick A and B, who knows ;) Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 12/12/2005 - 09:40 pm Title: VAMPS
ooh this story is getting better abd better. please keep on updating!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 12/12/2005 - 06:46 pm Title: VAMPS
Loved it! Especially Spike's increasing jealousy and possessiveness. Excellent name for the bar, by the way. I would say more, but my prediction came true and I'm sick now, so I'm kinda loopy at the moment :-) Can't wait for more - finish AAA!!!
Author's Response: Hehe, you and I would like that part ;) Yea, I thought the name would be cute, and then it just clicked that the place is sort of a metaphor for evil anyway. Look what I stumble across when I'm not paying attention ;) Get better soon!
[Report This]Date: 12/12/2005 - 03:11 pm Title: VAMPS
I sure hope you will continue this wonderful epic story. You bring the characters to life. I love it.
Author's Response: Glad you like them - I worry about the characters sometimes, lol. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 12/12/2005 - 02:27 pm Title: VAMPS
great chapter
Author's Response: Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 12/12/2005 - 01:58 pm Title: VAMPS
Oh finally! An update! I've been waiting for quite some time. Again, this is a great chapter, and I can't wait for more.
Please update soon, yeah?
Author's Response: I'll try! Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 12/12/2005 - 10:13 am Title: VAMPS
Good to see them out and about, with Buffy not being treated quite so badly by the gang - this time getting it from an outsider, with both Angelus and Spike coming to the rescue. The flare-up between Angelus and Spike was a very public show of the dysfunction in their gang, a point which Rack was quick to make, emphasizing Spike's weakness, most of all.
Love the interaction between Spike and Buffy. Great story, it was good as all one part, you let the whole night run its course without interruption.
Author's Response: Good observations about the treatment of Buffy, and the real reason for having that scene ;) Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 12/12/2005 - 05:52 am Title: VAMPS
Well I can see Scott as a hood ornament on Spike Desoto if he finds him. Who says its not Christmas!
You entertain me greatly every time you add more.
Author's Response: LOL! Good xmas idea ;) Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 12/12/2005 - 05:49 am Title: VAMPS
She's nervous and yet kinda wary but still determined to not show weakness even when she's over powered. I really like this last page cause it very much shows Buffy's age, as a teen and emotions she goes thru. Very true to the heart of Buffy.
Cecily a loud mouthed ho! I died laughing at that part.
Author's Response: She wouldn't be Buffy if she didn't try - even if she can't win physically yet, although she's definitely getting there ;) I'm glad you liked the Cecily part! Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 12/12/2005 - 05:42 am Title: VAMPS
::Glee and fic Glomps::
Oh yes! Checking for updates every time you sign on is so worth it.
I about did a dance when I saw the update come on. I love the club scenes and the conversation in the car her just wanting to get out someplace and Spike not wanting her to go almost dreading being there at all. I loved how you played the scene reading it was almost like watching it play out. Great descriptions and intensity and great lines. I couldn't stop myself from laughing as Buffy just never stops daring to go against him and he's so gob-smacked and can't think of a fast enough retort before she walks off. I really loved the ally scene as well but whoa if anybody had lingering ideas as to what Spike might feel for Buffy Angel has no doubt now and being a massive jerk will so totally use it now. God! I want more to read and this was a great long chapter too. Somehow I find reading your stories one chapter is never enough. Ack! Now I have to go back and read it again it's too good not too :D
Do you recommend this story? NeitherLikedDisliked
Are you kidding? I want to change the setting here from "Liked" to "Can't live without more"
:D Pj fan for life :D
Author's Response: Lol, "gob-smacked" is a good description! I'm really glad you, or anyone else, likes it enough to read the same chapter over in the some day, lol! Thanks for all the kind words!
[Report This]Date: 12/12/2005 - 05:30 am Title: VAMPS
I love this story! I hate Angelus and Spike should have saved her...but, I know you have your reasons and the fic still rocks!
Author's Response: I figured Spike does plenty of saving, and that twist would actually serve a purpose, instead of having Spike just mindlessly saving her everyday, lol. I'm glad you like it! Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 12/12/2005 - 05:30 am Title: VAMPS
OMG!
Where has this fic been all of my life!
This is just hot from page one it goes beyond being a page turner. It is like you cannot stop once you start reading it each chater is on fire and you have to jump to the next. This is intense and impressive I have never come across you before but your such a great writer. Do you mind if I beg for more?
(((begs)))
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Author's Response: LOL! That's really sweet of you to say :) Begging isn't necessary, but reviews sure are pretty :D Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 12/12/2005 - 05:24 am Title: VAMPS
Wow gotta say this chapter was on fire start to finish! And it was cool to see them actually go outside of the lair besides being on a job. I liked the snark and humor to their digs to one another and so many under currents between the two.
It's interesting to see in small ways how Spike recognizes she doesn't fit into this world and yet he watches her as she figures it out on her own. Sort of a parenting yet rat bastard kinda side to him in this fic and I cannot help to love it. I mean the boy just keeps screwing up and I'm addicted to it!!!
We keep seeing tidbits of Angel plotting the end of Spikes gang/side in some upcoming gang battle and most likely Rack will be a part of it as well.
I loved this chapter by far its the best fiction I've ever read. It makes me want to lock you in a room with a lap top to make you write some more. But alas... Spuffy Realm has certain protection orders on their writers and "No taking the Author captive" is one of them
4 Stars! Heck 10 Stars!!! And every Fanfic awards possible on the planet.
EVERYONE OVER 18 READ AND SEND IT TO YOUR SPUFFY FRIENDS~!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: I like your observation of Spike's observations, lol. He is very much still stupid on how to handle things correctly with her, but I think that's half the interest. I *am* locked in a room with a laptop, but I just can't write fic, that's all :P Thanks for the review, and the cool ratings!
[Report This]Date: 12/12/2005 - 02:20 am Title: VAMPS
i am loving your story so far!!! pretty please let buffy become buffy soon, you know, the whole 'i'm queen of the bitches and don't mess with me'. i can't wait to read more of your story. I LOVE IT AND I'M DYING TO READ MORE OF IT!!!
Author's Response: Lol! I know what you mean - I really like tough Buffy, but I'm trying to stick to the fact that she's a normal human girl, and she has to develop these things. When she finally does kick butt, I think it will be even better because she earned it, and got there herself :) Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 12/12/2005 - 02:20 am Title: VAMPS
Hee! I didn't know you were updating!
My favorite line: "Don’t stay out of your sight? Why the hell do you think I wanted to come? To spend more time with you?" LOL soooo funny! Also loved how everyone had to spend time "babysitting" Buffy...although bad Faith for not keeping an eye on her.
Eeek Angel better stay away! Ha, Spike does care about her.
Yay I finished this chapter, can I have another? =)
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked that line :D You can have another one when finals are over :P Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 12/12/2005 - 01:11 am Title: VAMPS
Poor little light weight Buffy. Guess she really did try to not be drunk. Such an interesting atmosphere, the two sides against everybody else... And now everyone knows that they don't get along...That really could be very bad, not to mention the badness that will come when Spike lets an undrunken Buffy hear his wrath. Fabulous chapter, can't wait for the next one.
Author's Response: I never said Buffy had any experience with alcohol, lol. And the Adios is something I had the other day - hated it, but kept drinking because it was 10 bucks, lol. Yes, Spike's gonna have to do something to reassert his authority, if not with Buffy, then with the gang ;)
Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 12/12/2005 - 12:22 am Title: VAMPS
Great story. Can't wait to see how everything develops.
Author's Response: Thanks! Appreciate the review :)
[Report This]Date: 12/11/2005 - 11:43 pm Title: VAMPS
It has been awhile since you updated. But I am glad to see that you did. Hopefully the next update will have more Spuffy? hint hint. lol please?
Author's Response: Haha, I always try to throw in Spuffy at least every other chapter ;) Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 12/11/2005 - 11:40 pm Title: VAMPS
I just want to say that I love your story. It's very original and I don't know how you will conclude this story. I just hope that there is no : Spike went to jail to redeem himself. I would much prefer he retires from crime.
Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to tell me!
[Report This]Date: 12/11/2005 - 11:40 pm Title: VAMPS
Hey I really liked this this chapter. I can see that Buffy is warming up to Spike a little and I love that! Keep up thre good work. It is a great story!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you saw the fine lining, lol!
[Report This]Date: 12/11/2005 - 11:40 pm Title: VAMPS
I just want to say that I love your story. It's very original and I don't know how you will conclude this story. I just hope that there is no : Spike went to jail to redeem himself. I would much prefer he retires from crime.
Author's Response: Bleh, I wouldn't just put him in jail and have it redeemed. I can't promise there won't be jail in some context, but that will definitely not be the only thing, if it's used. Thanks for the review!
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