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Reviewer: Verda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/27/2006 - 04:18 am Title: Everything to Lose

Great fight scene. Thank you for letting him win. Wonder who in Angelus' camp killed her? Geez, how much more can Buffy take? Awesome chapter, thanks.

Author's Response: Buffy's gonna have a rough bit for a little while longer.... Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Jackie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/20/2006 - 05:43 pm Title: Everything to Lose

This is great. I love how you're developing the Spuffy relationship, and I think you're doing a great job on working with painful subjects and making it seem realistic. I can see these scenes taking place.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Jackie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2006 - 04:48 am Title: Everything to Lose

Love the story, but are you going to update soon? I am slowly forgetting what has happened! :(

Author's Response: :( I recap, does that help? Lol. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Kalahara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2006 - 04:07 am Title: Everything to Lose

I finally had a chance to catch up on my reviews tonight and gotta say this is the # 1 best written Spuffy fic I've ever come across. So many plot twists and turns so worth reading over and over.
I loved the fact Spike refused to lose and I think once Buffy thinks the whole Amy death scene over and thinks about who was not there during the Angel/Spike fight she will figure out the real killer is. So many great lines and small touches in this past chapter. And I find it interesting Buffy is now seeking or associating comfort with Spike and she turns to him and he takes the time to really try to make love to her/express his feeling towards her a bit without saying anything. I liked the part where he was making eye contact in a wat like almost asking permission. Very well written out scene.
Sorry I'm so late on my review my life is been kinda crazy lately. I hope you have the writing bug soon :D

Author's Response: You give me too much credit! And of course I understand that RL may be crazy - hope you're doing a little better!

Reviewer: j Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2006 - 11:04 pm Title: Everything to Lose

can't wait for the next chapter, hope it comes up soon, because this story is way good. Please update soon, to hell with RL.

Author's Response: LOL, I should quit my day job and go live in a writing cave until it's done. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Ella Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/19/2006 - 07:03 pm Title: Everything to Lose

i really hope you're going to continue this story!

Author's Response: I am, I promise!

Reviewer: sc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/19/2006 - 09:47 am Title: Everything to Lose

im glad ur back to write some more.

Wonderfully-wonderful story!

Author's Response: Thanks!!

Reviewer: sc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/19/2006 - 09:46 am Title: Everything to Lose

im glad ur back to write some more.

Wonderfully-wonderful story!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: JULES Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/19/2006 - 07:43 am Title: Everything to Lose

UPDATES PLEASE. I LUV THIS STORY!!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you! And I did :)

Reviewer: PK Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2006 - 02:41 am Title: Everything to Lose

Bloody brutal fight scquence, awesome...it'll be interesting to see how Buff and Spike progress from here now that Amy was "murdered", shall we say? Ya, I'm gonna say it. Keep up the great writing, love you work.

Author's Response: Thanks :D

Reviewer: VMLE Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2006 - 01:42 am Title: Everything to Lose

Great story please add when you got a chance

Author's Response: I did :) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: WickedPeach Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2006 - 06:13 pm Title: Everything to Lose

Awesome story a friend got me into it and I just cant put it down. Such intensity and use of characters and suspense all pulled together in one unforgettable fic. Hats off to your mad talents here.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2006 - 08:36 pm Title: Everything to Lose

Freaking Awesome! That was Perfect! The tender love scene, followed by the brutal fight and flashbacks! Poor Spike, he finnaly gets a few good reactions from Buffy and Amy has to go and off herself (or was she murdered?!). Can't wait to read the next installment. You totally ROCK!

Author's Response: Murdered ;) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: j Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2006 - 02:42 am Title: Everything to Lose

pj, waiting for updates , please, soon ,please . This is really good.
come on , you know yu wanna dance.

Author's Response: I do, I do!

Reviewer: Digs_Bones Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/12/2006 - 08:38 pm Title: Everything to Lose

***He suckled at her skin, taking his time. He wanted to touch every part of her. He wanted to memorize her skin, the way she moved and reacted to him. He refused to acknowledge that it might be the last time, but a part of him still knew.***

I liked this line cause it gave me hope cause I mean *last time* could be taken a few ways here. Maybe your meaning last time in the sense that this will be the last time Spike touches her and shes not feeling the same kinda connection he does for her. Mabe something earth shattering will happen with Buffy and she will allow herself to be open to him on more emotional levels the next time there is sex she will see and let herself make love.

It could happen!
In PJ fic land anything is possible!
4 stars on your work and cheers to your life Spring is on it's way.
>)))>

Author's Response: Buffy has had a sudden change in ch 19, but the earth shattering is a bit later. Thanks for the review! (I have a land? I feel so special!)

Reviewer: Mellie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/12/2006 - 08:28 pm Title: Everything to Lose

Hi I really love this story it is really so well done every page out shines the other. Question though?
I have noticed her becoming more Spike like and Spike becoming more in touch with his emotions, Biffy isn't going to turn into a gng monster girl is she? Cause more and more she turns her true self off.

I keep thinking just once Buffy let your sweetness or goofy humor side show I hope she does not become so jaded shes not the best parts of Buffy anymore. The reason I liked S/B together the most was their humor and style together and you have written that so well here in this story this while thing is a pleasure to read and I thank you for sharing your work here you are a gifted writer > I'm a huge fan! Stay cool and enjoy life!



Author's Response: Buffy is switching roles with Spike, yes, but it'll only be temporary :) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: v06 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/12/2006 - 08:10 pm Title: Everything to Lose

Damn what a update!

Been thinking on this maybe Harm killed Amy to try become Racks new chic I mean shes not brite but she might be trying to find a safe plsce for herself eith the Rack guy its a crazy idea but who knows.

Author's Response: You put a lot of thought into this! I can't say anything else, lol. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: TMW Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/10/2006 - 03:13 am Title: Everything to Lose

If anyone killed Amy I place all my bets on Angel being behind it, even if it wasn’t by his hand – perhaps he sent Dru or some other crony. Spike told Angel he took Amy for the purpose of showing Rack who had the power. I think Angel saw this as an opportunity to provoke Rack into a war with Spike by having it look like Spike killed her. Angel may have even made plans to run and tell Rack himself so that he can ‘form an alliance’ w/ Rack to bring Spike down (kill him) and thus leaving Angel as the sole leader of the entire gang and rid himself of Spike once and for all (the fact that I think Angel suspects that Dru isn’t entirely ‘his’ b/c of Spike may be a factor as well). After all we still don’t know the real reason why Angel even let Spike into the gang, rather than kill him – I still think Dru had everything to do w/ influencing Angel on that decision.
I like that Buffy sought comfort, but I think this is only a miniscule step forward towards a relationship w/ Spike (I had to take a long cold shower after reading that scene, HOOOOOOTTTTTT). It reminds me of when she first slept w/ Spike on btvs – strictly a need, strictly for escape/comfort, that it had nothing to do w/ feelings for Spike whatsoever, and hey if I’m wrong that’s great really, REALLY great. They still have an incredibly long way to go, but at least she did go to him after the fight and it says something. The line “She had come to him. It hadn’t gone unnoticed”, wellllll I really like that line, A LOT.
What I can’t wait to see is - after Buffy knows the truth that Spike didn’t kill Amy – IF Buffy will willingly sleep with Spike again even if it’s only a sort of thank you for winning the fight. I’m sure it would mean the world to Spike. But on the flip side of the coin, take into account this one line, “He realized that as long as sex was involved, he would always lose”, well, it’d be interesting to see if in an effort to truly show Buffy how he feels, he with-holds or doesn’t initiate sex at all for some while.
I have to take a step back to ch 17… the line ”Sometimes I fool myself, but you’ll always be the same.” If any, what was the implied thought/intention behind that? Was she saying she liked to fool herself, was it some kind of (crumb) hope she spoke out loud by accident, or no meaning at all.
Lastly, I gave a huge squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee when I read this, “He was about to step away but he stopped. Lifting his half-unconscious form off the ground again, Spike added one last thing, “I wouldn’t want your whore if you begged me to take her.” I really hope Dru heard him say that, b$%^ch deserves to know she ain’t all that. And I hope Buffy heard it as well, it would help her believe his earlier statements that he and Dru were the past.
Keep up the good work, I’m addicted to this fic.


Author's Response: Miniscule step is correct, since Buffy likes her some denial! And thank you, I was afraid the scene wasn't hot at all. What a great review - thank you!

Reviewer: angelic_amy Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2006 - 02:31 am Title: Everything to Lose

OMG, excellent chapter PJ! I didn't get to read it until just now, and it was fantastic!

The love scene was beautiful. Spike is really falling in love with Buffy. And she felt something too. Why she keeps trying to deny it when his feelings are so plainly obvious, is beyond me.

And Cordelia... the ordeal the poor girl had to go through! I felt so sorry for her, and the majority of this fic I haven't thought too highly of her AT all.

The fight... you had me soooooo worried! I thought for sure that Spike would win before it began. Then I was panicking that Angelus would when Spike was fading. But then this... And he remembered what he was fighting for.... had me cheering. I was SO relieved.

The ending: I was hoping Buffy would go over there and try and make amends with Spike. But the whole Amy thing? SOOOO did not see that coming. And of course Buffy jumped to the wrong conclusion.

FABULOUS chapter sweetie, I can't wait for the next one. (I'll try not to bug you for it! lol)

Author's Response: She doesn't want to/doesn't think she should forgive him yet. And I'm glad I had you fooled for even a brief second in the fight scene - was worried it was predictable. Thanks for the great review!

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2006 - 12:46 am Title: Everything to Lose

Yeah, the wicked bitch has been beaten, three cheers for the fallen Angel, LOL......I hope once the shock wears off Buffy will come to realize that Spike hadn't killed her......my question is who did.......who of Spike's people is working for Rack......unless Angel was throwing a smoke screen about the Amy for Buffy, but he'd done it in his head so I'm sure it's not him.......hmmmm you have me wondering and playing Dark Side clue......LOL.....

Author's Response: Hee! Dark Side Clue - what a good idea! Thanks for the review :)

Reviewer: Megan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2006 - 02:09 am Title: Everything to Lose

This is awesome. You have to update ASAP!!! Congrats on the awards.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Megan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2006 - 02:09 am Title: Everything to Lose

This is awesome. You have to update ASAP!!! Congrats on the awards.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Megan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2006 - 02:08 am Title: Everything to Lose

This is awesome. You have to update ASAP!!! Congrats on the awards.

Author's Response: Thanks!

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Date: 03/06/2006 - 11:56 pm Title: Everything to Lose

And it's about time she initiated some contact Lol! Mean little cliffie at the end, so you better get to writing, missy :-) I'm glad Spike won (although even if you'd seen it fit to have Angelus win, I'm sure Spike would've come to the rescue somehow hehe). Okay, write write write!!!

Author's Response: So demanding :P YOU write! Lol, I'll race you! (and prob lose) But thanks for catching up ;)

Reviewer: j Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/06/2006 - 10:39 pm Title: Everything to Lose

started reading this story on b/s diaries . I was surprised to find 4 additional chapters on spuffy realm. wish I could find more because i'm really enjoying this one . its very good . Please update soon.

Author's Response: Yea, I have been trying to ease BSD into my updated status because of how long it takes me to write lately. I'm glad you discovered it here :) Thanks!

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