Date: 09/08/2007 - 11:49 pm Title: Chapter 15: Part One
I feel so Sorry for Buffy, but she knew what it would be like when she married him, still feel sorry for her.
Date: 10/02/2006 - 05:19 pm Title: Chapter 15: Part One
uuurg, angel is a jerk. a git. but then I guess we already covered that....cute scene with the bra ;-)
Date: 08/27/2005 - 12:28 am Title: Chapter 15: Part One
I'm late... *sigh* you had to remind me that Buffy is married to Angel - that's what I don't like here. William is so great with Sam :) Maybe you can make Angel divorce Buffy because she did wear the wrong dress? A not pretty enough one? Soon? ;-) And you are right - I don't think anybody likes Angel here in this story.
Author's Response: Sorry for reminding you of Angel..and the Angel/Buffy bit..I don't like it anymore than you do :)
Date: 08/27/2005 - 12:20 am Title: Chapter 15: Part One
This story is killing me. I so want them to be together and yet the whole slow process thing is what keeps me coming back with fingers crossed that another little line will be crossed. They are so going to combust when they finally let loose. One tiny thing that stood out for me though...Why is Buffy wearing a black bra with a pale pink dress? Unless they material is quite thick that baby is gonna show through.
Author's Response: It's a satin dress...not sure if I fixed that here...thank you for these perfect reviews you keep leaving me....Thanks for the review!
Date: 08/27/2005 - 12:20 am Title: Chapter 15: Part One
Oh blackmailing the reader, always works with me. Excellent chapter, things are starting to get a little heated... Please more soon!
Author's Response: Blackmail's fun, huh.....I'll try to have more up soon :-) sorry some of these updates have been a bit delayed. Thanks for the review!
Date: 08/27/2005 - 12:20 am Title: Chapter 15: Part One
Yep, Angel sucks ass. He's so rude and mean..but he's picking up on something there? Interesting. Love the whole scene with Spike seeing Buffy in her bra and how he dealt with it lol. More please!
Author's Response: I'm working on getting you more...really I am...Thanks for the review!
Date: 08/27/2005 - 12:19 am Title: Chapter 15: Part One
I'm really enjoying this, and having Spike as a tutor is a great plot device. I love the believeable way Buffy has been included in the lessons. Sam is a good original character, not too sweet or perfect. I'm happy that Spike and Buffy are hyper-aware that she's married, even though they're attracted to one another. Angel is coming off as an arrogant jerk, nice job there, too! I hope you explain their marriage at some point, she seems to smart to have stayed with him for six years
Author's Response: I will explain it at some point, I promise....thank you for such a wonderful review..always love getting reviews like that :-)
Date: 08/27/2005 - 12:18 am Title: Chapter 15: Part One
Great chapters! Sorry to miss the last one until now, but it just meant I got to read two in a row, which is far from bad, lol. Can't wait for more as soon as you're able to update. Take care, C ; )
Author's Response: Two in a row can be fun :) Thanks for the review!
Date: 08/27/2005 - 12:18 am Title: Chapter 15: Part One
Can't you drop Angel in a deep black hole? Would make the story flow even easier. Actually a good story and a great chapter.
Author's Response: Just good? ;) Thanks for the review!
Date: 08/27/2005 - 12:17 am Title: Chapter 15: Part One
Get divorce for A/B, will be great.
Author's Response: It would be, huh? Thanks for the review!
Date: 08/27/2005 - 12:17 am Title: Chapter 15: Part One
that's short ! I want more!!! ;)
Author's Response: not that short...actually longer than most...Thanks for the review!
Date: 08/27/2005 - 12:17 am Title: Chapter 15: Part One
Great way to let Spike see Buffy half naked! Okay, not very naked but still... You're right, Angel has to be mentioned, he's married to Buffy (sadly). I really like the steady sweetness of this story. spuf
Author's Response: Would anyone really notice if Angel just disappeared? I mean really? Thanks for the review!
Date: 08/27/2005 - 12:16 am Title: Chapter 15: Part One
Angel's a bastard- no secret in that. He tries to control everyone and everything around him, but he's just an insecure jerk behind all of that. Sam's such a sweetheart, willing to forego a snack because of what had happened. And I love the fact William saw Buffy in a bra- that made me giggle. Great update!:)
Author's Response: Said so in another one of these replies (and probably will again) but I love you for picking up on the things I put in there and hope someone will notice....