Date: 09/16/2005 - 05:21 am Title: A Good Squeak
Reading for the first ime, ur story, and OMG love it sofar but, COMDOMS! Oy Ve he isn't a vamp in this!, still only half way through so i'll wait, maybe this comes up next chapter?
Author's Response: LOL read on and you'll find out why I didn't include them =D Glad you like it!
Date: 07/04/2005 - 07:52 pm Title: A Good Squeak
that was hardxcore cool.
--xXx--
Author's Response: thanks =D glad you liked it!
Date: 06/30/2005 - 03:13 am Title: A Good Squeak
Love it!!! Its full of goodness!
Author's Response: aww, thanks!!
Date: 06/29/2005 - 08:26 pm Title: A Good Squeak
Aw that was so sweet and romantic! LOL very funny about Buffy threatening to rape Spike. =)
Author's Response: LOL I was wondering if anyone would notice that =D thanks bunches for the review!!
Date: 06/29/2005 - 06:58 pm Title: A Good Squeak
God, that was hot! ::fans self off:: Way better than mine, by the way. And you were worried about it? Geesh! ;) Update as soon as you can. Hope the move is a good one;)
Author's Response: I doubt it was better than yours, but thanks =D
Date: 06/29/2005 - 06:20 pm Title: A Good Squeak
you did a wonderfull job..no worries there....hope all gose well for you on you're big move......and by the way ..awesome chapter!!!!!!
Author's Response: aww, thanks =D both for the review and for the hoping, lol
Date: 06/29/2005 - 05:02 pm Title: A Good Squeak
i hope you post more soon i love it its soooo good !!!!!!
Author's Response: aww, thanks!!! the next update will probably be a few weeks from now, but I'll have the story finished, so I should be able to update daily then!
Date: 06/29/2005 - 03:15 pm Title: A Good Squeak
I thought Buffy was a bit pushy, but since it's Spike she's totally excused. Wonderful chapter!
Author's Response: lol well at least she's excused =D thanks for reviewing!
Date: 06/29/2005 - 03:05 pm Title: A Good Squeak
I liked very much.........very hot and romantic........
Author's Response: thanks hun!!
Date: 06/29/2005 - 02:33 pm Title: A Good Squeak
I liked it. All the "virginity" scenes are a little cliche, but if they're not, then it's almost like it doesn't work. Plenty of people break their hymens when they're younger and don't experience any pain, but who wants to go into the "falling on a fencepost" story? And Spike wouldn't be our sweet Spike if he wasn't sweet and considerate of Buffy's actual pain or needs. Good luck with your move!
Author's Response: glad you approve of the "virginity" scene, as you put it =D Yeah, Spike's a bit too good to be true--but since I'm writing fanfic, I'm not worrying about that too much, lol. thanks for the review!
Date: 06/29/2005 - 02:11 pm Title: A Good Squeak
Great chapter - you have nothing to feel insecure about! Have fun in Maryland, and no worries about not being able to pst for a bit, it's all good, lol! Take care, C ; )
Author's Response: thanks!! =D I'll try to have fun in MD...there's a beach...tee hee. I will end up posting as soon as I get up there, though, cuz I's a review whore, lol
Date: 06/29/2005 - 02:06 pm Title: A Good Squeak
Uhm, I meant to echo Scarlett's question?
Condom? Where was it?
Of course, maybe Buffy is using birth control, just in case?
Hmmm,
Luv, Spuf
Author's Response: maybe...maybe not...*evil author smirk* don't worry, no baby and no nasty-ass diseases, but the whole lack of a condom thing is sort of important later on...
Date: 06/29/2005 - 02:04 pm Title: A Good Squeak
It was more then okay, it was brilliant!
Good luck on the move and thanks for the Spuffy happy
stuff.
Luv, Spuf
Author's Response: aww, thanks bunches hun! the move...we'll need all the good luck we can get, lol
Date: 06/29/2005 - 01:57 pm Title: A Good Squeak
Condom? Condom? Where was that condom?
Author's Response: the condom was...not there. and don't worry, there won't be a baby, but the condom-less-ness of this chap does get kind of important later.
Date: 06/29/2005 - 01:52 pm Title: A Good Squeak
That was great!! i love how u included the pain. No one ever includes that. It was great!!!
Author's Response: re the pain thing: isn't that weird? because skin ripping=VERY painful! glad you liked it =D thanks for the review!
Date: 06/29/2005 - 01:44 pm Title: A Good Squeak
It was wonderful. Sweey and funny, you did a great job. Im so happy that they admitted theyre in love. I cant wait for more, keep up the incredible work!
Author's Response: aww, thanks! it's great to know you liked it!
Date: 06/29/2005 - 01:39 pm Title: A Good Squeak
Uh, did I miss something, or did they not use protection? Hope Buffy doesn't get pregnant, cuz that always leads Buffy and Spike to breaking up or fighting.... Although, baby Spike? Aww! Anyway... I love the story!!! =)
Author's Response: thanks for the loving of the story =D and the no protection thing...there won't be a baby this time, but it is important a few chapters from now...
Date: 06/29/2005 - 01:31 pm Title: A Good Squeak
It was great!! So glad they made their vows before doing it. Alls right with the world! Wonder if it'll last! :)
Author's Response: lol probably not...thanks for the review!
Date: 06/29/2005 - 01:21 pm Title: A Good Squeak
I loved Buffy's funny " Puh-leeze, Spike, this is so the same thing every single guy says to his virgin girlfriend. I've read, like, a million Avon romances..." It did a great job breaking the tension enough for Spike to admit he loves her. Buffy's "enthusiasm" also did a lot to both build and ease tension in making the decision to go through with having sex. The lovemaking was frantic and hot.
Author's Response: lol glad you liked it, I was trying to lighten things up but keep it serious at the same time =D thanks for the wonderful input!
Date: 06/29/2005 - 12:58 pm Title: A Good Squeak
Just enough of the sappy stuff. Very good chappie! Well now that Spike and Buffy have done the deed I won't have a freak out till you post again! LOL! Uh oh, I don't think our golden couple were 'playing' on the safe side....... baby maybe? Kuddos!
Author's Response: thanks so much for the praise =D and the "safe" thing...he. No baby this time, but it comes into play in a little while...that's all I'm going to say *evil author titter*