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Reviewer: quarles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/23/2005 - 06:49 pm Title: Chapter 8

Heh. Giles is going to have to be quite vigilant with those two. This is a pleasant enough story, but you could definitely benefit from a beta who could help you with grammar and sentence structure/syntax, as you often switch between present and past tense in the same paragraph. I've noticed this in a few of your stories, but it's more obvious with this one.

Reviewer: Lyns Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/23/2005 - 05:01 am Title: Chapter 8

ohhh, the sexual tension, lol! I can just see Giles smacking Spike upside the head, hehe, so funny! Great chapter :D

Reviewer: shelly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/23/2005 - 04:42 am Title: Chapter 8

glad he broke you with dru, it was funny how they got caught though!

Reviewer: Caitie Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/23/2005 - 02:38 am Title: Chapter 8

Ooooooooo! Spuffyness! yay! Can't wait for more, so please update soon!

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/23/2005 - 02:10 am Title: Chapter 8

Way to go Spike! LOL. So glad he finally dropped the loon and made a move on Buffy. Can't wait to see the fall out of that action. . . more please!

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/23/2005 - 02:07 am Title: Chapter 8

great update i loved the spuffyness keep up the good work

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