No offence but this story is really badly written. It's a good plot and stuff but it's just not written well. The dialogue is really simple and it's kinda like you've just made up people and then just given them names of people from the show.

girl I was ready to reach in and smack you silly, LOL....well I think he'd better drop the first sister first......bad form to write to one of his love and still be living and as been doing the other.....bad spikey......if he's asking her to come to him, he could have least broken up with Dru first.......like if I can't have you'll settle for you sister, LOL....bad bad Spikey....LOL he is a bad rude man.......LOL