Date: 07/02/2006 - 06:13 pm Title: Have Faith
i always wanted Bufyy to have an older sis
Date: 07/23/2005 - 08:26 pm Title: Have Faith
Great start. Pressing forward! Kuddos!
Date: 07/07/2005 - 10:30 am Title: Have Faith
Awwww, it's so sad!!! I need more spuffy loving =) But great story, can't wait for the next chapter
Date: 07/07/2005 - 05:17 am Title: Have Faith
lovin' it. but thinking it could get a little weird. i'll just have to read and find out. :)
Date: 07/07/2005 - 03:50 am Title: Have Faith
YAY!!!! another great chapter
Date: 07/07/2005 - 03:46 am Title: Have Faith
That was so Gr8t I loved it.Please update soon..thanks
Date: 07/06/2005 - 07:20 am Title: Have Faith
Gonna miss Joyce :(...but I also can't wait for the next chapter
Date: 06/15/2005 - 05:56 am Title: Have Faith
i think i read something about a slut in there somewheres so yeah i give er a 9 and stuff
Date: 06/14/2005 - 02:18 am Title: Have Faith
Good chapter! Has good potential.
Date: 06/14/2005 - 01:39 am Title: Have Faith
ohhhh god....please update tonight that would just make my day
Date: 06/08/2005 - 03:53 am Title: Have Faith
Great start. I like how you're true to the real characters, Faith is all reckless and slutty, and Buffy is the responsible one. Can't wait to see where Spike fits in but I'm pretty sure I've got a good idea.
Date: 06/07/2005 - 09:28 pm Title: Have Faith
Seriously? Then okay, I can accept that. But when it happened twice now you can see why I would start to think you were up to something else. I stand corrected. Thanks.
Date: 06/06/2005 - 11:51 pm Title: Have Faith
Loved the first chapter!! there was something weird though, with the verb tenses. Maybe instead of using so much present you could use past simple :) lol. It was kind of weird, maybe I'm just used to read in the past simple, but I'm just saying 'cause you're telling a story and it's different to when you write a dialogue. When you tell a story it's more common and used to write in the simple past, otherwise the style's not that good. But in the dialogue it's different, although, you don't use present tense either. Did i express myself well? :) lol, all these lines just to tell you that siple past for when you're telling something about someone, is better ;) lol. Instead of saying "Her sister does this every night...", you could say "Her sister did it every night..." :) lol. Anyway, loved the first chappy ;)
Date: 06/06/2005 - 11:04 pm Title: Have Faith
WOW I love this story!!! Can't wait for more!
Date: 06/06/2005 - 03:03 pm Title: Have Faith
This is a really good start. I know it's hard to have an older sister who is dating, and you're worried about her when she's gone late. I really can't wait to see what happens next! Thanx-
Date: 06/06/2005 - 11:14 am Title: Have Faith
please keep going with this story i really like it
Date: 06/06/2005 - 09:26 am Title: Have Faith
You should continue I like it so far.
Date: 06/06/2005 - 05:46 am Title: Have Faith
Ey....ur story is pretty gud...has a gud ploot n everything...why dun u continue it! waitin for ya to update! :D
Date: 06/06/2005 - 04:31 am Title: Have Faith
so far this story kicks ass i cant wait to find out wat happens next. i love it and want to see how it progresses. i cant believe that faith is such a slut but its understandable. pleaase update as soon as u can, cant wait to read more and see wat happens next thanx
Date: 06/05/2005 - 11:19 pm Title: Have Faith
WOW, Buffy's caring...I'd just bitch-slap Faith =D So, I'm guessing the black car was Spike's? Interesting that Biuffy's only fifteen--that would make Spike at least ten years older than her, right? This story's already got me hooked, in case you couldn't tell =D So update soon!!!!!!!
Date: 06/05/2005 - 06:56 pm Title: Have Faith
keep writing ure really good you should have faith bring spike into the picture by the next chapter and you should have buffy go out with somebodya few capters in or so but we all know there will be sparkage between spike and buffy. write about what ever you want just keep writing
Date: 06/05/2005 - 06:19 pm Title: Have Faith
i really liked this story...it has a lot of prospect and it's quite original...though in my opinion...you should try to work on the dialogues...i think they're a little too simple...but that's my opinion and your story is great...it's just you can do even better!! ;) so thanx and hope you update soon...i'm looking forward for it
Date: 06/05/2005 - 04:43 pm Title: Have Faith
hey i like the story so far keep going!
Date: 06/05/2005 - 01:53 pm Title: Have Faith
Pooor Buffy! Pf course you should go on, lol! Please update soon, cause I can hardly wait for more! Take care, C ; )
Date: 06/05/2005 - 09:16 am Title: Have Faith
Good sart.Enjoying it so far.As for Faith,is'nt 25 a tad to old to still be living at home??