Wow, it reminds me of one of my poems. I know that sounds bad but what i meant was that i loved it, it seems we think along the same lines. It's nice to connect to someone through poetry, i find the words in poems are very heartfelt. Great job, it really wowed me and i think it captured them perfectly!!!

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked the poem! And no that doesn't sound bad at all - as a matter of fact, I just read one of your poems and thought it was really good, so I'll definitely take it as a compliment! Anyway, thanks for your review! ~Jess :-)

Oh my God...HOW can you say you're not good at writing poetry? I don't know you and I've never read anything you've written before, but HOLY CRAP that was good! I swear, if my entire family wasn't in the same room I'd be crying right now, the poem was that touching. Your--um, I guess you'd call it phrasing--was wonderful, too, especially the bits about being a hero and how she saw the hero in his soul...*sniffle* Just plain beautiful. I absolutely loved it. Feel free to write lots more poetry =D

Author's Response: aww, thanks! *hugs* I'm glad you liked it! I was a little hesitant to post it at first, but I decided, what the heck? And now I'm glad I did. I was watching Chosen again and I guess I just got inspired, lol. Anyway, thanks for the review! :-)