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Reviewer: sharon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/05/2006 - 07:21 am Title: Intervention (II)

well that was a tragic chapter (unless the "ouch" part that i found very funny).
but as for the rest, the two innocent victims didn't deserve what happened to them...sure vampires are meant to kill and drink people to heal but you made me feel bad for those two. and poor buffy, well i shouldn't say poor but i should scold her !!!! (but i guess that will be in the next chapter lol).
so thanks for making it clear that those twins can be reeeeaally different....from now on i shall read this story with another state of mind.
bye !!!

Author's Response: thank you, dear, I'm glad you fofund the 'ouch ' part funny. About the victim, I know , but I had no choice.. plus I gotta dmit that, I love also very evil Spike and Buffy in fan fictions, eh eh ! ;) let's see the positive side, the two unlucky one are not two characters of the show at least ;) thanks again

Reviewer: Amelia-Jane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2006 - 11:02 am Title: Intervention (II)

I feel bad for the two victims, but you did do a great job of givings us a very realistic glimpse into ES and EB'S hunting techniques. Poor GB her soul was so conflicted about what happened. Can't wait to find out where things go from here. Great update.

Author's Response: thank you dear, I know the two vicitims did nothing bad, but I had to do that, anyway, I'm glad you enjoyed Es and EB's hunt ;)

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