Well, I both liked and disliked it. I am caught up in this. But I agree with another reviewer. I don't know how yoou get over the fact that he was with her mother. I think she could be mature enough to understand and accept that it wasn't Spike or her mom's fault. But it doesn't change the fact that she's always going to have that vision popping in her head now, and it's heartbreaking and sick and relentless. It will never just be the two of them now, there will always be three in the bed. Is he touching her the same way he touched her mother, kissing her in the same places, it's just natural to feel these things. I was loving your story, but now I don't see how it can realistically be resolved. It reads like they are just going to skim right past it, that Buffy's mature enough and no longer angry so everything will just fall into place for them. To me, that's not realistic. If the tables were turned and it was Buffy who lost her virginity to William's father, how would he deal with that? It's just too much. You're writing is great though. I'll look to see what else you've done. I don't think I can stay with you on this one. Please don't take this the wrong way. I love your writing. I just can't reconcile where this is going. : )