Date: 07/04/2006 - 04:38 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
oh wow...spike is very inventive when he decided to use the claim. looks as tho they still have a ways to go before they come to any understanding. can't wait to see what happens next
Date: 03/08/2006 - 04:21 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
OMG i LOVE this story so much and am so happy i started reading this. i really hope that spike starts to be nicer to her and that he starts to care for him. also i really want buffy to start to care for him and they make it through the dark period thats about to come. please update as soon as u can, im DYING to read more and see wat happens next between them. thanx
Date: 03/07/2006 - 09:37 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
Poor torn Buffy.. So she knows now what it is to be stripped of her free will. If Spike continues like that (in order to protect her) he will be slowly killing her, breaking her. I wonder how it will effect Spike. But therefore your mentioning of dark chapters ahead I think.
Date: 03/07/2006 - 08:15 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
Hey, I'm reading this for the first time and I can't believe I'd missed such a great fic! ;D It's still pretty heart breaking at this point, what with Spike being so evil and Buffy hating him (or so she thought, right?) but hey... spuffy story here, gonna get better eventually.
I love it! Update soon.
Date: 03/07/2006 - 07:41 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
Buffy as always fighting everyone and everything. spike was trying to help her out and trying to let her see that he is capable of feeling,. She just can't wrap her brain around it. You would think she would somehow be trying to get more information about her mother with him....but NOOOOOOO she has to make him play hard ball and he did. Excellent chapter hun. You did a wonderful job brining out Spike's persona as one who can dominate. The darkness is not a bad thing, you showing a side of Spike that was there in series. in the beginning.
Date: 03/07/2006 - 06:00 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
Buffy's melancholy musing was very well written. Spike's segue from comforting to controlling was smooth. Your Buffy has every reson to hate this Spike, and you're doing an excellent job not sugarcoating their relationship.
Date: 03/07/2006 - 02:22 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
great chapter
Date: 03/07/2006 - 06:32 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
good update
Date: 03/07/2006 - 04:54 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
Amazing how she keeps rallying the same lame arguments over and over. She has to know by now that she's just trying to convince herself of these things. It makes for a pretty interesting internal dialogue, I'd wager. And Spike forcing direction upon her. Such a fun little way to show her what power he had. A scary thing both because it shows her how he has power, and how he hasn't been using it before through all sorts of things. Really great chapter. Bring on the darkness!
Date: 03/07/2006 - 04:37 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
Interesting. I wonder how long this game will continue.
Date: 03/07/2006 - 03:36 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
I think if you start reading this...KNOWING and EXPECTING it to be a dark, angsy fic...then there should be no problem..
Even going into it knowing what kind of material it is..it gets hard to read about a character that has almost NO power to help herself. With Spike's ability to control her the way that he does, Buffy really has no say in what is happening to her.
Great update! I'll be watching for more : )
Date: 03/07/2006 - 03:21 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
Dark indeed. That last bit was a tad disturbing. I'll definitely hold on for the "better" part. This is painful, which I suppose is the point. But Spuffiness is on the way, right?
Date: 03/07/2006 - 02:02 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
That chapter... 3 words... oh my lord! It was amazing! The inner battle between what Buffy is feeling and what she knows is very well written, and the part where Spike took her free will away from her so prove his point... loved it! Excellent work!
-Ashley-
Date: 03/07/2006 - 01:54 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
I love dark. Good job with frustrated Buffy and conflicted Spike.
Date: 03/07/2006 - 01:33 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
If I was her, I'd run out into the bright sun and jump into someone's car, or steal one. Take it as far as I could, and just keep running. The further away she got, the less hold he would have through the claim.
There are always choices.
Date: 03/07/2006 - 12:49 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
Nice thoughts from her end. . . .
but oh my god, he could dominate me any time he wanted too
Date: 03/07/2006 - 12:32 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
Wow. Great chapter. Even if it was a little dark for my tastes. I have a feeling though that Spike won't be able to handle it. When Buffy pulls away, loses hope, and stops caring, he will change. Didn't he already say that he liked her spirit? Well that is what I think at least. ; ) Looking forward to more.
Date: 03/07/2006 - 12:23 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
Damn that was a rollercoaster of a chapter. I felt like I was on the ride right along with Buffy. One moment hating Spike, the next enthralled by the passion. Totally worth the wait!