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Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2007 - 01:07 am Title: Chapter Thirty

plans are good. But wow, catching him jerking the jerkin. I imagine he would be doing that a lot

Reviewer: spikes mrs Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/26/2006 - 06:32 pm Title: Chapter Thirty

ohh....

Reviewer: Bekah Leigh Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/17/2006 - 02:36 am Title: Chapter Thirty

I wonder who William is thinking about...

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/14/2006 - 07:38 am Title: Chapter Thirty

Poor girl, all dressed up with no one to do... Great chapter. Love how their still plotting ways out. Wonder if we'll ever see Joyce again. Really fun chapter.

Reviewer: Askita Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2006 - 05:19 am Title: Chapter Thirty

Wonderful! Love the constant everything! *grins* the way you gave him the scar, the sexual tension, the way you incorporate different parts of the actual book into the story. LOVE it! Can't wait for their first attempt at sneaking into the rest of the house. I wonder, when will we hear from Joyce again? Keep the story going! I usually don't sit around for WIP's, I'm way too impatient. But yours it one of a few that I wait and watch for!

Reviewer: Shawnie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2006 - 12:27 am Title: Chapter Thirty

I just read all thirty chapters straight through, and I'm totally hooked. Love the UST. I usually hate first person stories, but your writing is so wonderful, I didn't even notice for a long time. (that's a compliment :)

Reviewer: marstersgirl13 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2006 - 12:23 am Title: Chapter Thirty

omg! that was so amazingly hottttt!! wow! you have got to update soon! that totally made my day!

Reviewer: Steph Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2006 - 09:29 pm Title: Chapter Thirty

Great chapter. I like how the story is progressing (nice tension, possible escape, etc). Please continue with updates.

Reviewer: prophecygirrl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2006 - 02:25 pm Title: Chapter Thirty

Very hot, loving the UST.

Your writing is so engaging, so well craftted. Can't help but wonder, thought, what Spike would do if (when?) he discovers Buffy under the same circumstances????

I am addicted -- more, please!!

Reviewer: Mellissa Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2006 - 03:29 am Title: Chapter Thirty

I guess Buffy is going to have some nice dreams tonight involving her brother.

Reviewer: Lauren Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2006 - 02:47 pm Title: Chapter Thirty

OMFG, come on! So much UST, it's all good though. I hope they find a way out soon, or the UST gets changed to the resolved type of sexual tension. Man. Great story, please update again soon!

Reviewer: Megan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2006 - 09:43 am Title: Chapter Thirty

Absolutely loving the build up and I am looking forward to seeing how Buffy deals with this growing problem.

Reviewer: 76_Bloody_Trombones Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2006 - 08:46 am Title: Chapter Thirty

woah agreed, love the way you write. anyway great chapter lol i think i got an idea what william was thinking of ;p well anyway please post the next chapter soon! cant wait for the update! tara

Reviewer: brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2006 - 05:21 am Title: Chapter Thirty

Hot, hot , hot! I'm with William and Elizabeth on needing to get out of that attic and away from Dru and her punishments. Gee, I wonder if William was thinking about anyone while he was jerking off....lol.

Reviewer: Irishwoman39 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2006 - 03:52 am Title: Chapter Thirty

I want to see them get out of there.Poor boy having to go through that hell.And Buffy cought in the spin of Spikes orgasm.These kids have got to get out of this hell.

Reviewer: Whitelighter354 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2006 - 01:08 am Title: Chapter Thirty

I am really happy that they are going to try and escape the attic. I love the way you write. I wish I could write this good. You describe things so well and you make the readers feel what they are feeling in each chapter. I wonder what is going to happen when they try to leave. I mean, if they succeed then I guess they will runaway and try to get their life in order. Or they might just caught. I so hope they dont get caught. There is no telling what their grandmother will do to them. I womder how Joyce would take ift if they succeded. Well, anyways! I liked the chapter and I really cant wait till you post again. I wonder what is going to happen! ;) Please post soon! I love it! Lighter

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2006 - 10:02 pm Title: Chapter Thirty

Great chapter!

Reviewer: Tuesday Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2006 - 09:49 pm Title: Chapter Thirty

Uhoh! They've reached the point of no return! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: flibble Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2006 - 09:11 pm Title: Chapter Thirty

William is now officially freaked out. hehe. Really enjoyed this chapter. Definitely eager to know what is going to happen next.

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2006 - 08:57 pm Title: Chapter Thirty

Damn..IT's about time they came up with a plan to get out of there.
Very sensual orgasm scene.. : D

Great update!!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2006 - 08:38 pm Title: Chapter Thirty

Good that William thinks very hard of ways to get out of the attic now. And William working out some of this tension ;-)

Reviewer: Mariana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2006 - 08:33 pm Title: Chapter Thirty

wow...just wow... excellent chapter!! keep'em coming **lol** pun intended** thanx so much! ;)

Reviewer: klylu Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2006 - 08:33 pm Title: Chapter Thirty

that was quite sensual!
and i like the idea that they are looking for a way to escape. Is their mother going to visit them again? i surely don't miss her...

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