Date: 09/10/2007 - 01:07 am Title: Chapter Thirty
plans are good. But wow, catching him jerking the jerkin. I imagine he would be doing that a lot
Date: 02/17/2006 - 02:36 am Title: Chapter Thirty
I wonder who William is thinking about...
Date: 02/14/2006 - 07:38 am Title: Chapter Thirty
Poor girl, all dressed up with no one to do... Great chapter. Love how their still plotting ways out. Wonder if we'll ever see Joyce again. Really fun chapter.
Date: 02/03/2006 - 05:19 am Title: Chapter Thirty
Wonderful! Love the constant everything! *grins* the way you gave him the scar, the sexual tension, the way you incorporate different parts of the actual book into the story. LOVE it! Can't wait for their first attempt at sneaking into the rest of the house. I wonder, when will we hear from Joyce again? Keep the story going! I usually don't sit around for WIP's, I'm way too impatient. But yours it one of a few that I wait and watch for!
Date: 02/02/2006 - 12:27 am Title: Chapter Thirty
I just read all thirty chapters straight through, and I'm totally hooked. Love the UST. I usually hate first person stories, but your writing is so wonderful, I didn't even notice for a long time. (that's a compliment :)
Date: 02/01/2006 - 12:23 am Title: Chapter Thirty
omg! that was so amazingly hottttt!! wow! you have got to update soon! that totally made my day!
Date: 01/30/2006 - 09:29 pm Title: Chapter Thirty
Great chapter. I like how the story is progressing (nice tension, possible escape, etc). Please continue with updates.
Date: 01/30/2006 - 02:25 pm Title: Chapter Thirty
Very hot, loving the UST.
Your writing is so engaging, so well craftted. Can't help but wonder, thought, what Spike would do if (when?) he discovers Buffy under the same circumstances????
I am addicted -- more, please!!
Date: 01/30/2006 - 03:29 am Title: Chapter Thirty
I guess Buffy is going to have some nice dreams tonight involving her brother.
Date: 01/29/2006 - 02:47 pm Title: Chapter Thirty
OMFG, come on! So much UST, it's all good though. I hope they find a way out soon, or the UST gets changed to the resolved type of sexual tension. Man. Great story, please update again soon!
Date: 01/29/2006 - 09:43 am Title: Chapter Thirty
Absolutely loving the build up and I am looking forward to seeing how Buffy deals with this growing problem.
Date: 01/29/2006 - 08:46 am Title: Chapter Thirty
woah agreed, love the way you write. anyway great chapter lol i think i got an idea what william was thinking of ;p well anyway please post the next chapter soon! cant wait for the update! tara
Date: 01/29/2006 - 05:21 am Title: Chapter Thirty
Hot, hot , hot! I'm with William and Elizabeth on needing to get out of that attic and away from Dru and her punishments. Gee, I wonder if William was thinking about anyone while he was jerking off....lol.
Date: 01/29/2006 - 03:52 am Title: Chapter Thirty
I want to see them get out of there.Poor boy having to go through that hell.And Buffy cought in the spin of Spikes orgasm.These kids have got to get out of this hell.
Date: 01/29/2006 - 01:08 am Title: Chapter Thirty
I am really happy that they are going to try and escape the attic. I love the way you write. I wish I could write this good. You describe things so well and you make the readers feel what they are feeling in each chapter. I wonder what is going to happen when they try to leave. I mean, if they succeed then I guess they will runaway and try to get their life in order. Or they might just caught. I so hope they dont get caught. There is no telling what their grandmother will do to them. I womder how Joyce would take ift if they succeded. Well, anyways! I liked the chapter and I really cant wait till you post again. I wonder what is going to happen! ;) Please post soon! I love it! Lighter
Date: 01/28/2006 - 10:02 pm Title: Chapter Thirty
Great chapter!
Date: 01/28/2006 - 09:49 pm Title: Chapter Thirty
Uhoh! They've reached the point of no return! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 01/28/2006 - 09:11 pm Title: Chapter Thirty
William is now officially freaked out. hehe. Really enjoyed this chapter. Definitely eager to know what is going to happen next.
Date: 01/28/2006 - 08:57 pm Title: Chapter Thirty
Damn..IT's about time they came up with a plan to get out of there.
Very sensual orgasm scene.. : D
Great update!!
Date: 01/28/2006 - 08:38 pm Title: Chapter Thirty
Good that William thinks very hard of ways to get out of the attic now. And William working out some of this tension ;-)
Date: 01/28/2006 - 08:33 pm Title: Chapter Thirty
wow...just wow... excellent chapter!! keep'em coming **lol** pun intended** thanx so much! ;)
Date: 01/28/2006 - 08:33 pm Title: Chapter Thirty
that was quite sensual!
and i like the idea that they are looking for a way to escape. Is their mother going to visit them again? i surely don't miss her...