Date: 09/10/2007 - 01:18 am Title: Chapter Thirty-One
Joyce shows up, and I think she has totally divorced herself from her kids. Sad.
Hmm, denial kids. But that's good that you have Elizabeth watching him masterbate, and Will finds out.
Date: 11/26/2006 - 06:57 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-One
well what can be said about that is Joyce so thick that she thinks her children would just except her back into the fold without saying anything at all
Date: 02/17/2006 - 02:46 am Title: Chapter Thirty-One
They've admitted a lot more than I expected in this chapter. Very good.
Date: 02/14/2006 - 07:51 am Title: Chapter Thirty-One
That bit with Joyce stung, but Elizabeth and Will's conversation. That was priceless, and surprisingly laugh out loud funny. Love watching them try to rationalize this whole situation. So weird, but you've got me sucked in for the long haul. This really is an awesome story.
Date: 02/12/2006 - 07:43 am Title: Chapter Thirty-One
Ahh! I'm glad I found your fic hosted here. It was one of my last tries as I know the one I usually review u at is not up for er, uploading new chapters yet. I hope to read the new chapter soon! :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you found it too! I'm not sure how long AFF is going to be down and I know everyone over there is impatient!! You've all been spoiled by the everyday updates ;)
Date: 02/08/2006 - 11:53 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-One
Oh I love this story! Please update soon!!!
Date: 02/06/2006 - 09:42 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-One
Hmm... Joyce is definitely a contender for "Mommy Dearest" award of the year. Great chapter. I can't wait to see how long the denial will last. Please keep updating.
Date: 02/06/2006 - 04:23 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-One
I loved the ending of this chapter..And i love the banner,it's perfect for this fic..Keep Writing As Good As You Do ;) :P...I've been in from the beginning,and i'm not planning on stop reading ;)...
Date: 02/06/2006 - 06:40 am Title: Chapter Thirty-One
Well momma dearest showed,ingaged and every thing.Living high on the hog,so to speak,all because she wants to help her dear children.Yeah right.Mean while spike confronts Buffy about watching him do his errrr thing.Oh yes the hell they have been living is beginning to catch up with them.Spike spoke very candley and way up front with her,but
buffy is trying to live in the de nail,or should I say swim inthat river.You have written this well,In this scenario what else could happen,right or wrong,we are sexual creatures,and it is going to happen.Spike has no girl friend,Buffy has no boyfriend,so God help them,I find this a non judgmental situation.
Author's Response: This review makes me very happy because I didn't want to rush things with them and just make it a sex story. I really wanted people who may have been put off by the incest to see this a situation where human nature took over. I'm glad it's working.
Date: 02/06/2006 - 04:47 am Title: Chapter Thirty-One
I was so glad to see an update from you!! WellI am not liking Joyce at all she likes her new life better than her old one right now..and I really loved Wills final comment
Date: 02/06/2006 - 03:55 am Title: Chapter Thirty-One
Uh-oh! Things are getting steamy! More soon!
Date: 02/06/2006 - 02:27 am Title: Chapter Thirty-One
GREAT CHAPTER!!! Please update SOON!
Date: 02/06/2006 - 01:01 am Title: Chapter Thirty-One
Great chapter! Could strangle Joyce!! She doesn't care about her kids....why bother to keep coming??
Date: 02/05/2006 - 11:24 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-One
eeeep and the plot thickens...i really hate joyce... there's always a way out...but i think it's just an iceberg... i think that ethan is even more perverse than dru
anyhow...love it... can't wait for more!! thanx
Date: 02/05/2006 - 05:12 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-One
i loved it! im getting frusterated though....they always come so close to more but you keep them further apart. but i understand. that was hott though! more soon please!
Date: 02/05/2006 - 03:23 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-One
I am so freaking happy that you posted!...
Okay! I think that Joyce is as coo coo as her mother! I cant believe she is being this way. I think that she doesnt really want anything to do with her kids and she is enjoying the rich life. (Am I wrong?) I am totally happy that William is on Buffy's side and that she finally told Joyce off! Great Chapter! I DID expect there to be spuffy, but... I like it! I cant wait for you to post ! Lighter
Date: 02/05/2006 - 02:57 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-One
Oooh boy...that was intense with Mother. You're making me want to go and get Flowers in the Attic, ya know. Not to compare/contrast, but just to see how far they actually went in the book..that does sound like compare/contrast then, doens't it? LOL. Well, it's different in a book like that, more taboo than creating a story here if you will.
What I'm trying to say is that I love this story and I get so excited when I see its been updated. The UST is KILLING me but I know that when it finally does happen, it's going to be explosive and well worth the wait. :) Great job.
Author's Response: You don't know how hard it is for me to hold back on buying the book. I haven't read it in over 15 years, but writing this has made me want to revisit. I made a promise to myself though that I would wait until I was done writing the story b/c I don't want to lift the plot too closely and since I'm going on memory now I figure it's working. But once I'm done with this - I'm so reading it again!! I would love for you to wait too b/c I'm sure the book is much better LOL!
Date: 02/05/2006 - 02:13 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-One
It sounds like Joyce has a bit more Dru in her than was first in evidence. It is telling that she wasn't bothered by Dawn and Connor's reaction. One wonders if she going to come back for them after marrying Wes or will she not want to muck up her new life. Will and Liz are back on de-nile. I am anxious to see if it lasts. Good chapter.
Date: 02/05/2006 - 12:10 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-One
Seems as if Buffy too is suffering under the UST. ;-) Oops.. Elisabeth got caught by William. And they are very good at pretending nothing had happened. ~ So Joyce is there again. She forgot to wish William a happy birthday... My impression? Joyce doesn't really care about her kids. Buffy is right; she would have been worried if seeing the twins. ~ Buffy and William talked now but they are still on the plane to ignore everything. Wonder where it will end. Will they be capable to flee? Would be the best.
Date: 02/05/2006 - 10:32 am Title: Chapter Thirty-One
lol buffy does have great wit, surprise seeing Joyce coming back and cant wait to see what happens in the next chapter! tara
Date: 02/05/2006 - 09:41 am Title: Chapter Thirty-One
What a great chapter. Great start with William catching Elizabeth watching him. The confrontation between Elizabeth and Joyce was just fantastic. Loved Elizabeth's rage and Joyce's 'less than sane' response. We can really see William's determination to do what has to be done to get out of the attic. Also enjoyed the last conversation. It's really interesting to see Elizabeth and William trying to deal with the growing sexual tension, especially now that they are acknowledging it to each other. Really looking forward to more.
Date: 02/05/2006 - 08:35 am Title: Chapter Thirty-One
Just when you think the sexual tension couldn't get any worse...You manage to crank it up a notch.. Wow!
Poor Buffy..Joyce deserves to have her ass kicked..
Great update!
Date: 02/05/2006 - 08:25 am Title: Chapter Thirty-One
Thanks for the update! Wow, things are getting pretty heated between the two of them. Wonder who will be the first one to crack and make a move?