Date: 03/26/2009 - 11:18 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Three
I'll be honest... I'm both squicked out and turned on.... and squicked at myself for being turned on... its not like I didnt know this was coming but actually reading it is something different.... the fact they were rollplaying helped for sure... really well written though and really brave for turning the subject matter into something that doesnt seem wrong...
Date: 09/10/2007 - 01:27 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Three
bad dogs. and oh, Will wanted to stop and he was crying. Nice touch.
Date: 02/17/2006 - 03:03 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Three
They finally gave in. But pretending to be other people. That does make it easier to accept, doesn't it?
Date: 02/17/2006 - 01:00 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Three
Now that's what I call a cliffhanger! Holy hell, woman, I kinda hate you right now! lol. That was a fantastic chap. Really great flow with the action of both kinds...
Date: 02/16/2006 - 09:18 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Three
So no escape over the roof.. as long as the dogs are there. Uh-huh... Buffy doesn't want William to stop here? Looking forward to the new chapter and find out if she'll change her mind :)
Date: 02/16/2006 - 04:53 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Three
Jennybean, I just reserved a copy of "Flowers in the Attic". You have me so hooked that I am dying to reread VC Andrews book (I read it YEARS ago) and don't really remember it that well so I'm going to pick it up after work today and read it over the weekend!!!!!!!!!! Please update soon!
Author's Response: I read it years ago too - I'm trying to wait to read it again until I'm finished so it's not close to the actual plot. You'll have to let me know how I'm doing in comparison to the book.
Date: 02/15/2006 - 11:51 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Three
I love how you turned Beth into Buffy!!! I wondered what you were going to do about that!
Date: 02/15/2006 - 09:38 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Three
Out of curiosity, how big is William's penis supposed to be? Yes I am such a perve :P
Date: 02/15/2006 - 09:32 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Three
OH. MY. GOD. You are so so bad for leaving it there! Please update soon!!
Date: 02/15/2006 - 08:42 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Three
Hey Jennybean! I hope I didnt forget to review for the last chapter(s). I love this fic so much! Okay.. I am so glad that they are finally trying to get out of the house! I wonder what is going to happen because there are guards outside of the house. I cant believe you left off there!!!! You Tease!!! Please post soon! I beg you! :)
Whitelighter
Date: 02/15/2006 - 08:07 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Three
Whoah!"That took my breath away.First the close call of almost getting cought..And then will saying tell me to stop Elizabeth,and her words don't call me that,I don't want to be your sister tonight!"WoW and I do mean WOW.Buffy" as his lips crashed into hers.God Update soon,this is so HOT!"
Date: 02/15/2006 - 04:56 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Three
Oh man amazing chapter!! First there was action with them trying to escape, then there was suspense cause we didnt know if they were going to get caught or not... then after he cleans her wound we get into the touchy feely portion... I likey!!!! Keep up the great work!!
-Ashley-
(McChick)
Date: 02/15/2006 - 01:37 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Three
katakata, I was also wondering about her wearing or not wearing a bra - but it sounds as though she wasn't since there was no mention of him taking it off before caressing her breast.
Author's Response: I responded to katakata too, but you're right, she wasn't wearing a bra. There was a line abour her being left topless which is where I was Itrying to allude that she was not wearing a bra.
Date: 02/15/2006 - 01:32 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Three
Jennybean, I have love/hate feelings toward you....love you for this brilliant story but hate you at the same time for getting me so hooked that I check back several times a day for updates!
Thank you once again for a FABULOUS chapter, I am eagerly awaiting the next one!!!
Date: 02/15/2006 - 12:55 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Three
WOW! Please update soon!
Date: 02/15/2006 - 11:24 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Three
Wow is all I can say. As a true fan of the original series of the Dollanganger family I want you to know that this story is amazing. How you've weaved it is truly inspiring to any writer. I love Buffy and I love Flowers in the Attic, and you've made the story melt together so well....Bravo is really all I can think of. Please please continue with it!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much - it's good to know I'm not mangling the book or the show! I had this in my head for over a year before I finally wrote it, but I was thinking of that book and thought it would be perfect in the Buffyverse. And I was suprised that no one had thought of it already - I had to do it!
Date: 02/15/2006 - 08:16 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Three
I was rec-ed this fic the other day and I spent alot of time yesterday reading the whole thing. I *adore* it! Please carry on writing it and update soon.
Date: 02/15/2006 - 06:14 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Three
you are evil with your cliff hangers. evil evil evil. more more more! hahaha. love the story.
Date: 02/15/2006 - 05:52 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Three
Oh and PS- was Elizabeth not wearing a bra?
Author's Response: Nope no bra. I figured since Will woke her up and the twins were sleeping she'd just change into what Will gave her without putting on undergarments assuming she sleeps braless (I know I do).
Date: 02/15/2006 - 05:50 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Three
Dang! Good update...bugger about the dogs though I guess they'll just have to get creative with getting around them. Great cliffie ending and what a stroke of genius with him calling her Buffy right at the end there. Maybe playing their alter egos will allow them to evade the moral dilemma they're facing with their mutual attraction. Poor poor things. Please let them find a way out soon!
Date: 02/15/2006 - 05:28 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Three
You terrible, terrible tease! I love this story so much! Nearly getting caught, hot nurse Spike and injured Buffy! And the touching and the kiss...I need more!
Date: 02/15/2006 - 05:28 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Three
There had better be some more to finish off that Valentine's gift! Ooh booy, thing's are getting intense. Seriously though, some more would be great!
Date: 02/15/2006 - 05:02 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Three
AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!! I love you and hate you at the same time!!!! How could you leave it at such an awesome part?!?!?!?! Please update soon!!!! Do you know when you will put the next chapter up?!?!?
Date: 02/15/2006 - 04:48 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Three
I guess they're all gonna be cliffhangers now. And this one, right on the possible eve of something deeply forbidden and potentially, very hot. I'm so glad there was a suprise update tonight. I so love this story. Can't wait for the next update.
Date: 02/15/2006 - 04:28 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Three
OMG!!! you're evil...definitely!!! arrgggg lol... wonderful, terrific chapter!!! poor spuffy...i really feel for them...for everything, the UST, the attic, their mother... excellent chapter... really hope ...begging here...you update soon!!! thanx!