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Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2007 - 01:41 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

I love the line from the show about it being bent and making her scream. And I love how Buffy was thinking about how she trusts William, and knew he would be loving and caring as a first sex partner should be. The sex was hot! And William sounded like Spike, all passionate and sexy. warm seed, which is a nice touch, since Spike has cold seed. And I like the last paragraph, esp. the "he flashed a shy smile before squeezing my hand in support." That was nice, they weren't going to sweep it under the rug.

Reviewer: Silvy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2006 - 10:51 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

Lucky me! I found this page... after reading the chapters you posted on aff... And I wanted more!
I also read the books (except the "last/first one") many years ago... and it's great seeing the characters I kew so well, when I was young, as Buffy and Spike...

Please, update soon. Good work!
Thanks

Reviewer: Burnz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/24/2006 - 09:59 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

The scene was well done. Now that the inevitable has occured I am anxious to see how they handle it.

Reviewer: JenxGeR Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/23/2006 - 03:40 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

*GUH* Hot. After waiting for 33 chapters, us readers have finally been awarded! Lol *fans herself* I don't like to think of incest because I have an elder brother, but anything with Spuffy in it does it for me lol.

I can't say much but wow. This is one of the few stories that I read from WIP and continues to check for updates daily. I've always enjoyed works from talented writers :)

Please update soon, thanks!

Rgds,
Jen

Reviewer: 3988Akasha Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2006 - 05:22 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

Finally they get it on! Now, will Dru find out and beat them both senseless, or will they fight back? I gotta know how the fall out in the harsh light of day leaves our two lovers. Update soon!

Reviewer: Anne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2006 - 04:58 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Just as I expected more chapters filled with excellency! Keep it up, I'm loving it 8D (the book to i might add =D)

Reviewer: Burnz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2006 - 08:46 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

I was surprised to see that Buffy was the one pushing for actual intercourse (instead of hedging around with other forms of gratification). Brave writing on your part and well done. I don't know what the poor dears will do for birth control once they figure out the dangers if they continue in this way. I look forward to your next update. :)

Reviewer: Samantha Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2006 - 12:16 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

Jennybean, I finished the book. It was sad at the end but I'm glad they finally got out of the attic. I think I'll get the other books to the Dollanganger series and reread those as well, don't remember what happens in the rest of that series!

On another note, I liked the part of your story when Elizabeth giggled at William's cock because it was "bent." I remember on the show after Buffy/Spike slept together she was acting all bitchy and said to him, "Oh you're bent!" and Spike replied, "Yeah and it made you scream didn't it?" LOL loved that you incorprated that into your HOT SEX SCENE!!! :D

I can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: Wow, you read that really quick! I read the other books as well and remember Petals on the Wind was good (I will probably do a sequel based on that one) and If There Be Thorns was pretty good too. Seeds of Yesterday was terrible and I never even read Garden of Shadows, the prequel, b/c I was so disappointed with Seeds of Yesterday.

Reviewer: nikki_chinger Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2006 - 07:06 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

LUVED IT!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!

Reviewer: Rae Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2006 - 02:52 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

K, wow. Just.... WOW.

*whines* why can't I write like you? Sex scenes always stump me, and you write them like a freakin' pro! *pouts*

***“Yeah?” He said tilting his head and bringing his tongue to his teeth. “Don’t make fun.” He knelt between my legs and brought his hands to the waistband of my pants. “It’s gonna make you scream later.” ***


Heh. Well, he sure got one thing right!

Awesome chapter. I loved it, and I am anxiously waiting for more. And thank God that this differs so much from the bloody book. I know you probably won't answer me cuz you're the author, and HEY, gotta keep some secrets, but it can't hurt to ask anyway: will we be graced with a happy ending?

Keep it up, you rock!

Author's Response: Well, they will get out. That's happy, right?

Author's Response: Thank you for your encouragement with the writing of the sex scene. This was really my first one and there was so much build up to it that I was suffering from severe performance anxiety. I'm glad I pulled it off anyway. As for the happy ending, they do get out. That's happy, right?

Reviewer: Bekah Leigh Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2006 - 01:54 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

Beautifully written. I like that, while William is insecure about what happened, he isn't pushing Elizabeth away... not yet, anyway

Reviewer: Samolly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2006 - 01:37 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

That was so HOT, HOT, HOT!!!!!!!
I knew it would go there eventually, but this was beyond my wildest expectations. And I LOVE the Spike/Buffy angle!

Reviewer: flibble Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2006 - 09:23 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

Yay!!! That was so worth the wait. You did a fantastic job. Now I'm dying to see what will happen next. How will they handle this new development.

Reviewer: Steph Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2006 - 05:25 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

Very hot chapter.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2006 - 04:09 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

Wow! Was that Hot!! Looking forward to what happens next!

Reviewer: Samantha Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2006 - 03:01 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

OMG! Amazing. Thank you so much for the update. That was so HOT!

Jennybean, my friend lent me the movie and I watched it last night; it wasn't great. They did a good job of casting the roles but otherwise I was not too impressed.

I have also started reading the book again after all these years and to be honest, so far it's been pretty boring, hope it picks up soon!

Thanks again for the update and have a great weekend hon!

Author's Response: Yes, the movie is not that good. I remember when it first came out that I was so excited, but then they never even touched on the incest, which is a major part of the story. You could maybe get some hints of it if you had read the book, but you had to reach. I do take some elements from the movie though because to be honest I don't remember what parts are in the movie and what parts are in the book. They kind of blend together since I haven't read/seen either of them in a long time. I know in the book too they were in the attic for a long time - I think 4 years, and I think she was only 12 & he 14. I started them off older so we could get to the UST sooner :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2006 - 12:34 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

Oh, they really did it :) But they'll get a bit of a problem.. at last in 9 month. They won't get able to get birth control items from their grandma. I don't think she'll allow that. I wonder where it will go from here.... they are still on the attic.

Reviewer: SusieDaSpikeSlayer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2006 - 12:11 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

I support you 100%...keep up the awesome job of this kick ass story...its all you girl!!

Reviewer: Megan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2006 - 06:32 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

I really thought I wouldn't like this, but it's sucked me in so bad. Looking forward to some more lusty badness. More more more!!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2006 - 05:17 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

The bit of them role playing was brilliant, and to make them be Buffy and Spike, was a stroke of genius. Not quite sure I want details regarding the feild hockey stick, tho... Such a marvelous and tender moment, and I just wonder what they're gonna do when it comes time to think about it later. Well worth the wait. Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Irishwoman39 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2006 - 05:07 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

That was so dam Hot.Now what reality is waiting for them.

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2006 - 04:44 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

I need a cold shower now...thanks... lol

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2006 - 04:26 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

First of all..Wow..That was pretty intense...Especially with all the buildup..But, Uh Oh..This is not a good thing. Stating the obvious here..but they ARE brother and sister. I know in the book this is based on they really were brother and sister..but I wish somehow it could come to light that they are NOT brother and sister. Don't ask me how that would work..

I'm not flinching from this story..Just out of affection for these characters and the consequences that could happen..I want it to work out for them! The book was good..but what happened to the characters SUCKED! They were never completely happy even after escaping the attic...always in love with one another, but unable to act on it. I want a happier ending for these two. * lip is sticking out here*
Ok..I'm sorry..This is your story..and I will continue to enjoy it no matter what you have planned for it..
As usual, looking forward to more!

Author's Response: I share your feelings and want a happy ending too, but I love complicated relationships. It's part of the reason that I loved this series when I first read it and why I love the Spuffy relationship. It's so screwy, but you know that they're perfect together if they could just get over a few issues. You just can't help but route for them.

Reviewer: katakata Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2006 - 03:20 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

Oh my...they've certainly crossed the Rubicon haven't they? There's no turning back now so here's to some movement onward and upwards ~crosses her fingers~. The thing that troubles me though (issues of morality aside seeing as how their circumstances are so decidedly ABNORMAL) is the issue of protection. Being virgins and with only limited experience of other sexual activities there's no obvious cause for them to worry about disease. And thank goodness for that small mercy seeing as how neither Dru nor Joyce seem to think the children require any medical attention beyond what they can provide for themselves - the right pair of COWS! ~Grrr...aargh~ But what of potential pregnancy? That would certainly make their already difficult situation even more precarious!! Can't wait for the next update 8-)

Reviewer: marstersgirl13 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2006 - 03:07 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

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