Date: 09/10/2007 - 01:48 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Five
I forgot how there were no dogs in the book. Oh, hot, taking her like that. I'm surprised Will was able to keep up the charade, since he should remember Spike woudn't have a reflection.
Date: 03/01/2006 - 04:00 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Five
Just read this one through to ch 35 in one go and couldn't put it down. I'd read the book a long time ago, and wasn't sure whether I wanted to read it in fanfic, but you'e done a suberb job adapting it to B/S and I'm enjoying it very much. Wonderful story. Please update soon..
Date: 02/28/2006 - 10:45 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Five
I read this morning but hat no time to review properly. Neither I do now. Loved the chapter and looking forward to the next one. Seems to get interesting.. is someone pregnant?
Date: 02/28/2006 - 09:07 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Five
i can't wait for the next chapter! I'm dying to see how their conversation is going to go!
Date: 02/28/2006 - 06:55 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Five
I love this story. Can't wait for the talk! You are doing a great job! Keep up the great work.
Date: 02/28/2006 - 05:45 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Five
Great chapter! Looking forward to the next update!
Date: 02/28/2006 - 11:44 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Five
Hi Jennybean!
This chapter was excellent - loved it!
Please update soon.
PS. I am currently reading Petals on the Wind - so far it's really good!
Date: 02/28/2006 - 08:02 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Five
Way to go Elizabeth. It's good to see her being proactive about their need to talk after her apparent recalcitrance for the last couple of weeks. But oh no...she's late? At her age it could be nothing I suppose. Stress, dietary imbalance and all manner of factors can make one irregular. Heck my period has never been dependable! Still - it doesn't bode well and will hopefully give them something to think about (as if they don't have enough on their plates already). ~crosses her fingers for the poor things~
Date: 02/28/2006 - 05:18 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Five
Oh no, I hope she's not pregnant. That would just be the worst luck imaginable. Loved this chapter though. Now that William's had a taste he's obviously finding sex irresistable. Poor Elizabeth doesn't stand a chance. : )
Date: 02/28/2006 - 05:07 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Five
That was so damn sexy. I'm not familiar with the books this is based off of, so I really don't know what to expect. All I know is this is hot and I'm coming back for more.
Date: 02/28/2006 - 04:58 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Five
You are evil!"Just hanging us up and let us dangel with yet another cliffhanger..So mean.There are so many unanswered quistion.And the big one,is buffy pregent?// Can't wait for the big Talk.Please don't make us wait as long as you did the last time.ok!"
Date: 02/28/2006 - 04:37 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Five
Whoa that was quite a quickie (that was so rudely interrupted) Spike and Buffy had going. I wonder if the new plan is much better than the old one as they both involve going out where the dogs are. Ah the talk.,,,I wonder what William will say. Good chapter.
Date: 02/28/2006 - 04:18 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Five
YAY!!!! I was just about to email you and see if everything was ok. (aka When the hell are you going to post the next chpter!) :) I am really liking the way its turning out. I must say that I am glad that they are finally planning to break out of the house. But something tells me that it isnt going to be cake! I definately like how you have them acting as Spike and Buffy. Are they going to mold into these people? I sure hope so! :) .... I was thinking about their relationship and all of their *encounters*, Buffy and Spike (William and Elizabeth) are having unprotected sex. It would be so cool (in kind of a messed up way!) if they escape and she is pregnant and they have to try and keep their family together! LOL! Look at me! Your the Author! I absolutely and completely loved it! Please post Soon! Lighter
p.s. Dont worry about the wait thing, its worth it!
Date: 02/28/2006 - 04:11 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Five
First of all..Will became very .......scary for a bit there..demanding...cocky.....strong. In other words, Spike like. Seems like he is becoming more like his alter ego.
Now..Guess I saw the possible pregnancy thing a mile away. I am on pins and needles to find out how Will is going to react. to the talk.. I imagine he is going to be upset..but I won't know untill you update........*hint, hint* lol : D
Really great chapter..EAGERLY awaiting the next!
Date: 02/28/2006 - 04:07 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Five
Oh man that chapter was worth the wait!! Not only did we have a little intense Spike and Buffy action, but we got more details in to the 'getting out' plan, which I am liking a lot!! The talk that Elizabeth has with William should be an interesting one and I can't wait for the next chapter!! Keep up the amazing work please!!
-Ashley-
Date: 02/28/2006 - 03:58 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Five
aHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! YOU NEED TO UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!
Date: 02/28/2006 - 03:38 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Five
Love the beginning, at the dance bar. Spike all seducing of Buffy, and that terrible unfulfillment because of a close call. Another terrible part of their reality. Heart breaking, but oh, so relevant. And that little bit about her period... yet another hitch in the plan? And that conversation they're about to have, hope you update soon! Really loving this one. Thanks for sharing.
Date: 02/28/2006 - 02:40 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Five
Thanks for the update. Great chapter. I hope the talk ends with sexy results.
Date: 02/28/2006 - 02:33 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Five
that was a great chapter! is buffy ever going to confront him about not using protection?
please update soon!