ah, I know Will wants Elizabeth, and it seems like a slap in the face that she wants another man. But the stories for the twins sound good.

im in love with this story!!
i really hope you can update soon!!

I absolutely love this story. I wish you updated more often...I'm so anxious to see what happens next

Author's Response: Sorry for the lack of updates lately. Work has been very hectic. It seems to be slowing down lately, but it may be the calm before the storm. I'm trying to write as many chapters as I can while it's a little slow!

Wow! This story is amazing. I love your charcter development. I'm really enjoying this. Hope you update soon.

This was a really nice chapter. Took us back to that sweet, tender, loving relationship between Elizabeth and William. The lines for William/Spike and Elizabeth/Buffy definitely blurred here, which you handled beautifully. I'm so glad Elizabeth isn't pregnant. They certainly have enough to deal with already. This was also the first time you've mentioned what the future might hold for them in the outside world which was interesting. We all know they won't be able to continue their realtionship once they leave the attic and that will be heartbreaking for them both. I'm interested to know how you'll handle it and dreading it at the same time.

Author's Response: It'll be different when they get out of the attic, but I may still have some tricks up my sleeve for a happy ending :)

Awesome job on this chapter! Can't wait for more!

So Elisabeth got her period. That's good because she isn't pregnant then. But Will seems to feel deep for her; deeper then a brother should. Because he's hurt because Elisabeth speaks about getting married, having children. And not with him. I wonder if they'll ever be able to escape ... and what will happen after that.

I really like the way you are building this story. I also like that you have continued to write a story and you haven't focused solely on the sex. You are doing a great job weaving the story. You have me captivated. Always looking forward to more!

Author's Response: I'm glad you are liking it. I really wanted to build to the story and their relationship before jumping into the sext. Now that they've had it though, they're going to be having it more often. They're stuck in an attic - what else are they going to do? I've still got a lot of story to tell though too (around the sex of course.)

Yay, update! I love this story. Having both the Spike and William character in the same person at the same time, is genius.

Oh this chapter was very nice in the way that Elizabeth was able to get some of her fears out and Will was able to help comfort her. I could feel Will's hurt though when she said she wanted to be married and have a baby cause she cant have that with him... but I guess thats the downfall of falling for your sibling. Loved this chapter, cant wait for the next one!

-Ashley-

Yeah..I can see where this is leading for sure...or I should say, already there. WIll was in pain just thinking about Elizabeth with someone else...Where, oh, where are they going to end up emotionally?

BTW...Though you are borrowing the idea of this story, you are doing a great job of making it your own. I haven't said anything before...but I have read everything that has ever been put out by VC Andrews...I read the Flowers in the Attic series when I was just a pre-teen. ( This was when VC Andrews was still alive too) lol Anyway, anyone out there interested in the older VC Andrews series books...Try the HEAVEN series...It too was an excellent series : )

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I haven't read it in so long that I really was hoping I wasn't following the book exactly. I'm glad you think so too. I've never read any other series by her, but maybe I'll check out the Heaven series when I'm done.

I hope they're finally able to get out of that blasted attic. Ijust hope you end the story a little differently than the movie. That always bothered me.